Quality Plus One: Hatching a Legendary Dragon from the Start

There's not much to say, it looks good, I'll give it five stars to you. Spaghetti can't do No. 42 Concrete, he should do No. 72. Because the acceleration of the uniformly accelerated linear motion of pasta will have an impact on the time it takes for the earth to rotate once, the school's scientific expedition team during their inspection in Nanjing discovered that the location of the nuclear bomb deviated from the solar wind by 25 degrees to the southwest. This requires us to use more satellites arranged at the equator to find the position of the three-body galaxy through the application of Newton's third law. Only in this way can we calculate the buoyancy force experienced by astronauts in the water 🙂 🙂 🙂 Let's talk about the shortcomings... It looks like the one next door that writes about dragons. The plot and emotional lines are too... Dry? It's a little hard to describe [smiles] Also, the progress of this relationship is amazing, and there shouldn't be much other flaws, so just don't let it go [OK] There are gods To become an immortal, there are three thousand ways, to destroy the human way, to destroy the world. Refining Immortal Gu, Destiny Heaven, Sword Taibai You Dingxian Half my life I am awake and half my life is crazy, half my life I am stubborn and half my life I am an adulterer I pay everything, nine turns, accompany the giant sun, destroy the stars Heaven wants to destroy me and I will destroy Heaven. Who says that the Demon Lord is not an immortal? Time has its way, with the help of red lotus, the demon thief from outside the world is looking for his way home. Great love and old friends have a paradise, the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn to open the way forward The flesh and bones of Gu are connected together, and there is no Immortal Immortal in the Heaven of Immortality. The devil's heart without regret shines on the world, and by refining Gu and refining people, he refines heaven

The plot was okay, but Liao Qiuhui's face turned red and she looked at me shyly, "Come on, goodbye, and good luck."

I'm going to revise my comment. The author's writing in the first volume was not good. I started to make changes after suggestions from readers. But because it is almost finished, some parts have been changed. Readers who read it later feel that the first volume is not good, so they can wait and skip to the second volume. The author said that it will not affect skipping. At present, Chapters 40 to 80 have not been changed. There are no big problems with the other chapters. If you have any questions, you can @author. If you think it works, you can join the group chat. No need to read anymore, the author stopped updating indefinitely and the group has been disbanded

It's not bad, there are no poisonous points in the front, and the plot of recruiting elves is a bit awkward, but it's over quickly. The author likes the sentence structure of "what happened to something", which is quite concise, but it is a bit uncomfortable when the frequency is too high. The quality of the article deteriorated after more than ten chapters, and the sentences "What's wrong with xxx" kept appearing, which made me irritated. Moreover, the dragon is a Chinese dragon (it's my fault for not reading the introduction). After flipping through it, it turns out that the combat is... Average. I have read that few beast-controlling articles clearly describe the battle of young Chinese dragons. There are stories about strange beasts, but when he transformed into a dragon, his body length started to reach 100 meters. I feel a little numb when I think that every dragon will be 1.8 Meters tall when hatched.

How should I put it? I feel like I have no emotion at all.

It can be written that everyone has flesh and blood, some survive in their own way, and some upgrade in their own way, but the emotions are a bit too human-machine. In short, when playing the tribe, it made me feel a little bit more sympathetic.

The setting is appropriate, the progress is a little slow, the emotional line is delicate, and the plot is a little abrupt, but overall it is a good book

I enjoyed watching it. There are some shortcomings, but not many and can be ignored. So, please update it quickly [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more]

Okay, but the words are too tight.

At present, except for the protagonist's life experience which is somewhat repetitive, many other aspects are excellent, and I can't say enough good things about it!