About My Survival by Raising Magical Girls

I feel like this article can be viewed in two lines: 1. Karin's behind-the-scenes boss upgrade route 2. Luo Yao's mental journey and harem route The story of Karin, the gentle and gentle sister who leads the way, is very complete, but it always feels like there is no way to combine it with other characters in a story. It is like a permanent boss in each new stage. After completing the tasks shown in front of others, he completely takes a back seat and waits for the next stage until the ending. However, the interaction between her subordinates is very independent and has a tacit understanding. As for the character of Mio, I feel that her storyline and Karin can be developed to consolidate the sense of the character, but Karin explained that she was "too busy" during the meeting chapter stage. This "busyness" makes me feel that there is a problem with the system. I understand that the system wants to earn popularity points, but in order to earn popularity points, Karin will be caught off guard every time in a place that may disrupt the follow-up plan. She even hides the extent of what can be used as a prompt to create a gap in information. It does not feel like harming a friend but feels cheap. At the same time, Karin is tired of running around and unable to develop the character's story. Luo Yao's growth experience has the feel of a classic Japanese novel. Everyone except Karin can make good progress with it. Even the eldest sister she meets when she enters a custom clothing store for the first time has the possibility of development. The relationship between Carlo and Carlo is like a mother-daughter relationship or a sister-like relationship. It feels like CP is not enough, but if it is replaced by an aunt and niece, it feels very pure. Compared with CP, the interaction between the two is more like a pure elder and junior. The elder will tease the younger but also help the younger to open up. The younger is very clumsy and wants to catch up with the older to repay the respect in the heart of the older. Personally, I feel that the author really wanted to spark a spark in Carlo's slow relationship, but this spark was too weak. The emotional interaction between the two was as simple as that of Shin-chan and his aunt Mengya in Crayon Shin-chan, so that no matter how they rubbed against each other later on, their CP feeling would be fixed by the aunt-nephew feeling. The last one who was so extreme and opposite was Naruto's Naruto. The slight opposition between Carlo's elders and younger generations giving each other status and positions at the same time is really far beyond the possibility of CP development.

I agree with you upstairs, I'm just waiting and watching. The relationship between Bai, Luo, and Ka is quite undesirable, I just want some pure love. The writing is pretty good, I hope the follow-up will be more in line with expectations. There's another Mio. This relationship is really, honestly speaking, since it is said to be 1v1, then it would be good to reduce the emotional interaction with those two people and clearly be just friends with them.

The relationship between the characters is well shaped, and the plot is not just about daily life. I can feel that the author wants to write a deep world and story. I prefer the psychological dramas about Karin, and I can see the author's ability in this aspect. However, there are some areas where we can go further. For example, the character is in a hurry to be released. The villain in the first season basically has no final plot (even the foreshadowing is longer than the official description). There is also hope that the emotional line between Karin and Luo Yao can be strengthened. The other emotional lines in the front are a bit painful to watch (but it is much better later). All in all, it is still very good. I will continue to read it. I support the author greatly [plus one on the bookshelf]

It looks good [Thinking] But I don't like the relationship between Bai, Luo and Ka very much. I can't tell whether it is 1V1 or a hundred queens. I will wait and see. I hope the author can reply after seeing it.

Can the protagonist and Mio smoke? I want to see the White Queen (no offense, it's okay to just go the 1V1 route) Also, I feel that this book is a bit like Luo Yao's harem novel. How does the author plan to write emotional drama in the future? (No offense, just curious) All in all, this book is still worth reading, except for some of the plots that are a little hard to accept (the protagonist replaces the dead original owner) Well, the protagonist and Mio can't smoke, and I don't know why Luo Yao feels more like the protagonist than the protagonist... In short, I can only eat Luo Yao's harem ()

Stay up late to read it and comment I don't know how to review this book Karin (Protagonist? She also has a good impression of Luo Yao, but the degree of favorability is unclear) Luo Yao (true protagonist ✔ plus succubus) Bai Yu (likes Luo Yao, has a favorable impression of Luo Yao 99?) Shiozaki Mio (Luo Yao is Shiozaki Mio's light and wants to be Luo Yao's light. It's unclear how fond she is of Luo Yao) Shen Xiaoxiao (no role now) It's hard to comment. I don't know if it's 1v1 where everyone else is a loser or Luo Yao opening a harem (who is the protagonist?)

It's very interesting. It feels like I'm writing the story I imagine now when I grow up. The narrative is vivid and vivid, which is why I feel an inexplicable itch in my heart. Maybe it's because there are less barrages, and I want the excitement of the protagonist to explode the vest, but the dialogue between the protagonist and the system always makes me strange. I think if I write like this, I can try to bring the relationship between the system and the protagonist in the later stage, and the relationship between them is more like a bo. The relationship between the boss and the boss is not the relationship between the employee and the black-hearted boss. After all, everything has reason, but I was moved, and it will make the character more three-dimensional. In short, this book is a daily + magical power + double clean and strong female protagonist. It is a little written. It is best to have some important outlines, don't write too much, and then the protagonist must be severely detained, mouth and teeth 🥳🥳

What is the love line? Can you tell me? It's a bit indifferent

The emotions are written very delicately and softly, and the plot is also great. However, there is probably some irresistible reason why it cannot be said that this is the White Queen. However, professional readers should make professional judgments. This is Luo Yao's White Queen, and Karin is just the main palace. This kind of cutie who is not interested in emotions is most likely to be deceived by a group of bad women (this is experience)

The plot seems to be very good now, and I look forward to the sequel.

Super beautiful, highly recommended. Very very super super invincible and beautiful

Why does it look like it's Luo Yao's harem story?

The plot is good, but the system makes my teeth ache after watching it

What if I mean what if, what if Luo Yao opens a harem? [Shy]

The plot is very well written. It is my favorite plot. I highly recommend it.

The plot description is very detailed and does not happen overnight. The division of labor between the two identities is also very clear. It is a good book.

Why is no one watching🧐🧐

It looks good, but there are so few people watching it. I just hope you don't stop updating it. It's hard to find one that suits your appetite [crying]

It is highly recommended to read this book. The only drawback is that it's too perfect.

Damn it, why did you let me meet this book when it only had so much time? [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

Five-star wait and see

It's very beautiful and rich in content.

The chess player behind the scenes

Hahahahaha! Nice! Love watching! See more! Thank you for your hard work, boss! Boss is great! Boss, it doesn't matter if we update slowly. Don't give up, boss! ! ! Come on, boss!

It's good to watch, it's good to watch, and the plot is very delicious😋

Promise me it will be pure love