I Was Knocked Unconscious During the College Entrance Examination, and When I Woke up I Became a Literary Leader

The tragic story is well written. As said on the Internet, the plot is poor, but the writing is really good when it comes to the sad parts. Let's talk about the poisonous point. The protagonist's mind cannot be controlled by his family members when he travels through time at the age of 30. The moment he is abandoned by his family, the adult's thinking should be to abandon this family relationship directly. Secondly. Does the protagonist insist on publishing a work after the age of 18, 100 million? Can't it be sent in advance? Make yourself so embarrassed. There is also a pain point that is essential for good writing. Everyone will revolve around the protagonist, but it is more serious in this book.

It's great. This is adapted from the author's personal experience. It just uses some artistic processing to tell the story of the author's family life as a child and uses a time-travel shell.

Although there are some logical bugs, such as reading the diary, not reading it all, insisting on leaving it, reading one every two days; there was a car accident, and without confirming the actual situation at the scene, I started to think that the protagonist was dead, and then read the diary, but the flaws are not hidden, the author will update soon!

It is told in a "trivial" narrative, plain yet touching. In the field of known copywriting, this article can be rated as the best. The screenwriter is very humane. As the saying goes, "It's not necessarily better when you are young." Once you become addicted to love, you will lose your soul [Thinking]

The subject matter is very novel. The way the male protagonist writes his diary makes the article appear less abrupt and more natural. I hope the author can work hard.

I have an idea, how about sending the male protagonist's parents in [laughing evilly]

I have read a lot of books on Tomato, but I have been too lazy to comment. As a long-time book fan, I read many books and then changed to the next one, but I stayed up all night and cried because of this book. As a new author, the emotions in this book are sincere and touching, the diary format is novel, and the poems and prose in it can be well integrated with the situation. Although the logic has some loopholes and the characterization is a bit single, it deserves a high score overall because true feelings are the most touching. Become a book fan starting today, and I hope the author will continue to work hard. I also hope to become an excellent writer.

After reading the comment section, many people read it again, which really makes me feel guilty. People like me can't read it the first time and need to read it again. Brothers, this book not only does not deviate from the theme, but also describes the most beautiful fantasy of an ordinary and confident person. Come and read it with me.

It's so well written that it would make me feel very unhappy if more people didn't review this. The pleasure of seeing half of it smoothed out the wrinkles in my brain, like a drowned fish hitting the water. It's a shame that only so many people have read this book. In the end, it's like a piece of shift that makes people want to evaluate it after seeing it.

It's so irritating. I've finished reading and the main character is still in the ICU. I hope Jiang Hao doesn't steal the notebook and copy poems later. Normally, this diary should be protected by the department [laughter]

It's my first time to read this type of book, I think it's good, It travels to a time and space where culture is lacking, and uses all kinds of ancient classics to show off. The protagonist becomes famous while lying down, and gets rich instantly. It's a really cool story. I don't understand why so many men in the comment area gave negative reviews. It's really well written, especially using Butterfly Lovers to refer to the missed love between the male and female protagonists, and Nezha to refer to the bond between the protagonist and his eccentric parents. It's very good. The preface to Prince Teng's Pavilion and the Lushan Waterfall are used to revitalize cultural tourism. This is the first time I've seen this. Feeling very good

It's a very good book. The author has a lot of ideas. The protagonist doesn't have much subjective role in the first few chapters. After that, the protagonist is almost portrayed from the side. Although the writing style is relatively immature and a few plots are more deliberate, but overall it is very enjoyable and comfortable to read. It is still a new book. The plot will probably be that the protagonist will wake up and then unfold. I look forward to the author's update.

The writing is so good, everyone helps each other, and the protagonist is also wandering around writing poems, great👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

It's good to read. This book is very good to read. The plot is described very carefully, especially when Xiao Yan fights against Tang San and Luo Feng fights against Sadako. It's really loud with gongs, drums, firecrackers, red flags and huge crowds of people [laughing]

How to say it? It's really cool. The plot is also pretty good. But that's all. It's a bit too formulaic. I feel like I've seen many kinds of parents favoring another child. It's too formulaic, but overall it's okay

Wow wow wow, it's so good. Will the protagonist wake up at the end [laughs awkwardly]

The writing is particularly awesome. Your diary has its own seal. You must open it page by page and read it, and it must be opened in public.

The writing is really good, using the diary as a clue to promote the progress of the article. To be honest, the pace of the first twenty or thirty chapters is slow, and I was anxious. However, I rarely encountered an article that I was interested in. I still insisted on reading. I felt that I could describe the environment and details more. When I went to the ten-square-meter room of the protagonist, I just said that the room was very small, with no windows, and only a simple desk, chair, and bed. I didn't talk about what the desk was like. What does the chair look like? Is it made of wood? Are there any patterns on the surface? How is the status? What about the bed? How are the sheets and quilts on the bed? What about floors walls ceilings? Is there anything piled up on the desk? Where are all the things piled up? Many places lack description

Sure enough, when we write about wealth and wealth, we don't feel much prosperity and beauty, only the same words; when we write about suffering, each one is independent and unique, each has its own suffering, bitter to the soul and deep to the bones.

The writing was okay, but the way it was written, I felt that the protagonist was not like a literary star, but like a lone star of evil spirits [face covering]. Everyone who cared about him and liked him died, but on the contrary, those who abandoned him and left him all lived, and they all died for themselves [laughing and crying]

I'll give it four stars first. If the protagonist wakes up later and is still with Jiang Tianhua's family, I'll change it later. . .

Oh! No no no no no! After reading the comment section and saying it didn't look good, I was undoubtedly angry! [Angry][Angry] I took a look at it myself, it's really indescribably beautiful! I think it looks good when I see it, it makes me feel good-looking when I see it, it makes me think it looks good when I look at it, and it makes my brain look good when I see it. It makes my brain look better when I see it. I must make it look better when I see it, so I commented that it should look better so that you can all watch it with peace of mind...

I also grew up with my grandma for 27 years. My grandma passed away a month ago. I didn't cry on the day she left. I was afraid that she would be upset when she saw me crying. I finished reading this novel in tears. It was very touching! I regret clicking into this novel tonight. I hope the author will update it more!

The plot is compact, realistic, complete and thought-provoking, but the pace of the story is too slow. There are not many third-person off-site descriptions of the city from the protagonist's subjective perspective. It creates a protagonist who lacks love but is not pedantic. There should be more stories in the future about the protagonist's subjective perspective using the system to reach the top of his life. It's best to speed up the awakening plot and not add too much foreshadowing.

If you want to read a pure and refreshing novel, you can go. I can only say that some of the plot routines are terrible, and the tear-jerking part is still okay (and this book is a sad story) (this book should be finished soon, if the author does not write a miracle that makes the protagonist live a few more years) It feels like the author wrote all the sad parts at night. He thought up the plot during the day and wrote the sad parts at night.

It's true that words can convey emotions. As a grown man, I cried while reading this. It's very well written. Most of the left-behind children felt sad. I used to be the same. At that time, I really wanted to grow up and make money by myself. It makes me sad when I think about it.

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There really isn't much writing with this kind of structure and it's hard to control, but the author is very good. Please update.

It makes people angry, I can't do this alone

I hope it won't be so delayed later.