"No system + bad kid + group portrait + team + single heroine + pure love" Lin Chi's four-year-old awakened to the S-level space system and was called a genius.
At the age of seventeen, he was still stuck in the lowest state of "Guanzi" and was called a waste.
For thirteen years, he composed lyrics, tried directions, and knocked on doors, but the door never opened. It took him thirteen years to learn to huddle up, and less than a year to learn to stand up.
But what he didn't know was that standing up was harder than staying down.
The scribe's knife is hanging over everyone's heads.
This is not a farewell. It's see you tomorrow.
Reader comments
Um. . . I think I need to seriously evaluate this book
Writing ⭐⭐⭐⭐
The wording is appropriate and there are no obvious typos. There is no difficulty in reading. The writing style is bland but the character portrayal is more thoughtful. If it is too bland, it seems that the plot of The Game is not strong enough.
Character building⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Each character's characteristics and highlights are very well created (are you really a newbie [shocked]), and each character's personality and behavioral principles are logically coherent. I personally think it's really good.
Settings⭐⭐⭐
It is set that everyone will awaken to two characters. It is indeed relatively novel to practice based on the interpretation of characters. However, the characters are bound in the circle of realm. It is quite satisfactory. It is not novel but it does not make mistakes.
Come on, author, keep working hard, the novels you write are very good.
Recommendation index ⭐⭐⭐⭐ (You can read it if you have nothing to do, the writing style is light and quite comfortable)
Very good. After reading many other miscellaneous books, this one can really slow people down. It is not as cliché as other books. It can be regarded as a young imagination that ordinary people can only hope for. The author's writing is quite good, but I don't know if Tomato will provide traffic. I hope book friends won't rate it maliciously. It's really good. I hope the author can persevere #fast update
I saw other book friends commenting that the omissions lead to illogical logic. I think this is completely a kind of use of line drawing. Otherwise, everything has to be explained. Wouldn't it be too complicated, and instead lose the plain and streamlined characteristics of the book? Now, doesn't it make people feel comfortable? Of course, I am only interpreting it from the perspective of a reader. Of course, it would be best if the author has time to answer the questions in person.
Isn't it precisely because of this that the author can leave more words to describe the protagonist's psychological growth process at the beginning? It is also because of this that he can create a strange feeling of third-person self-narration, and even form a psychological echo between the characters in the book and the reader.
A good thing, the author recommended it. Here is my evaluation.
It's the first time I've encountered such a strange work. I'd say it's good-looking. In the current market, the chances of people retaining the content of the first five chapters are no more than half or even less. Call it ugly. Now I forced myself to read 15 chapters and found that I can actually remember the content for several years. Don't think it's a small thing. For me, I've seen too many works so far. It's great, it's really cool, it's really cool, but when is it over? I have almost forgotten about it. If Shuangwen novels are a spicy buffet, this novel is more like a bowl of thick steamed buns. Everywhere is good, but it doesn't seem to be that good. I can't describe the details for the first time, but in short, I still like it. If I finish the follow-up content, I will come back and continue to review if I still have ideas. Come on, keep it up.
Something's wrong. After reading Chapter 51, it seems like there are too many awesome women? It's not that women can't do it, but it's rare for men's videos to use women to describe the tension of battles. In other words, men's descriptions make it easier for me to imagine the exaggerated intensity of battles. This one didn't do that either. Well, the writing of the fights is average, very average.
After reading the second volume, I feel numb. How can I put it? It seems that when I write about suffering, it is as good as Wenquxing descends to the earth. It is really beautifully written, not soft or hard, just right. This is difficult to evaluate. I will give my final evaluation after reading all the chapters.
I've finished reading it. Except for the beginning or the first 15 or 20 chapters, the rest of the writing is very good. I don't know why no one has read it, but I hope the author will work harder and wait for the moment that belongs to this book. Come on.
The number of chapters is not very large yet, and it took only a few days for the latest chapter to arrive.
So far, this book gives me a very special feeling. The language is simple, and the line drawing method (probably, I didn't read it for long) is easy to relate to. The pace is not fast but the plot is quite compact. Overall, it is very comfortable to read and can be eaten with confidence. It is considered a fine grain of rice.
