After Dressing up as a Cold Fairy, the Plot Collapsed

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It seems okay at the moment, but there are too few, the progress is slow, and there is very little interaction between the male and female protagonists. I hope to write more in the future. In the end, I just don't want a harem. I am really afraid that you will imitate the fighting style. After all, it was a work more than ten years ago. If you change your marriage, it is best to be pure love.

The author is a genius who writes about the transformation of sex. Fast forward to Wenren Zhaoxue who was confused, stiff, paralyzed, numb, painful, sour, bloated, stuffy, blocked, exhausted, tired, sleepy, tired, impatient, annoyed, panicked, palpitating, cowardly, afraid, fearful, sad, afraid. Sorrow, Dharma sorrow, Dharma sadness, Dharma anger, Dharma anger, Dharma hatred, Dharma resentment, Dharma regret, Dharma shame, Dharma shame, Dharma astringency, Dharma stagnation, Dharma sinking, Dharma heavy, Dharma deficiency, Dharma weakness, Dharma decline, Dharma exhaustion, Dharma cold, Dharma cold, Dharma hard, Dharma tree, Dharma dullness, Dharma ignorance, Dharma dullness, Dharma dazzle, Dharma confusion, Dharma suffering, Fa burn, Fa thorn, Fa paralysis, Fa soft, Fa float, Fa dry, Fa dry, Fa crack, Fa broken, Fa damage, Fa injury, Fa disease, Fa disease, Fa coward, Fa humble, Fa Shuang, Fa numb, Fa pain, Fa sore, Fa swelling, Fa stuffy, Fa blockage, Fa fatigue, Fa tiredness, Fa sleepiness, Fa fatigue, Fa restlessness, Fa irritation , Dharma panic, Dharma palpitation, Dharma timidity, Dharma fear, Dharma fear, Dharma sadness, Dharma sadness, Dharma worry, Dharma worry, Dharma anger, Dharma annoyance, Dharma hate, Dharma resentment, Dharma regret, Dharma shame, Dharma shame, Dharma astringency, Dharma stagnation, Dharma heavy, Dharma heavy, Dharma empty, Dharma weak, Dharma decline, Dharma exhaustion, Dharma standing, Dharma sitting, Dharma lying down

Very nice. Especially the protagonist's change of state of mind, from being panicked and hiding in the mountains at the beginning, to taking the initiative to go down the mountain and experiencing life, to finally breaking up and standing up again and determined to fight, and started to take the initiative to tell the male protagonist the fate. I really liked how this transformation was written. There are two points that I am more concerned about in the plot: first, it takes ordinary people down the mountain to experience, and second, when the plot of the original book (which refers to the protagonist) is close to the end of the fight, the character Xiao Qian is created. His surname is Xiao, and he also has a spiritual fire. However, readers know that he is not the protagonist, and his family has actions that endanger the protagonist's sect. Personally, I feel a little uncomfortable with it. I know that may not be what the author wants to express, but it does give me a feeling of Yin Yang Dou Po, especially since the protagonist in the previous article has always been very good in character and very close to Dou Po (which makes me feel that the author likes Dou Po very much). Suddenly, it made me feel a bit disconnected in my senses. Just personal feelings.

It's so delicious. It's the first time I've seen such a delicious break-up story. The emotional development of the male and female protagonists is also very normal, and the characters are all vivid. It's great, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is still relatively cold now, and there are too few. I hope this book doesn't have eunuchs and will definitely become popular if it continues.

Very nice! It's just that there's a bit of water in the middle. There's too little emotional drama between the male and female protagonists. Isn't this the type of movie that people want to watch? I really can't help it. How long will it take for this to happen? There are so many male and female protagonists in the update who have made so little progress? How much water does this require? If it weren't for the previous review, I really wouldn't want to give it a single star.

A slow-paced book is like an old friend telling a story. Chapter 52 is one of my favorite chapters of Tomato Emotions that I have read. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is slightly sweet but has endless aftertaste! They care about each other but don't know it. I really recommend reading at least 52 chapters. Chapters 60-66 are probably the retreat point of a slow-paced book. I scanned it casually the first time, but it was so confusing that I just didn't understand it. I only understood the meaning after reading it word for word a second time. Fortunately, it won't take long, and I think I can leave the secret realm today. As long as you read the first chapter in one sitting, you won't find any problems with him! Good-looking, very good-looking, super good-looking!

