Cultivation: My Puppets Search for Fortuitous Opportunities!

It's true that the writing style of the author's introduction is not good, and it's also very watery. You can write one or two chapters about something insignificant. If you are so good at writing, why don't you write hundreds more chapters for Erhu? How can one chapter be enough?

It's too watery, and there are too many things written that have nothing to do with the main character. Moreover, he is an all-round protagonist who can hunt prey, survive in the wilderness, speak ancient Chinese, and understand robots. Really, all you need is knowledge without any brains. In the end, if I don't explain what I have obtained immediately, a lot of things that I don't know will come out inexplicably later.

In order to confirm his guess, Liu Ping'an spent several days secretly squatting outside the town, but did not find anyone wearing modern clothes. Not even starving to death

The third-level flying magic weapon can travel 500 miles a day, and the second-level puppet can travel 250 miles in one hour. You don't know how to write these, you don't have to write them, just write how long it takes to fly between two places far away. Don't you think it's embarrassing to write it down?

Can the girl Qin Shuang be deleted? She was brought in for no reason. If she really needs a woman, why don't she get a girl or a slave? I don't believe in the world of immortality without a contract. If I continue to write about Qin Shuang, I can't stand it. A person with secrets can believe that this is the world of immortality without a contract and loyalty. Also, her plot is a mess. What kind of plot are you going to get when a martial artist and a cultivator get together?

What did you write, author? From left to right, who is the protagonist? Don't look at it, it's poisonous to death.

Immature and boring

It's a very good novel, and the protagonist's enemies also have enemies. In the novel, it's not that everyone is targeting the protagonist in a single thread, but there will also be blood feuds between NPCs. It's very enjoyable to watch, and it upgrades very quickly. It's built up in less than 40 pieces. I just hope it can continue in the future, and there won't be a female protagonist.

What novel? Does it feel like copying a little bit over there and a little bit over here? The messy content does not match

The number of words is rambling here and there, but less than 30% of the plot of the entire novel is about the main character.