The shortcomings are that the reading is not "powerful", the several climaxes do not have a very "explosive" feeling, the impact is not enough, and the protagonist's pretense does not feel very satisfying. This is a shortcoming compared with most mainstream male videos.
Overall it's pretty good, I can give it five stars.
The author's writing is very good. I've seen too many of the crazy ones that drag people away. The good-for-nothing counterattack drama only looks good if it highlights the characteristics of the protagonist. The protagonist written by the author is super good and responsible. I hope it will continue. Why is there so little traffic when I read it? I hope it will become more popular in the future [Send heart] and don't die too many people. Hot-blooded group portraits [Send heart] Also, does the main character's hair always stay short? I hope he can change his hairstyle in the future to be as handsome as the cover [laugh] [love]
I gave it to Samsung and made a bunch of suggestions, but later I deleted it because it felt inappropriate and read it again. First of all, the writing style is good, with a lot of line drawings. It is not as magical as some people say, but it is indeed very comfortable to look at. I watched the first part just because I felt comfortable. The slow pace might put off many people, but I could watch it. It just feels a bit baffling, just like the male protagonist, he is very ignorant and doesn't know what the male protagonist's growth is for. It's not a plot problem, it just gave me the feeling that I didn't know what I was watching. Then when it came to the second part, I started watching it and gave a lot of questions and suggestions, such as character settings and plot arrangements. But when I read it again later, some of the issues were overturned, but some of them still existed. But I found the second part very comfortable and exciting, and those issues faded away, and I didn't care about them that much. It's really good, but from the third chapter until now, I feel a bit baffled. The campus life is okay, and the male protagonist's growth is okay, but I felt that the rhythm was not quite right. I think that after the male protagonist grows up, he can cultivate himself in one step and then start the next stage. However, the original text started to let the little flower god take the male protagonist to participate in the competition. This feels a bit like Long Aotian, and a bit like a domineering love story. In this competition, as a member of a national-level team, the male protagonist should be able to fight in a reduced dimension. If he could compete with the male protagonist at a few levels higher, then the male protagonist would not be able to join the team when he was still young. I kind of don't see the significance of this competition that will definitely last for many chapters. Also, is it suspected that you want to write about a harem? Personally, I don't agree with it. This very simple narrative shouldn't have so many tricks. Also, the article is not lacking in foreshadowing, but some events appeared naturally, but they did not appear so naturally, which is also one of the reasons why I felt baffled. Also, most of the high-powered warriors currently appearing are female warriors of various kinds. This setting is too second-guessing. If the author writes a female channel, take it for granted that I didn't mention it. By the way, if the author wants to see my previous comments, I can post them below. @Pandas don't eat fish scales
His writing has a unique flavor, like soda on a summer afternoon in a small town, quiet and warm.
Maybe it's related to my own experience. I read it very resonantly. I was once called a genius and had a lot of hopes placed on me. However, I failed in the college entrance examination. The disappointed eyes of teachers, parents, and classmates around me were like knives, which made my heart hurt. I have been depressed for a long time, playing games every day to kill time and avoid failure. I did not meet my potted flower, but this book became my rope on the edge of the cliff. Maybe success and failure are not important. What life really needs is the courage to go on.
I wish you all can make great strides forward
I'm not very good at writing reviews. I don't know why when I read this novel, I read it word by word, and patiently understood the joys and sorrows of each character. Overall, it's very good, and the setting is very novel.
The description of the characters is very graphic, and the narrative method is different from the online novel. It is like reading a literary work. If you read it slowly, you will feel a sense of empathy. I have read books on Tomato for many years. This is the first book that makes me want to give stars.
I have read so many novels and am writing a book review for the first time. I really recommend this book. The writing style is very similar to Jiangnan when I wrote Dragon 1, and the characters are very distinct and the plot is exciting. I really found a novel in 🍅 that I can stay up all night to follow. I hope the author will definitely finish it. I look forward to the following articles.
I don't know why it's only 7.3. This book is considered to be an excellent book in terms of writing style and writing rhythm. It can also be regarded as a good book. The topic selection system is also unique and adopts a word-solving system. It is a pity that the length is a bit short. If the system is written in depth, there will be a lot of room for expansion.
