Warhammer: Broken, Becoming the Second Most Popular Weapon in the Empire

This book tells the story of the wolf group that has always been synonymous with barbarians in Warhammer. Some people may feel that it is too slow to warm up, and it is not too operatic. But how can I put it, I quite like this feeling, and the writing is very delicate. I like this kind of bond and blending of the feelings and connections between people, especially the original body, which is obviously different in power, but the real feelings can also be conveyed. Moreover, the author's writing has the feeling of a snowy field, the smell of ice particles and the feeling of cold wind blowing on the face. When the emperor comes, I am really looking forward to what he will go through when he becomes a can, but it is also very sad. Therefore, I also think that in the early stage of survival in the wilderness, it is good for everyone to gather around the fire and eat meat. After all, tens of thousands of years of suffering are still waiting for these wolf cubs, and to be honest, I have also read a lot of Warhammer fan fiction. The wild wolves really have a good background no matter how you say it, so I am quite happy to have such a book dedicated to writing their stories. I hope the author can stick to it, come on•͈ᴗ⁃͈ ✧I like your writing style, and I also like the growth model of the protagonist. It is not about being unparalleled, but using human growth and strength to fight against the terrible world of Warhammer. I also wish the protagonist not to forget where he came from. I believe that the peaceful era has taught you many precious things. Please pass on even a little bit of the happiness we feel now to Warhammer. Come on, author!

The early stage was pretty good. It deepened my understanding of the "simple" folk customs of Fenris and the ubiquitous dried fish. I also saw the wild life of the Wolf King in his infancy.

It looks okay so far, and I look forward to the continuation of the story. I don't know if the author used AI to write it. There are always some recurring descriptions and inexplicable short sentences, which seem a bit strange. However, there are some parts in the later text that don't look like AI. I don't know if the outline was given to AI to polish it. I hope I can check it or make some modifications myself to correct the above problems [eating melon] And Russ, I personally don't think Russ doesn't understand the tactics mentioned at the beginning of the article, because it's a relatively simple way to lure enemies. Russ should also have this kind of tactics when hunting, so I don't think he doesn't understand. I personally think that the description of Ruth can be slightly reduced, or is it that Ruth simply doesn't want to use his brain right now, so he lets these things pass through the surface of his brain [face covering], this is just a personal opinion I'm still looking forward to the follow-up development. I hope it will be updated soon, with more and more updates. I don't know when it will be until I write the introduction [laughing] After more than 30 chapters, the AI flavor is no longer so strong, and I may have polished it myself later. But the setting is quite confusing, and the description of Russ is more like a highly intelligent business machine wolf boy, rather than like the original body. The original body has extremely strong learning and understanding abilities, but it is not shown in the book. At the beginning, it was written that Ruth looks like silver hair. You are the first one among the many fanfics I have seen that writes that Ruth has silver hair [facepalm]. The same goes for Bjorn, who was originally a Terran, but that was changed in the book. Kaul was even a little apprentice in 30k. These settings are small things, but stacked together they make me look weird. More importantly, the writing is so-so, so keep writing.

The author wrote about Fenris and his feelings about Fenris. He not only wrote about the protagonist, but also about the growth of Russ. The bond between the boy and the Wolf King gradually deepened. The plot is also okay. The introduction says it's a big deal. In the plot, Ruth doesn't really rely on Ruth to kill him. The protagonist has the ability to stand by Ruth's side. [Like] [Like] [Like] Looking forward to the author's continued updates!

Thoughts after viewing: Frozen fish 😋 It's not that the AI writing style is good, the content is good, the subject matter is novel, there are no faults, and it's beautiful, it's just that the cover doesn't seem to arouse much interest.

They are all so cute (*ෆ´˘`ෆ*)♡! ! Especially the interaction with Ruth! ! !

Damn me, I found a Warhammer fanfic that can be used as a god in Tomato in the future. This book is really well written and very delicate. It also has the ruggedness of Fenris and the hidden ancient wisdom of survival. I just blew it.

Highly recommended, there are few fanfics about Ruth on the entire Internet, this one is great [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] It doesn't matter if I haven't read Warhammer yet. I'm still playing the Fenris dungeon. The male protagonist doesn't have any particular problems. The current strength is very reasonable. Every character is written with flesh and blood. Those who support the author should follow up and update the book. Don't let the book die [I'm about to cry]

It's very interesting, and the golden finger is not too big. I hope to continue to update it.

