How I Keep Myself Alive by Raising Magical Girls

I feel like this article can be viewed in two lines: 1. Karin's behind-the-scenes boss upgrade route 2. Luo Yao's mental journey and harem route The story of Karin, the gentle and gentle sister who leads the way, is very complete, but it always feels like there is no way to combine it with other characters in a story. It is like a permanent boss in each new stage. After completing the tasks shown in front of others, he completely takes a back seat and waits for the next stage until the ending. However, the interaction between her subordinates is very independent and has a tacit understanding. As for the character of Mio, I feel that her storyline and Karin can be developed to consolidate the sense of the character, but Karin explained that she was "too busy" during the meeting chapter stage. This "busyness" makes me feel that there is a problem with the system. I understand that the system wants to earn popularity points, but in order to earn popularity points, Karin will be caught off guard every time in a place that may disrupt the follow-up plan. She even hides the extent of what can be used as a prompt to create a gap in information. It does not feel like harming a friend but feels cheap. At the same time, Karin is tired of running around and unable to develop the character's story. Luo Yao's growth experience has the feel of a classic Japanese novel. Everyone except Karin can make good progress with it. Even the eldest sister she meets when she enters a custom clothing store for the first time has the possibility of development. The relationship between Carlo and Carlo is like a mother-daughter relationship or a sister-like relationship. It feels like CP is not enough, but if it is replaced by an aunt and niece, it feels very pure. Compared with CP, the interaction between the two is more like a pure elder and junior. The elder will tease the younger but also help the younger to open up. The younger is very clumsy and wants to catch up with the older to repay the respect in the heart of the older. Personally, I feel that the author really wanted to spark a spark in Carlo's slow relationship, but this spark was too weak. The emotional interaction between the two was as simple as that of Shin-chan and his aunt Mengya in Crayon Shin-chan, so that no matter how they rubbed against each other later on, their CP feeling would be fixed by the aunt-nephew feeling. The last one who was so extreme and opposite was Naruto's Naruto. The slight opposition between Carlo's elders and younger generations giving each other status and positions at the same time is really far beyond the possibility of CP development.

I agree with you upstairs, I'm just waiting and watching. The relationship between Bai, Luo, and Ka is quite undesirable, I just want some pure love. The writing is pretty good, I hope the follow-up will be more in line with expectations. There's another Mio. This relationship is really, honestly speaking, since it is said to be 1v1, then it would be good to reduce the emotional interaction with those two people and clearly be just friends with them.

Explosive little whirlwind! (The pupils dilated instantly) (Hidden paws kicked the vase away) (Speed up to the top of the bookcase) (Shocked by the broken porcelain pieces and bowed into a U shape) (Flicked the tail and flew away the remote control) (Kicked the lamp over with the chain claws) (Crazyly punched the air with cat punches ) (Backflip and hit a hanging painting) (Fangs exposed and roar of a motorcycle) (Shadowless Claw wood shavings wallpaper) (Spiral take-off and kick cracking photo frame) (Electric shock hair shaking) (Kicking curtains to create a storm effect) (Staggering into the snack rack ) (The goddess scattered flowers and freeze-dried) (Voldemort-style crawling attack) (Sudden sudden brakes scratched the floor) (Reversing and knocked over the cat climbing frame) (The moonwalk slide wiped off the tablecloth) (The carp bit the charging head) (Drag three Rice sparks flying) (Pupillary contraction like earthquake) (Stiffened claws trembling) (Tactical retreat and hitting the wall) (Exploded into dandelion balls) (The sound of breath roaring continues to output) (Collapse into cat cake like touching porcelain) (Call a good review for the book)

Good-looking, integrates the elements without looking stiff Are you worthy of what you once said? There is a cow, run quickly

The relationship between the characters is well shaped, and the plot is not just about daily life. I can feel that the author wants to write a deep world and story. I prefer the psychological dramas about Karin, and I can see the author's ability in this aspect. However, there are some areas where we can go further. For example, the character is in a hurry to be released. The villain in the first season basically has no final plot (even the foreshadowing is longer than the official description). There is also hope that the emotional line between Karin and Luo Yao can be strengthened. The other emotional lines in the front are a bit painful to watch (but it is much better later). All in all, it is still very good. I will continue to read it. I support the author greatly [plus one on the bookshelf]

The protagonist Karin in the introduction is more like a supporting character in the emotional line, while Luo Yao is like the protagonist. She has more than one romantic partner: Karin, but judging from the current situation, she still chooses Karin. Also, Karin's first kiss was given to her other self, Li Shang, who had become a narcissus. She gave Luo Yao her fingers once and kissed her face again. Li Shang is not exactly the same as Karin, but also mixed with the system's possessiveness towards Karin. This feels like a little poisonous. The author said that the outline can only be written like this, but I feel that it is a bit difficult to round it out if I want to. It remains to be seen whether it will be 1v1 after 100 I feel like I've finished writing it. Li Shang doesn't even look like a clone anymore. I saved more than 20 pictures to see how to deal with the character of Li Shang. As a result, Karin was taken over by Li Shang again, Luo Yao's innocent and incompetent husband.

Can the protagonist and Mio smoke? I want to see the White Queen (no offense, it's okay to just go the 1V1 route) Also, I feel that this book is a bit like Luo Yao's harem novel. How does the author plan to write emotional drama in the future? (No offense, just curious) All in all, this book is still worth reading, except for some of the plots that are a little hard to accept (the protagonist replaces the dead original owner) Well, the protagonist and Mio can't smoke, and I don't know why Luo Yao feels more like the protagonist than the protagonist... In short, I can only eat Luo Yao's harem ()

It looks good 🤔 But I don't like the relationship between Bai, Luo and Ka very much. I can't tell whether it is 1V1 or a hundred queens. I will wait and see. I hope the author can reply after seeing it.

It's very interesting. It feels like I'm writing the story I imagine now when I grow up. The narrative is vivid and vivid, which is why I feel an inexplicable itch in my heart. Maybe it's because there are less barrages, and I want the excitement of the protagonist to explode the vest, but the dialogue between the protagonist and the system always makes me strange. I think if I write like this, I can try to bring the relationship between the system and the protagonist in the later stage, and the relationship between them is more like a bo. The relationship between the boss and the boss is not the relationship between the employee and the black-hearted boss. After all, everything has reason, but I was moved, and it will make the character more three-dimensional. In short, this book is a daily + magical power + double clean and strong female protagonist. It is a little written. It is best to have some important outlines, don't write too much, and then the protagonist must be severely detained, mouth and teeth 🥳🥳

Stay up late to read it and comment I don't know how to review this book Karin (Protagonist? She also has a good impression of Luo Yao, but the degree of favorability is unclear) Luo Yao (true protagonist ✔ plus succubus) Bai Yu (likes Luo Yao, has a favorable impression of Luo Yao 99?) Shiozaki Mio (Luo Yao is Shiozaki Mio's light and wants to be Luo Yao's light. It's unclear how fond she is of Luo Yao) Shen Xiaoxiao (no role now) It's hard to comment. I don't know if it's 1v1 where everyone else is a loser or Luo Yao opening a harem (who is the protagonist?)