The writing style of the first three chapters is very good. It uses a kind of film storyboard from a child's perspective, from the ignorance of childhood, the expectations of adults, to the helplessness of a declining child, which is almost perfectly expressed. The first three chapters are slightly inconsistent with the current rhythm. In terms of narrative, the development of the first three chapters is a bit slow, but I feel that this rhythm is more suitable for the slow pace of this kind of novel.
All in all, it's a work worth seeing.
The writing is very good in all aspects. The love line, main line, and emotional line are all progressing at the same time. The background of the world will be supplemented by the dialogue between the characters, and it will not be too abrupt. It is like I was thinking about using Chinese characters to represent abilities before watching it. What should foreign countries do? Then there is a character dialogue later that adds that Qin Shihuang has unified the text and added the background. The emotions and growth of the characters are layered, and each character has its own personality that is impressive. When I first read it, the author used many descriptive words and adjectives that were very vivid, allowing me to form a corresponding picture in my mind.
I hope the author can continue to maintain the quality. Now that the protagonist has reached the level of "broken" in more than 100 chapters, the plot is still relatively bland. This bland means that the plot is about enlisting in the army and then solving certain difficulties. It is relatively repetitive, but there are only more than 100 pictures. The previous content does need to enlist in the army to pave the way for the protagonist's growth. I look forward to how the author will continue to describe more exciting plots and world backgrounds in the future.
In today's Internet literary circle, which mainly focuses on pleasure and pleasure, this novel can make readers calm down. Like other novels that I read, I read them at a glance. When I say I am reading, I am actually looking for the cool points of this novel. But this novel is different. It allows me to think and witness the process of what a person has experienced and how hard he works. This process is very important. There are very few authors who care about this now. I hope the author will continue to work [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
It's been a long time since I've read a novel that made me stay up late at night. This is a good one. When I first started reading this book, it felt very light, like I was reading a literary work. Although it wasn't difficult to understand, it wasn't too eye-catching. The more I read, the more interesting it became. The place where Team Bifang's accident happened, Tears welled up in my eyes. I felt like I was more powerful than a strange beast. When it came to the campus story, I felt that the author had changed his style. I couldn't explain it, but it was more like an online novel. I still felt that the author's portrayal of the protagonist was weird. I'm not a professional, but I just felt that it was different from other novels. No matter what, I hope this novel can continue and be seen by more people. I hope the author can persevere. In this way, I will become a long-time fan. Come on, come on
It could be a little less artistic and look better. This book is a breath of fresh air from Tomato. It's very good. It will definitely become popular in the future.
Objective writing has its own characteristics and expresses the character's heart very well. The plot is also very realistic and coherent, without too many flaws. The characters are three-dimensional, especially the male protagonist. The changes in personality are naturally not artificial, and the reading experience is very good.
The writing is very good, although it is slow but I can read it [shy] I still like the author's blank space to let readers imagine the meaning. Some words don't have to be finished and the blank space is just right [shy] good reviews good reviews
I like the characterization so much. Internet articles with a sense of youth literature are really to my liking. The emotional drama between the male and female protagonists in the third volume is definitely my favorite I have ever read. There are no unnecessary words, only silent companionship. I declare you to be my best treasure book in June [I'm about to cry]
Read offline, to Chapter 165. The group portrait is okay, the growth of the male protagonist, the sacrifice of his teammates, and the front is strong. It was mediocre in the early stage, but with the sacrifice, the writing changed, and the plot and writing gradually got better. The character creation was very bright, it made me cry, and the single female protagonist was sweet. I feel that the relationship between Noble and Xiaofeng is strange. From a personal point of view, when Xiaofeng grows up, the relationship between them should change. It is really strange. I don't know if I will write it until then. I'm not Nuo. I may know but not feel his emotions, but I hope Xiaofeng can just be Xiaofeng.
