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The book is good to read, and the protagonist is thoughtful and delicate. There is no particularly bad point at present. I just feel that the protagonist was taken advantage of in the process of punishing the scumbag. There is a group account of the readers in the book~ The author is also very cute~

Personally, I think the writing so far is quite good, and the subject matter is also very novel. After all, there are a lot of women's clothing novels on the Tomato platform, but versatile characters like delivery girls are really rare. At the same time, let's talk about the difference between men's clothing and women's clothing. Isn't there a projection in the chapter? Therefore, I hope that the author can adopt a happy ending where the identity of a woman can come to reality and become a real person in the future. After all, there are projections, and it is not impossible to become a reality. As for identification, I will leave it to the omnipotent system (laughs) All in all, that's it. At present, my progress here is not even 100 chapters, and I hope the author will continue to work hard [love]

Give yourself a five-star rating, not too much (´ཫ`)

When I meet a good book, I will fall in love with it once I read it. The story is touching and the writing is excellent. You will never tire of it. The plot is compact and immersive reading throughout. Highly recommended, the more you taste it, the better it tastes. Words have power and stories have warmth. There are no flaws in the whole process, it can be called a high-quality product. We felt like old friends at first sight and couldn't put it down. The foreshadowing is exquisite and the ending is thought-provoking. The writing is flowing and the words and sentences are very charming. The writing style is delicate and gentle, and the mastery is evident in every word and sentence. The language is concise and vivid, and thousands of scenes can be outlined with just a few strokes. The writing and ink are vivid and the images are very strong, making reading feel like being there. The writing style is unique and enjoyable to read. The words are exquisite, the artistic conception is far-reaching, and the writing itself is a kind of enjoyment. The plot progresses layer by layer, with unexpected twists and turns, and is full of excitement. The main line is clear, the branch lines are full, and the story structure is very complete. There is a degree of relaxation, climax after another, and every chapter is full of surprises. It is full of suspense and intertwined, and I always want to read it to the end in one breath. The story has a grand structure, and its transitions are natural and smooth. Break away from the clichés, have novel settings, and break the conventional imagination. The characters are flesh-and-blood and have distinct personalities, as if they really exist. The characters are three-dimensional and full, and their emotions and emotions are particularly touching. The group portraits are brilliantly drawn, and each character has his or her own story. The character's growth line is complete, and the depiction is delicate and realistic. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, impressive and unforgettable for a long time. A world is built with a piece of pen and ink, and there are countless joys and sorrows. After reading this book, I can't calm down for a long time. It is not just a story, but also a spiritual journey. It is full of rewards and endless aftertaste after reading it. There are all kinds of life in the book, and there are thousands of emotions between the words. This is a good work that can enter people's hearts.

Divided into several periods: The first issue (0-34) is beautiful, the author's writing style and conception are really good [Love] The second issue (34-End of the scumbag mission) is a bit strange why the scumbag is punished like this? (Writing accident) [awkward laughter] The third issue (after the scumbag mission ends) is the same as the first issue Overall advantages: [Like] 1. A wonderful idea that combines copywriting and delivery. It is very innovative. Personal feeling is the biggest advantage. 2. Recommended a lot of good songs 3. Except for the scumbag part, it's quite fun to watch, and it feels like being the center of attention. 4. Knowing that the finale is the penultimate one, having common sense is very popular. Flaw: [what] 1. Does a delivery person need to work day and night to make 80 orders in 3 days? If it is true, the work efficiency will be a bit low. 2. When buying songs from the system, it is recommended that the system take the copyright directly. I am really not afraid of covers. I used to have a very strange feeling every time I read the copy, that is, why should I buy this song when I clearly remember how to sing it? It would be much more reasonable if we added the clearer memory and obtained the copyright. After all, this matter is quite troublesome. 3. The biggest problem that caused writing accidents: seducing the scumbag to take revenge on the scumbag... Summary: This is essentially a textual book, but the cover of Zeng Takeaway makes the work more dynamic. In my mind, it actually didn't get five stars because of the writing accident, but since the author has sincerely apologized, and I don't like giving low scores, so, Five stars are given as encouragement. I hope the author will make use of his strengths and avoid his weaknesses, his works will get better and better, and his career will go further! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] (Storytelling is always done by hand to show sincerity... It should be a long review, right?)

It's quite good-looking, and the author's writing style is also very good. It's just that the scumbag line is a little uncomfortable, but overall it's worth watching! I really hope this book will get better and better In fact, I don't really like the drama in the entertainment industry. I prefer daily life, but there are a lot of dramas in the entertainment industry... (Don't spray! Don't spray! Don't spray!)

It's so well written. This is my first time to review this kind of book. It's the only book I've reviewed. Other books are all bad for this book. I think the author writes it very well. I hope the author will continue to write. Come on, come on.

