After I Paid Off My Debts and Left, Why Did They All Go Crazy?

It's really beautiful. The author's writing style is very good and the emotional line is very delicate. At first, I thought it was written by a female author. Personally, I really like Xu's portrayal. Many people may be anxious to see the crematorium, but I think it's good to develop feelings slowly. The author is in graduate school, so updates are relatively slow, and I hope he won't run away later. If you can generate electricity, give the author some electricity and give him some motivation. If she can hope to bring her former love rival with her when he abuses Jiang later, it seems that he will be even worse to the male protagonist and use that former love rival to disgust her. Come on, author

At present, if it is a classic plot, it can be roughly guessed, but the author's writing is very delicate and can get 8 points, but it probably is not. After all, I have held back so many words of genius. I am looking forward to it. There are many buffs. If I round out the emotional line and write a different plot, I can get 9 points.

It's a story about abuse of the main character, but the writing is pretty good. There's no particularly stupid plot, but it's a little bit toxic. The female protagonist Jiang has Bai Yueguang, and the current plot treats the male protagonist as a substitute. I hope this can be optimized. Others are pretty good. I hope the writing of Jiang's pursuit of her husband will be as painful as possible and longer, otherwise it will be too annoying. Ming Make sure to distinguish between the so-called Bai Yueguang and the male protagonist, otherwise the heroine and the male protagonist will be disgusting together. It feels like Bai Yueguang hooking his fingers and she goes back. You must write this part well. The other female protagonists are okay. I hope I have accepted them all. I will keep following the updates. I gave some small gifts to support. I hope the author will adopt the suggestions [top post]

Hmm, I basically skipped through it and didn't read it too seriously, but I want to tell the author one point. Well, according to the current laws in our country, I want to know whether the debt of 8 million belongs to the parents or the company? If it belongs to parents and the company, in fact, if the protagonist does not inherit the inheritance, there is no need to repay it, in a legal sense. In fact, whether it is debts incurred by parents or some debts, basically as long as the protagonist does not inherit more than 8 million yuan, the debt of 8 million yuan does not need to be repaid, and you can go to court. I hope the author can understand this point. In other words, the author learned about it and wrote about it, but I didn't see it.

It's okay, the routine is still the same, but the writing style is very delicate, and the heroine's short story is quite complete. It would be better if the male protagonist could be improved. I don't like being weak, I like super powers 🤭

The author's writing style is so vivid and the sense of immersion cannot be too strong. However, this is indeed a good book. It is not enough to read. The author will update it quickly. I suggest you not to elbow the cement floor from the 24th floor or go to the reservoir to compete with the fish. You can try to make the male protagonist feel better. He does not have to be so miserable. The other female characters can also develop more.

I still got into a car accident, I still can't afford medical bills, I still look like the female CEO Bai Yueguang, I still have the most self-esteem and found a job as a waiter, I still have stomach problems, I still speak in a hoarse voice, my heart is clenched tightly, I will continue to add after I finish reading I still know you, but I just won't tell you, just to let you guess. My handwriting is still elegant, and my face is still pale.

I rarely write long reviews for novels. This is not to say how great my review is, but to say that I think this book is okay. At first, I just felt that the author had something good. The more I read about it, the more he has something. Whether it is good writing style, good control of the plot, or good depiction of the emotional process, it is considered a gold mine in Tomato. The female protagonist has a distinct personality, and the male protagonist has very upright views. There are also some crazy plots, which some people may not be able to stand, but for literary creation, that is inevitable, and the scale must be controlled well. For example, a good script cannot be all about making dumplings about family reunions. Seeing Wen's confession, I really felt the pure emotion, that's what love is. @Idxywf Come on

The male protagonist is under extreme pressure, the two women are biting each other, and the one named Wen is sober, calm and restrained, facing such a situation. Kids, I want a girl who can always be by my side without any hesitation [laughs]

The title of Thunder attracted me, who is the Holy Spirit. The delicate writing style can draw out the scene, but I am used to the fast pace and cannot like this protracted content. Such a wonderful title and exciting text content, I was stopped by my personality😔