This book is mediocre. In the contemporary era where fast-paced novels are the mainstream, other novels are like speeding sports cars, but this novel is like a slow train passing through the forest. You don't have to be afraid that the scenery along the way will pass by quickly, because the train is very slow, and you have enough time to appreciate it. This is the feeling in this novel, I like it very much😍
It's so beautiful😭Why no one sees it? I really like this kind of plainness🥺
Author, you have no heart,,, Lan Wubing😭😭Heitu😭😭
Overall, it's okay, but I have a question. Will the author use AI to polish or change it? I feel very awkward while reading and listening. The AI changes are really uncomfortable (just guessing that AI is used). Some descriptions are too redundant. I hope the author can see it. If AI changes are really used, I'd better read it again after the AI changes [laughing] This is just a suggestion after reading it.
The writing is very good and makes people want to read on. And the whole book feels light, even a little depressing, but very ordinary and warm, just like a casual remark like "the weather is really nice today", full of everyday feel. The same goes for the protagonist's temperament. You can feel his growth and the personalities of the people around him. It's quite touching actually ()
I cried as I continued to read today and found out that the author is very good at writing about emotions, so delicately that it made me want to cry... (The knife is the same as above) But! The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are particularly good. I'm personally quite satisfied with them. They are both cute^ ^
Author [crying] [crying] [crying] You have a weak soul, you have no heart [crying] [crying] [crying] Why are my black soil brothers and blue brothers gone? [Crying] [crying] [crying] You have no heart [crying] [crying] [crying]
I rarely comment on books, but this book is worth recommending. Most of Tomato's books are very fast-paced or very enjoyable, but in fact the templates are still the same, which can only be said to be the same. I read a different rhythm in this book. It is slow and does not rush you. You can calm down every time you read it. If you have reached the bottleneck period, you can give it a try. This book is still very good.
Come on, come on, come on, come on, don't stop updating [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates]
A very good group portrait, each character is distinct in its own way, and there are no red flags except that a bunch of knives can stab people to death.
What a pure book [Love]
The description of the battle scenes is wonderful and satisfies my imagination of space capabilities.
Beautiful, highly recommended. The setting is interesting, but it may be a bit limited, and the focus is not on abilities (not the cool stuff that sucks). The language is very touching, maybe a little bland, but at least it appeals to me. There are ups and downs in the plot, and there are considerations. It is not the kind of bad street novel where the protagonists are chopping up melons and vegetables. All in all highly recommended
After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the author's emotions are very delicate. Some scenes made me laugh [send my heart] [send my heart] I am very curious whether the author has written works on the theme of campus youth love before and now he has started writing a book.
Um. . . I think I need to seriously evaluate this book Writing ⭐⭐⭐⭐ The wording is appropriate and there are no obvious typos. There is no difficulty in reading. The writing style is bland but the character portrayal is more thoughtful. If it is too bland, it seems that the plot of The Game is not strong enough. Character building⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Each character's characteristics and highlights are very well created (are you really a newbie [shocked]), and each character's personality and behavioral principles are logically coherent. I personally think it's really good. Settings⭐⭐⭐ It is set that everyone will awaken to two characters. It is indeed relatively novel to practice based on the interpretation of characters. However, the characters are bound in the circle of realm. It is quite satisfactory. It is not novel but it does not make mistakes. Come on, author, keep working hard, the novels you write are very good. Recommendation index ⭐⭐⭐⭐ (You can read it if you have nothing to do, the writing style is light and quite comfortable)
Very good. After reading many other miscellaneous books, this one can really slow people down. It is not as cliché as other books. It can be regarded as a young imagination that ordinary people can only hope for. The author's writing is quite good, but I don't know if Tomato will provide traffic. I hope book friends won't rate it maliciously. It's really good. I hope the author can persevere #fast update I saw other book friends commenting that the omissions lead to illogical logic. I think this is completely a kind of use of line drawing. Otherwise, everything has to be explained. Wouldn't it be too complicated, and instead lose the plain and streamlined characteristics of the book? Now, doesn't it make people feel comfortable? Of course, I am only interpreting it from the perspective of a reader. Of course, it would be best if the author has time to answer the questions in person. Isn't it precisely because of this that the author can leave more words to describe the protagonist's psychological growth process at the beginning? It is also because of this that he can create a strange feeling of third-person self-narration, and even form a psychological echo between the characters in the book and the reader.
