Text-Based Wuxia: From the Start, a Nighttime Meeting with the Gang Leader's Wife at a Ruined Temple

It's not bad. It has created something new based on the original theme. The zero growth of innate attributes makes it look better. The unique destiny speeds up the pace of the story. However, the characterization is somewhat deliberate. It would be better if there are more details. It would be better if it is more three-dimensional (Chapter 73)

The flow of the plot and the recycling of foreshadowing in this book are the best I have read this year! Although the progress of strength in the early stage is slow and life-or-death situations arise at every turn, most of which rely on the connections and background obtained through talent prompts, the connection of the plot is too appropriate. It is like playing an RPG, triggering the branch line, and the rewards and plot in the branch line can advance the main story. Along the way, you collect mental skills and martial arts, find treasures, and gain attribute points. This kind of step-by-step plot is rare in the foreign persimmons where there are so many cool articles. Now I just think of it as reading the story collection of martial arts RPG. It is very exciting. I hope the author will increase the intensity of updating. It is not enough.

The adventure of those who wish to take the bait is really wonderful from the name to the plot. From the very beginning, when this adventure was created, the protagonist understood the secret behind this adventure, just like a fish in the lake who saw through the fishhook holding the bait from the beginning. As the plot develops, this fishhook becomes the only way for the protagonist to survive, and he really "voluntarily" bites the hook.

This novel is really good and rarely seen on Tomato. At least so far, I can't fault it. Let's talk about the advantages first (my personal preference). First, games can communicate reality. Although there are not many realistic plots, as a game novel, I think this is one of the best ways to deal with it. The general principle is that reality must be strong enough, and it is not just about making some money. Second, the power level of the game world is positioned as high martial arts, which can extend lifespan, have certain supernatural powers, and have a reasonable number of realms (I personally think it can be reduced by one). This model is not suitable for those with too many realms. Third, the golden finger is strong enough, but not too excessive, the description is not complicated, and the use is relatively good. Changing one's fate against the will of heaven can improve the protagonist's background and greatly increase the training speed in the early stage, but the effect of increasing the training speed in the middle and late stages is not that abnormal. Fourth, the treatment of female characters is natural and unpretentious. Most cool novels are definitely suitable for multiple female protagonists. There are only a few models that can naturally adapt to single female protagonists and no female protagonists. It is recommended to limit the number of core heroines. This mainly refers to the kind of heroines who are likely to get married, such as Yan Jinghong, Long Qingyu, and Bai Lianxiang currently appearing. Fifth, the plot design is reasonable and there are no obvious logical loopholes or memory confusion. If the previous points are basic design issues, then this is where the author's hard work is reflected. Looking at it so far, I think the author is capable of writing a relatively complete work. Of course, the premise is that the outline must be perfect and cannot get out of control. Sixth, the writing style is relaxed and not depressing, making it look more comfortable. Let's talk about the shortcomings or my worries about future development. First, the timeline advances slowly, which is a common problem for most online articles. I have written more than 400 chapters so far, but the timeline is actually only a little over two months old. In order to accumulate enough foundation in the early stage, it is acceptable to allow various adventures and conflicts to occur more intensively, but it needs to be gradually adjusted in the middle and later stages. Reduce the density of events that occur each day and allow a relatively smooth period of time for accumulation between major events. Small adventures can be gradually skipped, only the harvest will be introduced, and unused props can be directly used for trading. Second, there are a lot of invalid words. Because it is a word game, there are many repetitive cliches that will appear repeatedly. Although it has been streamlined compared to the beginning, there are still some recurring contents, such as turning on the ability to change one's fate against the will of heaven. There is no need to write so long every time. If it were paid reading, readers would already have opinions. All in all, I have high hopes for this novel and hope it won't fail. I tried to find novels of the same type, but the more I read, the more I felt that this book was rare and that others would not be able to learn just the basic setting. For example, in the same game, the cost of death is very high. This book at least gives the opportunity to restart, and will not put too much pressure on the player to survive. Although the protagonist will definitely not restart, this will prevent the value of power and wealth in reality from depreciating too much. For game writing, the reality line is very important to create a sense of excitement. If the reality line is too weakened, it is better to write a system article directly.

According to the Tomato rating standard, 8.9 Is low, it should be at least 9.2. Excellent and refreshing article, I caught up to the latest chapter in one go. The plot is heavy on the plot, but the characters are weak. The creativity is very good. The golden finger is not too big and it is not the type that falls from the sky inexplicably. It is generally reasonable and has a lot of foreshadowing. Let's see how it is recycled in the future. The jokes and jokes in this book feel a bit like the great doctor Ling Ran. He likes to repeat cues and there are many pornographic jokes. If you are concerned about the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, this book needs to be cleared. Overall, it was okay. There was no abduction or coercion, (the women involved in the relationship were all adults) and it didn't affect the overall impression. It can be felt that the author is very careful in adding points and adjusting attribute points to change fate. It is very readable and recommended.

It's not bad. I finally read a good novel in which text games are substituted into reality. So far, it's okay. I just hope that your protagonist will not meddle in other people's business, don't be a nanny, and don't join any official team. Your own writing is so developed now that you don't need the official help at all. You can play your own game and become a saint in the later stage.

Undoubtedly a rising star. I read Chapter 50-60, and the pacing was well controlled, and the protagonist was thoughtful and not reckless. The writing is good, and you have undoubtedly struck gold in Tomato. If it is still so exciting, it can be about 9 points.

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This is the most enjoyable martial arts novel I have read so far in Tomato. Both the plot and the writing are very comfortable. There are no obvious loopholes. The author is very good and the writing is very good. The martial arts names are also very good. The plot is one after another, which makes people read chapter after chapter without realizing it. After reading this book, King Kong Ming Wang Gong is not good anymore. It is so good that I can't bear to read it. I especially want to read it every day.

How can I put it this way? I haven't read such an engaging book in a long time. The plot is exciting and compact, and it's also good to focus the narrative on the game. Without the intrigue with the players, the internal plot of the game can be better presented. In short, I highly recommend it and hope to update it quickly [Love] It's hard to imagine that this is the author's first book, but the results don't lie. More than a million people are reading it, and 30,000 to 40,000 reminders are the most powerful proof. It's an honor to see a book like this slowly become a classic 😄