The writing style does not rely on gorgeous language, it is peaceful and natural, like a gust of wind blowing gently and healing. It is definitely a top-notch daily work worth reading. The work itself is the best language [shy]

The logic and plot are not bad, the writing is not bad, and the author will update it soon, I hope it won't end [Love] Why does such a beautiful book deserve such points?

Give the author a suggestion to make the male protagonist really change his gender later on, please! If you want the protagonist to become a female, if you want the protagonist to become a female, if you want the protagonist to become a female, you should say the important things three times. After changing your gender, you will get married. Please help the author! @Vanilla flavor apricot

It's so cool to praise my mother directly, it's almost based on me. Mom mom mom

If you don't update it soon, I won't give it to you. It looks good, I can recommend it.

The writing is beautiful, the characters are perfectly portrayed, and the inner activities are rich. I have a habit of only reading the finished book. This is the first unfinished book I have read, because the plot and setting of this book are very attractive to me. The main plot is fast and not procrastinating, the writing style is brisk and healing, thinking outside the box, there are many truths, and the details are very detailed. I hope this novel will continue to be completed, and I hope the author will be happy every day and bring us better works [laughs] Not bad, come on, author! Below is a comment from me The narrative of this article is ups and downs, the writing is powerful, and it is unforgettable to read. The pattern is immediately apparent at the beginning. In just a few words, the character's character is already established. During this period, the plot is ups and downs, sometimes the mountains and rivers are overturned, sometimes the willows are dark and the flowers are bright, and at every critical point, strange peaks appear, which are unexpected and reasonable. When writing about people, they all have their own personalities, whether they are resolute, gentle, cunning, or crazy, and all of them jump out on the page, ready to be written out. When describing the scene, it is as if it were at present, with spring flowers, autumn moon, dusk drums and morning bells, all of which can be integrated into the scene, and the scenes are intertwined with each other. What is particularly commendable is the deep feeling between the lines. Whether it is the thoughts of family and country, the meeting of close friends, or the love between children, they are all sincere and moving, making people cry. The writing style is clear but not flashy, melancholy but not stagnant, the virtual and the real complement each other, and the details are appropriate. When you think about it when you close the book, it has a long aftertaste, and it is an honest masterpiece.

The popular theme is women's clothing plus takeout. Please write well. Is this a very interesting work and a perfect fantasy character?

The characters are three-dimensional and appropriate, the plot length is steady and paced, and there are no necessary flaws, except for the part about punishing the scumbag. It must have been written by the author on the fly, right? Anyway, I don't know what other people think of this part. For me, it's just that I can have a meal preparation process during the second playthrough. It's okay. Overall, there's no problem. It's fun. It would be better if the ending could be written better!

Yes, this is the first novel I have read. I read more than 200 chapters in one day. It is very well written.

It's a five-star update for being updated so quickly. Can you please move out of the dormitory quickly? It's really annoying that my roommate is testing me every day. What we want to see is women's clothing being out of the circle, not where my roommate is testing me every day.

It's beautiful and shouldn't be buried. The author should keep it good.

I followed thirty-eight chapters in one breath, and it was so exciting to be immediately introduced to the setting. The combination of women's clothing and takeout is so funny, and the process from the hero's resistance at the beginning to the real fragrance is very funny and exciting.

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Awesome, got brains, can do it Personally, I think the front part is very beautiful, but the back part is unbearable. For some reason, it makes a lot of sense at the back part. In fact, I feel like the part where I deceived the scumbag was okay, but after that, he got worse and worse.

Update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update.

The plot is good, but updates are a bit slow

The writing is pretty good, it's normal to be a bit toxic.

It looks good. The author will update the tentacle monster quickly.

Good-looking novels should not be unknown, only hard-working authors can get five-star reviews. @Vanilla flavor apricot

It's good-looking, good-looking, and all the dreams are the hero's battle of wits🤤

It's okay. At least you won't feel stuck or wrong when reading it. It's much better than some fake high-scoring works.

It's very appetizing, the plot is exciting, and the author knows what we want to see (laughs) Personally, I think this is a rare good book on this subject, with rich characters and interesting plots. Although there is a paragraph in it that some people may not like, it can be skipped without affecting subsequent reading. The protagonist of this book is not the only one who is beautiful. Some important supporting characters have their own small highlights. On this basis, they will also have their own degree and will not steal the limelight of the protagonist. Moreover, the author's writing style is really good. I highly recommend you to read the review after reading it. Don't abandon the book because you are not satisfied with the first paragraph. The author will be sad [I almost cried]

Overall it's pretty good, a bit toxic but harmless (to me). I hope it won't be interrupted or unfinished. Come on, the author [thinking]