A good thing, the author recommended it. Here is my evaluation. It's the first time I've encountered such a strange work. I'd say it's good-looking. In the current market, the chances of people retaining the content of the first five chapters are no more than half or even less. Call it ugly. Now I forced myself to read 15 chapters and found that I can actually remember the content for several years. Don't think it's a small thing. For me, I've seen too many works so far. It's great, it's really cool, it's really cool, but when is it over? I have almost forgotten about it. If Shuangwen novels are a spicy buffet, this novel is more like a bowl of thick steamed buns. Everywhere is good, but it doesn't seem to be that good. I can't describe the details for the first time, but in short, I still like it. If I finish the follow-up content, I will come back and continue to review if I still have ideas. Come on, keep it up. Something's wrong. After reading Chapter 51, it seems like there are too many awesome women? It's not that women can't do it, but it's rare for men's videos to use women to describe the tension of battles. In other words, men's descriptions make it easier for me to imagine the exaggerated intensity of battles. This one didn't do that either. Well, the writing of the fights is average, very average. After reading the second volume, I feel numb. How can I put it? It seems that when I write about suffering, it is as good as Wenquxing descends to the earth. It is really beautifully written, not soft or hard, just right. This is difficult to evaluate. I will give my final evaluation after reading all the chapters. I've finished reading it. Except for the beginning or the first 15 or 20 chapters, the rest of the writing is very good. I don't know why no one has read it, but I hope the author will work harder and wait for the moment that belongs to this book. Come on.
The number of chapters is not very large yet, and it took only a few days for the latest chapter to arrive. So far, this book gives me a very special feeling. The language is simple, and the line drawing method (probably, I didn't read it for long) is easy to relate to. The pace is not fast but the plot is quite compact. Overall, it is very comfortable to read and can be eaten with confidence. It is considered a fine grain of rice. The shortcomings are that the reading is not "powerful", the several climaxes do not have a very "explosive" feeling, the impact is not enough, and the protagonist's pretense does not feel very satisfying. This is a shortcoming compared with most mainstream male videos. Overall it's pretty good, I can give it five stars.
The author's writing is very good. I've seen too many of the crazy ones that drag people away. The good-for-nothing counterattack drama only looks good if it highlights the characteristics of the protagonist. The protagonist written by the author is super good and responsible. I hope it will continue. Why is there so little traffic when I read it? I hope it will become more popular in the future [Send heart] and don't die too many people. Hot-blooded group portraits [Send heart] Also, does the main character's hair always stay short? I hope he can change his hairstyle in the future to be as handsome as the cover [laugh] [love]
I gave it to Samsung and made a bunch of suggestions, but later I deleted it because it felt inappropriate and read it again. First of all, the writing style is good, with a lot of line drawings. It is not as magical as some people say, but it is indeed very comfortable to look at. I watched the first part just because I felt comfortable. The slow pace might put off many people, but I could watch it. It just feels a bit baffling, just like the male protagonist, he is very ignorant and doesn't know what the male protagonist's growth is for. It's not a plot problem, it just gave me the feeling that I didn't know what I was watching. Then when it came to the second part, I started watching it and gave a lot of questions and suggestions, such as character settings and plot arrangements. But when I read it again later, some of the issues were overturned, but some of them still existed. But I found the second part very comfortable and exciting, and those issues faded away, and I didn't care about them that much. It's really good, but from the third chapter until now, I feel a bit baffled. The campus life is okay, and the male protagonist's growth is okay, but I felt that the rhythm was not quite right. I think that after the male protagonist grows up, he can cultivate himself in one step and then start the next stage. However, the original text started to let the little flower god take the male protagonist to participate in the competition. This feels a bit like Long Aotian, and a bit like a domineering love story. In this competition, as a member of a national-level team, the male protagonist should be able to fight in a reduced dimension. If he could compete with the male protagonist at a few levels higher, then the male protagonist would not be able to join the team when he was still young. I kind of don't see the significance of this competition that will definitely last for many chapters. Also, is it suspected that you want to write about a harem? Personally, I don't agree with it. This very simple narrative shouldn't have so many tricks. Also, the article is not lacking in foreshadowing, but some events appeared naturally, but they did not appear so naturally, which is also one of the reasons why I felt baffled. Also, most of the high-powered warriors currently appearing are female warriors of various kinds. This setting is too second-guessing. If the author writes a female channel, take it for granted that I didn't mention it. By the way, if the author wants to see my previous comments, I can post them below. @Pandas don't eat fish scales
His writing has a unique flavor, like soda on a summer afternoon in a small town, quiet and warm. Maybe it's related to my own experience. I read it very resonantly. I was once called a genius and had a lot of hopes placed on me. However, I failed in the college entrance examination. The disappointed eyes of teachers, parents, and classmates around me were like knives, which made my heart hurt. I have been depressed for a long time, playing games every day to kill time and avoid failure. I did not meet my potted flower, but this book became my rope on the edge of the cliff. Maybe success and failure are not important. What life really needs is the courage to go on. I wish you all can make great strides forward
I'm not very good at writing reviews. I don't know why when I read this novel, I read it word by word, and patiently understood the joys and sorrows of each character. Overall, it's very good, and the setting is very novel.
