I Can See All the Adventures

It's not bad. I finally read a good novel in which text games are substituted into reality. So far, it's okay. I just hope that your protagonist will not meddle in other people's business, don't be a nanny, and don't join any official team. Your own writing is so developed now that you don't need the official help at all. You can play your own game and become a saint in the later stage.

According to the Tomato rating standard, 8.9 Is low, it should be at least 9.2. Excellent and refreshing article, I caught up to the latest chapter in one go. The plot is heavy on the plot, but the characters are weak. The creativity is very good. The golden finger is not too big and it is not the type that falls from the sky inexplicably. It is generally reasonable and has a lot of foreshadowing. Let's see how it is recycled in the future. The jokes and jokes in this book feel a bit like the great doctor Ling Ran. He likes to repeat cues and there are many pornographic jokes. If you are concerned about the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, this book needs to be cleared. Overall, it was okay. There was no abduction or coercion, (the women involved in the relationship were all adults) and it didn't affect the overall impression. It can be felt that the author is very careful in adding points and adjusting attribute points to change fate. It is very readable and recommended.

It's not bad. It has created something new based on the original theme. The zero growth of innate attributes makes it look better. The unique destiny speeds up the pace of the story. However, the characterization is somewhat deliberate. It would be better if there are more details. It would be better if it is more three-dimensional (Chapter 73) The plot of the characters falling to their wits is deliberate and average. Overall, it gets three stars (119).

Undoubtedly a rising star. I read Chapter 50-60, and the pacing was well controlled, and the protagonist was thoughtful and not reckless. The writing is good, and you have undoubtedly struck gold in Tomato. If it is still so exciting, it can be about 9 points.

It's a very interesting setting, the main author's writing style is very good, and the protagonist's character setting is also good. The supporting characters and the plot arrangement are not very brainless, it is an excellent work and the appearance of a master. It is recommended that you collect it and read it. Author please update quickly

The flow of the plot and the recycling of foreshadowing in this book are the best I have read this year! Although the progress of strength in the early stage is slow and life-or-death situations arise at every turn, most of which rely on the connections and background obtained through talent prompts, the connection of the plot is too appropriate. It is like playing an RPG, triggering the branch line, and the rewards and plot in the branch line can advance the main story. Along the way, you collect mental skills and martial arts, find treasures, and gain attribute points. This kind of step-by-step plot is rare in the foreign persimmons where there are so many cool articles. Now I just think of it as reading the story collection of martial arts RPG. It is very exciting. I hope the author will increase the intensity of updating. It is not enough.

It's good-looking, and it has some confidence in the contact with reality. It won't fall into the poisonous point. Overall, I feel that I can give it a 91 point. However, the part where I used bean bags to write poems is too sweet. The poems are all well-written poems, so I have to deduct 13 points in my mind, and the final score is 78 points.

Not bad, not bad. Various interesting adventures make up for the boring early stage of this type of novel. There are not so many useless descriptions (such as cooking delicious food, being a miracle doctor, teaching readers how to learn Chinese medicine, pretending to slap people in the face) and the like. The protagonist's characteristic of having zero attributes also makes every attribute enhancement a real experience, rather than being a joke like some novels of the same genre where the enhancement brought by attribute points is just a joke. With so many attribute points, it can still be hoisted up and beaten by a first-level guard [laughing awkwardly] I hope that the description of the impact of the game on reality can be enhanced in the later stage [like]

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I think the writing is quite good, there are no poisonous points, and the plot arrangement is quite reasonable. Although the protagonist is weak at the beginning, there is no plot of pretending to slap the protagonist in the face or bullying the protagonist for no reason. The steady improvement is quite good.

What can I say, it's okay. Needless to say about the subject matter, in terms of text setting, the difficulty is much lower than that of the main text. It is just like a mock text and still has some highlights. Needless to say, the author's writing style is easy to understand, the characters are vivid and interesting, and the writing is refreshing without any poisonous points. I read it in one sitting. The number of words is still a bit low. This type of subject matter still pays more attention to the performance in the middle and later stages. Many of them can be read in the early stage but dive directly in the later stage. I hope the author will keep it up. If you like this subject, I recommend reading it if you haven't read it. . Compared with the previous ones, these 100 pictures after obtaining the title are completely nonsense. They are full of merits, and the combat power is already exhausted just to participate in the competition. The writing is completely centered on the protagonist, and the reality is all about accompanying the race. There is no need to be too watery. I suggest you melt it as soon as possible. I still hope that the author can improve himself. If it continues like this, I feel that it will collapse sooner or later. If I read it millions of times, it will be a bit unrealistic. Let me add another comment, after all, I am also following it. .

It's really not bad. One thing I admire very much is that at some unimportant points, the author neither listed all the options of Goldfinger for the sake of word count, nor did he carelessly forget about Goldfinger and directly push the plot. He integrated the selected options into the text as plot content. It's not a good look and feel, okay. At some point, I won't say anything about supporting the first order.

