After Killing the Male Protagonist, I Travel to the World of Immortality

She is considered a strong woman, but the plot is not very satisfying. There are too many narrations about women's suffering. Whether in reality or in novels, there is too much negative feedback like this. It would be better to receive more positive feedback. In fact, the Basketball Association will try its best to hide and delete any negative, weak and ugly information about Blue People.

Two words are good-looking, three words are good-looking, and four words are very good-looking! ! ! This book is female-oriented. The main characters currently appearing are all female. The characters are also very well created. The female protagonist is not frustrating at all. The plots are intertwined and the author's writing skills are very nice. I highly recommend it and look forward to updates (*^o^*) The subject matter of this book is close to my heart, and the current plot is also very attractive to me. Apart from the fact that there are too few chapters, there are no shortcomings at all. I hope the author will release another 300 chapters [please update]

The writing is very good. I really like the protagonists A Xing and Hong Ling. They are both cautious and considerate of the safety of their partners so they don't meddle in other people's business. However, they don't like Shangguan very much. There was a big change in the family and she was almost raped by many people. Why won't she change a little? She is still as naive and ignorant as before. She often acts impulsively and is soft-hearted on the way to escape. Whenever she sees others in trouble or asking for help, she goes to help even if the heroine stops her and insists on helping, putting the people around her in danger [smile] If you can't accept it, don't read it because it will make you angry. Also, I want to ask the author, will Shangguan change in the future?

It's a good-looking movie. The female-to-male ratio is 9/1. The characters are very three-dimensional. They are surrounded by women. The important characters are all women. The portrayal of mother and daughter is also very interesting. I like the personalities and the way of getting along with the three protagonists. Looking forward to the following plot, please continue to maintain this female-male ratio!

Good looking, good looking, super good looking. Author, we like you! ! ! The characters are vivid and not stereotyped, the protagonist team is all female and their personalities are not rigid, the male-female ratio is comfortable, the storyline is full, the rhythm is strong, the writing is sophisticated and humorous, and I have not yet started to cultivate immortality, but everything from micro-strategy to road adventure is written with ease. The development of the characters and the storyline do not care about one or the other, but complement each other with ease. It is really rare, good-looking and good-looking! The suffering and resistance of women along the way are very moving, and I have always believed that women did not wake up today, because women did not start being oppressed today. Women have been in dire straits throughout the ages, both at home and abroad, but now that the spread of ideas is more convenient, more people will see and hear our voices. The author, please keep writing, and all women please read this book.

I can tell that the author wanted to write about a woman, and from a female perspective. Of course, this is very good. But sometimes if you describe too much, it can easily turn into a consumer misery. I saw the story about abduction, and it was very painful for me to read it. Even because I always suffer from emotional distress and depression (actually I am almost over it, but I am always easy to empathize with), it made me very painful to read that chapter. The author wants to write about the situation of women, and then starting from the situation of women, he also wants to write about human nature. I even trembled all over. Very uncomfortable. I don't want to say that the author's starting point is wrong. But sometimes it's not a bad idea to focus on describing the subsequent domination plot. As long as someone sees and likes this kind of domination plot, it will affect people. (I have a question, why doesn't the heroine return to the original world and become the king? It's a bit exciting, which makes me always feel that it's more sadistic than exciting.) But I still hope the author can work hard!

Oh my god, I stayed up late and saw it now, it really looks better and better every time I look at it! The first volume of the Mortal Realm was not that exciting. I felt that the author's writing skills were a little lacking, and the suffering of women was a bit too detailed... (I didn't like reading this part very much.) But after entering the world of immortality, the writing became more fluent and silky, and the descriptions of the fighting scenes were also very graphic. The three protagonists also have their own charms! It felt like I was in the author's comfort zone all of a sudden, the writing was very smart! This book may not be considered completely female-oriented in the absolute sense, but it can be said to be a very good book about strong women, and it also pays attention to the fact that there are no words that are disloyal to women. It is worth reading!

It's a tweet, there's nothing surprising about it. What's a bit surprising is that a character like A Xing can actually be popular with a group of people? She is completely standard for Lone Wolf stories, but I like it even more this way. The threesome is great! I like sisters and sisters to be together (non-CP!!) I saved so much and finished reading it all at once. It feels so good [shy][shy][shy]. The second volume is completely different from the first volume. I feel that the author is more suitable for writing group dramas. Everyone likes the portrayal very much [full], thank you Zhou Xiao Zhi is a bit too bad [punch out], Xiao Xing is like a time bomb💣, Shangguan's mother hasn't been revealed yet, so I'm a little scared😨, I'll save it for later... If any sisters want to ask me about something, you can poke me, I haven't noticed any discomfort so far [Note]

It's very good to watch. There are many female characters and they are all very well written. Very good reviews. I'm so happy to watch it. I catch up to the latest in one breath, I hope I won't be tortured, I hope I won't be tortured, I hope I won't be tortured [Please update] I love the main character and the supporting characters so much, there shouldn't be any separation between life and death [Salute][Salute] The most fearful thing in the world of immortality is that the character will be taken advantage of by the sudden death [crazy][crazy]

Why is this a newly published article? It's very interesting. I hope the author will update it soon.

I came across it by chance when it was about 20,000 words long. I didn't read it because it was too short. Today I accidentally clicked on a chapter and I was left with Chapter 1. Please update it soon! I will finish Chapter 40 today [Sending Hearts]

Not bad, there is a male protagonist, she really kills, kills at the beginning, there is no strategy, no luck, no delay until the end to kill. It's a bit short at the moment and the heroines are just starting to get stronger, but it's still pretty cool.

