About the Daily Life of a Succubus in the Zero Zone

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I like Zhu Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so arrogant, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." His indignation will be beaten to death. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character descriptions are very good! What seems to be the protagonist's harem is actually Suzu's harem [sneery laugh][sneak laugh]

Very good, more jailers, maybe the protagonist's I would rather you push the girl without any emotional foreshadowing. After all, the protagonist is a succubus. This is a foreshadowing, but the left brain cannot attack the right brain. In order to let the protagonist show off, you put on a mask in front of the concert to avoid attracting the attention of passers-by. In the end, you even went to the Yaojiayin concert stage to save someone. The left brain attacks the right brain after purposely taking off the mask and then rescuing it, attacking the previous brain operation for the next idea. Is it possible that when you wrote this chapter, you took a day apart and forgot all the details you wrote earlier. You only remember that the protagonist is going to Yaojiayin to perform to save people and flirt with Hoshimiya? But I see that the interval between these paragraphs is no more than twenty seconds. The basic logic is gone. If you let the male protagonist be kissed by other men, I can still read other books first to slow down, and then come back and continue reading if I forget. But you can't see stupid people. This operation makes me feel uncomfortable even just looking at it. You've all seen the stupid video, and it just feels like your blood pressure is rising. That's not how you pretend. It makes you look like a stupid pig who first unpacked a whole box of water and moved the bottles into the warehouse, then moved the box, then put the bottles of water into the box, and finally sealed the box and put it in the warehouse. The blood pressure will explode.

It's okay, I haven't read the back part yet, but author, you have to think about it. You are writing about a boy and a girl, not a heroine. In the early stage, the protagonist's reaction after Lingmei was eaten for the first time made me hallucinate the heroine story.

It would be much better if you use less AI. There are too many sentence patterns like "AI is not... But...". The profile description of AI is very formulaic. It is recommended that you do not use AI things directly when practicing writing. Try to change them. When writing a book, you can leave appropriate blank space for emotional description, leaving room for the reader's imagination. The AI assembly line cannot write emotional words, at least not now.

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Don't show off your arrogance in front of Brother Liang, young man", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! When Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian, Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. However, he was tempted by foreign persimmons on the way and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnvtu in the Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma went to another world in anger to marry Doraemon and have children. All in all, this is a very good novel

Overall, it's pretty good. It's not related to the main plot, but because I've watched too many secondary creations, I've formed a stereotype about each agent, so it feels a bit fragmented. But the author's writing is quite good. If you don't mind OOC, you must read it.

Children, I want to see the protagonist turn into a serf and knock off the singer [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh] By the way, deduct 2 if you don't want to see it.

It has a unique taste, I recommend giving it a try.

It's good-looking, especially the male protagonist who feels a bit like a doormat [blowing kiss]

Mouth melon! Sweet, sweet, sweet, this is the mouth I want to see!

I must give a five-star review. I must give a five-star review to the author who updates every day. I want to learn from other authors. I must not learn from other authors who try to find ways to be lazy every day. I am very satisfied with this author. He updates three chapters every day. I am very satisfied. Some authors suddenly stopped writing halfway through and stopped writing. Some authors simply gave up on the novel.

It's very beautiful. I hope you will continue to update it.

It's beautiful, I love watching it, and I like to watch the main character being fucked the most.

Very good fan fiction.

It looks good, except for some flaws in some places...

Very good, hope you don't stop updating.

It's good to watch. I love to watch it. Please give me more. When will I get to Roskeliffa? It will be exciting to have the protagonist face Vagina.

Sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, this is what I want to see! [Cry]

It is simply a miracle, even worse than Teacher Li Yueyan! [Sending Hearts]

In fact, this book did not follow the system most of the time. The system is marginal. I feel a little unclear in some places. The details can be optimized. It is quite interesting in daily life but is missing a bit. So, you, A-/A

Good book, loved it [OK]

A man was born between heaven and earth, how could he live in a state of depression for a long time? Therefore, ☆˶> x <˶.⁺

This is a strange book. Come and read it.

To be honest, this book is quite in line with my personal preferences, so I give it five stars. I hope the author works hard.

Trigger special words, boy and girl, group favorite, multiple heroines, I'll go. This is so good. The author will update 10 chapters for me every day 😍😍😍😍 Is the plot over here? But I still have a lot of plots that I want to see that I haven't seen yet. I can't finish it so quickly. Author, if you can read this comment, I hope you can continue. Author, please use Flame Fist on them.

Very beautiful, very emotional

It looks good, feels comfortable, and feels like [heartfelt] [shy].

Very sweet, very pretty, but too little

Like an outline, you can write it in more detail Nice looking [laugh][laugh][laugh]

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