●First of all, book reviews are inevitably influenced by personal experiences and feelings. If you don't agree, I hope you don't leave a message to refute, just ignore it [The following content contains some spoilers] ① to ④ are detoxification points, and the rest are generally advantages. ①The author of this book is quite quick-thinking. The first part is good, but after the current forty or fifty chapters, some plots are skipped. Although I can understand it, I don't think there is a particularly smooth transition. ② A common problem in most online novels is that for some key plots to be inexplicably arranged, is it currently possible to take a human with no cultivation with you to go out and experience it? (She has a special identity for this human, which you will understand later on, but at the beginning with her, the reason really felt unconvincing ③ This is not recommended for those who like slow-paced movies. The current update content is relatively slow in the first half so far, but the rest is like a speed changer. A lot of things are skipped at once. ④After seeing what the author has said personally, it is only the content of the first volume, so it is estimated that this novel will be a medium-length novel, so an inevitable problem with most medium-length novels is that it is too confusing to read and the outline is confusing. I am taking a wait-and-see attitude towards the subsequent development? ⑤ This article does not have much of an AI flavor, and it is most likely handwritten by the author. ⑤The best type of emotional flow on the theme of changing marriage, especially the first half, is unsurprisingly pure love ⑥The growth line in the middle of the heroine is a bit nice. I feel that the author suddenly burst out with writing power in those few pictures. I don't recommend skipping chapters in the early stage. Those few pictures are very touching. ⑦The heroine accepted it more smoothly, and did not deliberately emphasize that it was better than most marriage changes. Finally, as of June 10th, this book has no major poisonous points. I have tasted all the updated contents so far. Overall, it is a novel about changing marriages with no flaws. I hope the author can adjust the story promotion rate. If there is anything you need to add, you can tell me.

It's very interesting. Whether it's the female protagonist or the male protagonist, their character, temperament and overall character, this article is really well written and very delicate. It's rare to find such novels with a protagonist who has a very positive outlook on life. Xiao Lu doesn't have the common arrogant character of Long Aotian. Even if he meets the heroine again after being divorced, he doesn't have the plot in other novels that you broke off my engagement and lost my face, so I must revenge you severely. Instead, he has a very rational character who will save the heroine even if he sees her dying when the hatred is still there. ; And the heroine does not have the long and meaningless psychological description of the initial period of changing from male to female that makes people feel mentally exhausted in traditional transformation literature, nor does she accept everything about a body that is incompatible with her previous body for no reason. All her abilities are slowly explored and grown step by step. I really like the writing style of this novel. The author must keep updating it. It's really good.

Not bad, not bad (#^.^#)👍🏻, I think Chapter 24 is quite well written. I originally thought that the heroine was in danger, and then the hero went to save her. But in the end, the heroine broke out of the siege on her own. It is not a cliche, and it also proves that the heroine is not weaker than the hero. , The emotional drama between the male protagonist and the female protagonist gradually develops later. Yes, the previous cultivation level cannot be used, and the subsequent plot development is also very logical. The female protagonist also gradually grows up, but in the later period, every time the female protagonist uses the excessive sword energy, she will lose her own memory. Isn't this the Taixu sword energy used by Immortal Red Kite in "Beng San" [laughing evilly] later on, the heroine won't even remember her memories before time travel (๑--๑)

The author writes very well, especially the emotional lines. This kind of relationship that is naturally invisible or even difficult to detect for the characters but is obvious to the readers is so delicious. The female protagonist is cute and her actions are reasonable. The male protagonist is also very natural and not greasy. He is very good-looking (thumbs up) What I regret personally at the moment is that the male and female protagonists don't get along too much. I don't know if there will be more of them in the future, but I guess we still have to follow the plot. Make a wish to have a plot line where the male and female protagonists are not separated. Let me pick up some interactions between the male and female protagonists🙏 Correction, in fact, the plot of the male and female protagonists is about 60%, but it is too plotted and there is a little less emotional interaction. The latest twenty chapters have more emotional interactions than the previous ones, but I am greedy and want more... But when I think about it carefully, it is better to oversell things like love. I still believe that the author has control, and it is really delicious to pull.

Okay, very nice, that's the central argument. The development of the entire book, whether it was emotional description or character creation, did not make me feel uncomfortable. The author's writing skills are very good and his thoughts are very profound. He is simply bold in shaping the characters he writes. After seeing the latest chapter, I hope that the future development will not let the protagonist lose his humanity. In fact, as a soul from another world, I still don't know his name. Please never let the protagonist forget that he is the most famous swordsman in his village. Don't forget all the changes in his mood along the way. If the memory is gone, if the recollection is blurred, it is no different from being taken away. In fact, I have a little guess that the protagonist is Wen Ren Zhaoxue, who seems to have traveled through time but actually returned? Okay, okay, I hope the young couple can be sweet and happy for a long time. It's not an easy journey for young lovers. You are simply soul mates. Two people are kind to each other and are kind to each other. Yes, they are giving each other their hearts in a physical sense. Overall, I think the development is pretty fast, with just over 100 pictures, it has already reached this level of plot. Especially when I went to get the opportunity with Qinghe, I thought that this kind of big opportunity would be triggered very late in the plot, but it suddenly appeared in the middle, which was very unexpected. Let me say the important thing again. I hope that the two protagonists can maintain their original intentions. I hope that the memories between them will always be clear. I hope that they will always be them. I still particularly like the fresh look of the protagonist. Also, the protagonist should recover his cultivation as soon as possible. He has determined to be a swordsman since he was a child. He should give an explanation to his childhood self (no force, just teasing) and treat it as completing his life task. I hope the author will continue to maintain this plot development and writing style, and never collapse [blowing kiss]

In the first 20 chapters, the desire to advance is suppressed first, and the recasting of the sword's heart is a turning point. The actions of the characters are all logical, and the male protagonist is not Long Aotian. I saw that the emotional scenes in the first thirty chapters were well arranged and interspersed with the main plot without being blunt.