Very good. It's the first time I've read a Wolf King Warhammer fanfic.

I'll give it four stars first. I've only read about 20 chapters so far. I'd like to give a suggestion to book friends who haven't read it yet. Just jump through the lines and read it. It's obvious that the front part of the book has been expanded by AI. There are a lot of nonsense descriptions in it, which can be considered a poisonous point and can easily make people watch it. I can't get into the characters when I read it, and the dialogue doesn't feel natural, so I had to read it reluctantly. I'll modify the comment after I read it. I hope the author's writing skills will grow.

Tomato is one of the few good Warhammer books, but unfortunately it is too short to read. The rhythm is very refreshing, and the plot is also very novel among Warhammer fans. The writing is not bad, and the AI ​​flavor is not very strong. There are less AI eight-part essays. The author should work hard and write faster [laughs]

Okay, actually I think the authors who write Warhammer fan fiction on Tomato can go to Hedgehog Cat to read some famous Warhammer fan fiction and learn from their experiences. For example, this is Warhammer, Queen of Glory, Rogue Trader, etc. However, this book is also quite good for the big waves.

Walking towards us is the real leader of the Space Wolves - Kyle [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey white teeth white teeth yummy yummy yummy The protagonist Kyle-chan is like a mother, Mommy The part where you can't win in a fight but bite on the mouth is so cute hehehe Mainly a little AI polish, but not much Still a wild biological father and an expensive adopted father (child?)

I really miss it. I remember it was 2015. I was alone, without a team, without advanced equipment, without reporting, without telling my family, and without going. [Shy][shy][shy]

I am now at Chapter 20. Because I listen to books, hating intelligence has a relatively large impact on my perception. Hatred Intelligence prefers to use contrast, such as "It's not something, but something." Or parallelism, "Nothing, nothing, something." There are also countless metaphors. I'm not saying that these rhetorical techniques are bad. They can indeed enhance the reader's immersion, but they appear too frequently. The listening experience is quite bad. I read comments that the author has learned to control the proportion of polishing later on. I'll wait and see

For the sake of the Space Wolves, I'll give it 5 stars [laughs evilly] [likes] I've read a lot of Warhammer articles, but not many of them have written about the Space Wolves.

It's pretty good. The protagonist is a bit like the character of Space Wolf's mother. I've learned some of the settings from Yun Zhui, and it seems to be quite smooth. It's a little strange at the front, but much better at the back. In terms of CP, what is the difference between the protagonist and Ruth? But it feels more like the behavior of brothers and two parents, which is quite interesting.

Although, what about the mortal girl Shigra who worked well with the protagonist before her return? I spent so much pen and ink writing about it, but after returning, I can't find this person [face covering], will there be scenes of her in the future [crying] [crying]

It is very unique, especially the design of the protagonist. The design of the pseudo-primarch is very novel, but the update is a bit slow. Here I would like to mention the author, if you update more diligently, I have two Warhammer groups who can help you push it. Whether it will become popular depends on you.

Welcome everyone to watch, the Sixth Legion, the Space Wolves' Legion Master, Frosttooth Kyle, and his Legion Champion, Leman Russ [smile]

It's beautiful. I love watching it. Please order more. I just like the interaction between Zai and his father [laughs] Does the author have a group? If so, please send me a message [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I really like the character of the protagonist

It's okay, but did you use AI to polish it, or did you feed what you wrote to AI to regenerate it? It looks uncomfortable, but the plot is good. Yes, it was either refined or just hand-rubbed later. Good.

Yes, especially as one of the few people on Tomato who writes about Wolf King [Like] No no no no no! Why!

The author has some ideas, and this is not a purely entertaining article. You can read it, but you have to accept the losses. I just hope to learn from the losses, and I am afraid that I will get used to the losses.

The protagonist is a wise wolf, the wolf lord Russ is the best foodie and has the best fighting ability [laughing] [laughing and crying]. Apart from eating and fighting, he can do anything with the protagonist [laughing]

The writing is good, but there are some expansions of AI, and some dialogues and descriptions are a bit awkward because of AI.

A nice Warhammer article, although it's a bit bookish, but the overall impression is pretty good😋