There was a comment before that said it is not good to show kindness. I really can't understand it. I suspect that I didn't read the article carefully. Isn't this kind of kindness not enough for women's suffering? Maybe I don't have the ability now, but when I have the ability, I will never forget it [crying]. I think it's great to have such a holy mother and such passionate tenderness. After reading Chapter 34, I'm sorry, I'm a stupid pig [crying], the suffering people have become marauders, that's why I don't help my wife's rights, I understand now

Don't worry about the title of the book, just read it. The "male protagonist" died before Chapter 50, and the main characters are all women. There is no house fight and no palace fight. The main plot is still the quest to find immortals. The author's writing is very good, and the plot logic is also very smooth so far. The friendship between women is so delicious! It has been tied so far, and it will look good if there is no further follow-up review.

Super pretty! ! ! Each female character is created with a super personality, the emotional connection between the three protagonists is particularly deep, and the cb direction has a unique flavor. The first part of the plot is about ancient times and the second part is about cultivating immortals. Personally, I feel that the plot after cultivating immortals is very popular in my heart. I don't mean to say that the previous part is bad. I feel that the first part of the plot is about the growth of the protagonist group. And it feels like the author has buried a lot of foreshadowing. There are so many girls, and each woman has her own unique character. I hope the author will update 800 times a day. I really want to read the author's outline. It's so beautiful [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It's good-looking, the rhythm is smooth, the plot is tight and interlocking, and the characters are full of characters. The three sisters in the protagonist group each have their own personalities. They are not afraid of trouble and dare to break the rules and find their way out. They are already looking forward to the development and help in the fairy world. Sister Xiki will seize the throne of the emperor.

It's so good-looking. I thought it was another piece of literature when I saw the title. I read the introduction before I dared to click in. The text is okay, and the writing style is humorous and interesting. I can't comment on Golden Finger. I hope the author won't stop updating.

I just read chapter 8 and decided to give it a five-star review. Reason: The protagonist is very courageous, the author's writing is excellent, and the lines make people's blood boil. In short - it's great! I like this article very much, and I will probably continue reading it. If there are any flaws later, I will review and change the score to help everyone clear it up. If I don't change it, I just haven't finished reading it or there are no big flaws.

It's so beautiful. There are very few novels that I can read in the middle of the night. I like this kind of novel where women help each other, there is no competition between women, and there is no censorship. And nve sand male characters are really cool and refreshing. I especially like to watch these plots that deal with the reduction of male characters. This is a cool article! Rather than a fake cool article that slaps the "evil female supporting role" in the face! If you want to fight, fight the male lead and the supporting actor! If you want sand, you will have sand as a male protagonist and a male supporting role! I hope there will be more articles like this on the market in the future! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It is a story about three protagonists who overcome obstacles and embark on the path of life together. I often see the character of Woxing in other novels. He is almost always a lone wolf, and it is difficult to meet a partner who can always be with him. But they have always been together, and their abilities are evenly matched, and they are destined to be different from the lone wolf protagonist. I like this kind of group very much, it is very strong and has the kind of spiritual and psychological nourishment that can only be found between friends who will never be separated.

It's very interesting to watch. The three protagonists have really complementary personalities. Each female character is very charming [heartfelt]. Highly recommended. I like Let Me Go🥰. The author's writing is good ((*^∀^))👍🏻

I am very sad that I have read this book now. There are not many chapters that I am greedy for. I posted two in a day. I am also very happy to read this book. It is rare for a new article to be not watery and polished. It is not verbose. The heroine is very saucy. Hurry up and write it. Author, I will go and read your other articles.

Good-looking, good-looking, bigger and better

It's not bad. The protagonists have different personalities. They are not stereotyped. Each has its own shortcomings. They are very complementary. They really cannot be separated [I understand][I understand] Personally, I feel that the second volume is more enjoyable than the first volume. I hope you can play more and more every day! [Blowing a kiss], I have a little opinion about the character (involving spoilers), , , , , , The person with the most negative comments currently is Shangguan. I initially thought she was a bit too compassionate and not suitable to be with A Xing and the others. But after the incident in Manqiang Village, although she still wants to help everyone she can, she will put the safety of those around her first before doing so. If it will hurt them, she will not do it even if she really wants to. This is very cute! ! ! What surprised me the most was the confrontation with the eldest princess. I thought the child was stupid, but I didn't expect that she was so stupid (?) That she even thought about her own death method [I almost cried]. No wonder A Xing and A Chan took care of her all the way. She is really a child with no bad intentions... The biggest problem among the trio is probably A Xing. I feel like she is a little emotionally indifferent? She also has a strong possessiveness. The things she did to Shangguan's mother were a bit too much. If Shangguan knew about it later, they would definitely be broken [sad]. Although Achan appears to be a gentle side so far, based on my many years of experience in reading literature, this type of person has a big problem. I haven't figured out what it is yet [Thinking] To summarize: Shangguan is a normal person, A Xing has a borderline personality, and A Chan has a hidden personality. There are not many protagonists with flaws, and it is even rarer to have all three. Please write more [please update] [please update] [please update] [top post] [top post] [top post] [bookshelf plus one] [bookshelf plus one] [bookshelf plus one]

It's good to watch, especially after entering the world of cultivating immortals. [Smirking] [Smirking] [Smirking] It's also fun to hang out. I just wish I didn't meet again at the end. It's really too short. I have to watch it to gain weight, otherwise I'd finish it all at once. Don't be discouraged. Come on and update [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] The writing and plot are wonderful! !

Very nice! I haven't seen any surprises so far. I like the characters of the protagonist group very much. I'm looking forward to the second volume! ! ! Don't stop updating [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Nice! This is all-female cool

Looks good! It's still a seedling 🌱It's not enough to see at all

Very beautiful, there are many female characters in it

It's beautiful, but so few people watch it.