The description of the characters is very graphic, and the narrative method is different from the online novel. It is like reading a literary work. If you read it slowly, you will feel a sense of empathy. I have read books on Tomato for many years. This is the first book that makes me want to give stars.
I have read so many novels and am writing a book review for the first time. I really recommend this book. The writing style is very similar to Jiangnan when I wrote Dragon 1, and the characters are very distinct and the plot is exciting. I really found a novel in 🍅 that I can stay up all night to follow. I hope the author will definitely finish it. I look forward to the following articles.
I don't know why it's only 7.3. This book is considered to be an excellent book in terms of writing style and writing rhythm. It can also be regarded as a good book. The topic selection system is also unique and adopts a word-solving system. It is a pity that the length is a bit short. If the system is written in depth, there will be a lot of room for expansion. The writing style of the first three chapters is very good. It uses a kind of film storyboard from a child's perspective, from the ignorance of childhood, the expectations of adults, to the helplessness of a declining child, which is almost perfectly expressed. The first three chapters are slightly inconsistent with the current rhythm. In terms of narrative, the development of the first three chapters is a bit slow, but I feel that this rhythm is more suitable for the slow pace of this kind of novel. All in all, it's a work worth seeing.
The writing is very good in all aspects. The love line, main line, and emotional line are all progressing at the same time. The background of the world will be supplemented by the dialogue between the characters, and it will not be too abrupt. It is like I was thinking about using Chinese characters to represent abilities before watching it. What should foreign countries do? Then there is a character dialogue later that adds that Qin Shihuang has unified the text and added the background. The emotions and growth of the characters are layered, and each character has its own personality that is impressive. When I first read it, the author used many descriptive words and adjectives that were very vivid, allowing me to form a corresponding picture in my mind. I hope the author can continue to maintain the quality. Now that the protagonist has reached the level of "broken" in more than 100 chapters, the plot is still relatively bland. This bland means that the plot is about enlisting in the army and then solving certain difficulties. It is relatively repetitive, but there are only more than 100 pictures. The previous content does need to enlist in the army to pave the way for the protagonist's growth. I look forward to how the author will continue to describe more exciting plots and world backgrounds in the future.
In today's Internet literary circle, which mainly focuses on pleasure and pleasure, this novel can make readers calm down. Like other novels that I read, I read them at a glance. When I say I am reading, I am actually looking for the cool points of this novel. But this novel is different. It allows me to think and witness the process of what a person has experienced and how hard he works. This process is very important. There are very few authors who care about this now. I hope the author will continue to work [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
It's been a long time since I've read a novel that made me stay up late at night. This is a good one. When I first started reading this book, it felt very light, like I was reading a literary work. Although it wasn't difficult to understand, it wasn't too eye-catching. The more I read, the more interesting it became. The place where Team Bifang's accident happened, Tears welled up in my eyes. I felt like I was more powerful than a strange beast. When it came to the campus story, I felt that the author had changed his style. I couldn't explain it, but it was more like an online novel. I still felt that the author's portrayal of the protagonist was weird. I'm not a professional, but I just felt that it was different from other novels. No matter what, I hope this novel can continue and be seen by more people. I hope the author can persevere. In this way, I will become a long-time fan. Come on, come on
It could be a little less artistic and look better. This book is a breath of fresh air from Tomato. It's very good. It will definitely become popular in the future.