It's so beautiful [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry], come on, don't stop updating, I can always use love to generate electricity [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

There are a few points that may discourage you from quitting at the beginning: First of all, the protagonist's soul is transported but not his body is taken away. The original owner has gone elsewhere, which is written in the book. Then the protagonist cannot die, so don't worry about the author changing the protagonist. Also, although the male protagonist is the model of Xiao Yan, there is no little medical fairy, no Medusa, and no Xun'er. This book is completely written according to the single female protagonist, with delicate emotions, and some controversial things are explained clearly in the later chapters. Finally, the author captured the essence of sex-transformation articles, not those articles about female protagonists and male videos under the guise of sex-change. The essence of the so-called sexual transformation is not in gender, but in transformation. The protagonist's growth line is highly bound to the transformation of self-awareness, and the meaning is clear and natural. Summary: Well done to you, author!

The writing, writing style, and heroine's design are all excellent. The shortcoming is that some of the so-called original works are actually too dramatic. I can predict that this shortcoming will disappear on its own as the writing becomes more proficient. I am very optimistic about this book. Come on, the author, you must finish it [Upvote] [Upvote] [Upvote]

The writing style is silky and smooth, without any lag, the plot arrangement is reasonable, the rhythm arrangement is reasonable, it is amazing, the first book is so silky smooth, the future is promising [plus one on the bookshelf][The Godly Work of Bird Food][The Godly Work of Bird Food][The Godly Work of Bird Food]

I couldn't hold on after reading a hundred chapters in one go. The last one that made me watch this much was "The Gate of Death", and the next one was "The End of Ten Days" [face covering] The writing is excellent, the writing style is also very brilliant, the AI ​​rate should be less than 10%. It might be a little uncomfortable to watch from the front, but it's even more exciting. There are some very freehand expressions in the writing, which should be considered the author's characteristic. All in all, it's very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful, don't miss it

I found a treasured author. The male and female protagonists have very good characters. The writing style is getting better and better. Come on, it's so good and I love to read it. But there is only one chapter a day and I can't read it all at once [crying][crying][crying]

Let's talk about the conclusion first. This article is generally applicable and has strong countermeasures. Generally speaking, it is a super-large cup. Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is considered good in Tomato. The overall reading experience is not bad. Let's talk about why this book is not rated high. First of all, there is a plot of abuse of the protagonist. The heroine self-destructed twice before and after 300,000 words. This is the main reason. If you can't accept the setting of the invincible heroine self-destructing and becoming a mortal, it is not recommended to continue reading. Second, I read both male and female videos. At first I thought it was a male video, but now I see that this one is more like a female one, because the heroine's cultivation level is not given a lot of ink, and the same is true for the male protagonist. Most of the time, the cultivation level is improved, and more words are used to describe the emotional part of the character. So if you can accept this kind of emotional writing where the male and female protagonists fight life and death for you for me and I for you, you can read it. The writing style is still good.

It looks good. Look at Dou Po from a different perspective [Cool] [Cool] It looks great. The author would like to work hard and update it [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

This book is also quite good, but the sentences are too frequent, the polishing is overly polished, and it is not realistic. The difference between hand-rubbing and non-hand-rubbing is still too obvious. But the plot concept is also very good, "I am the strongest swordsman"! The plot of Kenshin's recovery is really eye-catching. There is currently too little content to watch, so just keep it.

Many of the parts written by this author feel like they could be made into famous scenes in a drama. You are the second author I have seen who feels so right. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The characters are portrayed very well, and the relationship between the two people is also gradual, which makes people very addicted. The plot is very reasonable. I especially like the atmosphere of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It feels like a touch of happiness on the ground. Although many bad things will happen, the two people will work together and want to protect each other. I especially like the two protagonists and hope that the two of them can continue to go forward [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

This book is very good. I have rarely encountered such a book that I can read in a day. I hope there will be more interactive plots between the male and female protagonists, and the author is really nice. He will also give out benefits in the group. He basically makes no money, and he also sends special products to everyone. I am so touched. This is the first time I have met such a good author. Woo woo woo [crying]

Full marks, full marks for the writing, very interesting, full marks for the plot, delicate emotions, the protagonist has his own growth line, and does not have the feeling of popular upgrading flow compared to relying on others, 100 points, really not enough to watch, the writing is so good

One question, I have seen the original work of Dou Po. Are there more characters? Where did the maid come from? I don't seem to have seen the extras mentioned by the protagonist, including the moon tree. I don't remember. Well, I watched Dou Po a long time ago. Is there any other content? ? ?

Okay, it looks good, I just hope it is pure, and there is indeed a bit little interaction between the male and female protagonists

Personally, I think the narrative is very good. I didn't stay up late to read the latest chapter. I really like it. The author's writing style is quite good, the emotional line development is traceable, the plot is well-founded, and the characters are not weak. I feel very happy after reading it. I give you a lot of support from the author and look forward to the follow-up [Sending Hearts]

I like the characters of the male and female protagonists. The male protagonist loves to tease the female protagonist haha. I will savor the atmosphere between them and skip other chapters.