Objective writing has its own characteristics and expresses the character's heart very well. The plot is also very realistic and coherent, without too many flaws. The characters are three-dimensional, especially the male protagonist. The changes in personality are naturally not artificial, and the reading experience is very good.
The writing is very good, although it is slow but I can read it [shy] I still like the author's blank space to let readers imagine the meaning. Some words don't have to be finished and the blank space is just right [shy] good reviews good reviews
I like the characterization so much. Internet articles with a sense of youth literature are really to my liking. The emotional drama between the male and female protagonists in the third volume is definitely my favorite I have ever read. There are no unnecessary words, only silent companionship. I declare you to be my best treasure book in June [I'm about to cry]
Read offline, to Chapter 165. The group portrait is okay, the growth of the male protagonist, the sacrifice of his teammates, and the front is strong. It was mediocre in the early stage, but with the sacrifice, the writing changed, and the plot and writing gradually got better. The character creation was very bright, it made me cry, and the single female protagonist was sweet. I feel that the relationship between Noble and Xiaofeng is strange. From a personal point of view, when Xiaofeng grows up, the relationship between them should change. It is really strange. I don't know if I will write it until then. I'm not Nuo. I may know but not feel his emotions, but I hope Xiaofeng can just be Xiaofeng.
This book is mediocre. In the contemporary era where fast-paced novels are the mainstream, other novels are like speeding sports cars, but this novel is like a slow train passing through the forest. You don't have to be afraid that the scenery along the way will pass by quickly, because the train is very slow, and you have enough time to appreciate it. This is the feeling in this novel, I like it very much😍
It's so beautiful😭Why no one sees it? I really like this kind of plainness🥺 Author, you have no heart,,, Lan Wubing😭😭Heitu😭😭
Overall, it's okay, but I have a question. Will the author use AI to polish or change it? I feel very awkward while reading and listening. The AI changes are really uncomfortable (just guessing that AI is used). Some descriptions are too redundant. I hope the author can see it. If AI changes are really used, I'd better read it again after the AI changes [laughing] This is just a suggestion after reading it.
The writing is very good and makes people want to read on. And the whole book feels light, even a little depressing, but very ordinary and warm, just like a casual remark like "the weather is really nice today", full of everyday feel. The same goes for the protagonist's temperament. You can feel his growth and the personalities of the people around him. It's quite touching actually () I cried as I continued to read today and found out that the author is very good at writing about emotions, so delicately that it made me want to cry... (The knife is the same as above) But! The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are particularly good. I'm personally quite satisfied with them. They are both cute^ ^
Author [crying] [crying] [crying] You have a weak soul, you have no heart [crying] [crying] [crying] Why are my black soil brothers and blue brothers gone? [Crying] [crying] [crying] You have no heart [crying] [crying] [crying]
I rarely comment on books, but this book is worth recommending. Most of Tomato's books are very fast-paced or very enjoyable, but in fact the templates are still the same, which can only be said to be the same. I read a different rhythm in this book. It is slow and does not rush you. You can calm down every time you read it. If you have reached the bottleneck period, you can give it a try. This book is still very good.
Come on, come on, come on, come on, don't stop updating [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates]
A very good group portrait, each character is distinct in its own way, and there are no red flags except that a bunch of knives can stab people to death.
What a pure book [Love] The description of the battle scenes is wonderful and satisfies my imagination of space capabilities.
Beautiful, highly recommended. The setting is interesting, but it may be a bit limited, and the focus is not on abilities (not the cool stuff that sucks). The language is very touching, maybe a little bland, but at least it appeals to me. There are ups and downs in the plot, and there are considerations. It is not the kind of bad street novel where the protagonists are chopping up melons and vegetables. All in all highly recommended
After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the author's emotions are very delicate. Some scenes made me laugh [send my heart] [send my heart] I am very curious whether the author has written works on the theme of campus youth love before and now he has started writing a book.