I felt very happy watching it. I kept reading it for several days and read more than 200 chapters. What should I say? Generally speaking, the plot is more like the ancient novels in the past, but there is a feeling of continuing to read. After all, it may be that I have played games like Jin Yong's Heroes more, and I am really interested in it. In terms of plot, the protagonist actually doesn't suffer much. I feel aggrieved. I basically kill everyone who can be killed in every battle, and the expressiveness of Jianghu is also very strong. Martial arts, worldly relations, Jianghu, the love between children, conflicts between the court and Jianghu, opportunities, senior hermits, the overall feeling looks very powerful!

This is a very standard cool article. The connection between the cool points is very smooth. Just read this and feel happy. I don't understand why some people look for connotations in cool articles, correct mistakes in historical novels, advocate Tolkien in Western fantasy, and struggle with the Heavenly Spiritual Root or the High-grade Spiritual Root in Eastern Fantasy, and which one is more authoritative, the Purple Mansion or the Great Emperor? I'm so proud. Others read novels just to feel better, but I want to savor every detail carefully. It's very, you know. Others read novels at a glance, but I have to savor every mistake 10 times, and I have to send it to the author. Oh, it's very, you know! How do you people know about literacy education? What if these children who read novels really regard the history in the novel as real history? All I can say is that if this is really the case, then this child can be reopened

The first book that I strongly recommend is probably Fairy Grass. I started looking at it from the beginning of June, and it hadn't exploded before. Facts have proved that gold will always shine. I hope the author can maintain his writing style and not write too arrogantly. 1. There is a set of development logic for the protagonists, so that there will be no brainless improvement. Starting from scratch, it didn't develop very quickly, but it got faster and faster after rolling up later, which is good. 2. There are hangups, one is information acquisition, and the other is modification of own attributes. Relatively speaking, it is not very high. In many cases, the protagonist needs to work hard to obtain it. 3. There are not too many level-crossing challenges, and there will be no brainless attempts to confront enemies at higher levels. 4. There are not many brainless supporting characters, except for a second generation.

It's well written, and it's the best martial arts novel I've seen in the past few months. It describes a fusion of a literal martial arts game world and reality. What makes me most satisfied is that it doesn't describe too much about the real world. I've read a book before that was also about a martial arts game with text, but most of it was about the real world, which was so boring. Secondly, the protagonist does not rely on the officialdom or join the big world. He is very free and has good reviews. I like to be free and do whatever I want, rather than being a court hawk. Nowadays, many of the martial arts novels written by Tomato and Qidian are about imperial guards and small flag officers. I have no desire to read them. Martial arts must travel around, encounter rough roads and draw swords to help. Finally, the protagonist is no longer an invincible martial arts player at the beginning. There are many, many things at the starting point. He gets the Nine Sun Magic Skills at the beginning, and he gets some full-level magic skills at the beginning. It's disgusting and boring. The biggest attraction of martial arts is also the most fun point of martial arts games, which is the open world. You can encounter all kinds of adventures when you explore freely. Whether it is a stand-alone or online game, adventure is the most fun. This protagonist is the most appetizing to me.

The rare second-person narration itself is a test of control, and it can be regarded as a rare and brilliant work. The overall story framework is complete, the narrative logic is smooth, the character levels are three-dimensional and vivid, and the growth of the mood and the advancement of the realm are natural and smooth, without any rigid and deliberate turns. The protagonist behaves in a transparent and informal manner, and the details of how he treats others are full of accumulated experience. Without real life experience, it is difficult to create such a vivid personality. The writing is just the icing on the cake. The most rare thing is that the story is gripping enough and you can read it with concentration throughout.

I have seen the latest one, and I can give it good reviews so far, including spiritual energy recovery + the fourth natural disaster + martial arts elements. In terms of reality, there is not much description at the moment, except that he was registered by the government and joined a small, loose group. Regarding the fourth disaster, the players were severely suppressed by the natives, and the cost of death was extremely high, and the protagonist did not have much contact. In terms of martial arts, the protagonist has a golden finger that can see chance encounters and adjust attributes at any time. Although the plot is still the same as the old one, and you can always find similar plots in previous martial arts novels, but it is not bad. In addition to the previous two elements, if they can be combined well, there will be a lot of content to write in both worlds, and the future is promising.

Now that I have read the latest chapter 91, the meter has started to turn upside down and things are getting better. Generally speaking, the story is good, but the difficulty at the beginning may dissuade some people and the progress is indeed a bit slow. The slow progress can only be solved by the author's update volume. Again, you update every day. What you write is to get rid of me. You have to try salted eggs. In summary, not bad [blowing kiss]

Good book. It is the best martial arts novel I have seen this year. The essence is that martial arts is covered with an online game. The protagonist's adventures, promotion, acquisition of a daughter, and the rhythm of the plot are all very good. It is stressful but does not abuse the protagonist. This is very good, but at present, the reality department has buried a minefield. I hope the author can handle it well. If it is not handled well, it will be a violent death. I hope it will continue.

Tomato is a rare masterpiece. It is story-driven and logical. There are no outrageous plots and settings that are illogical. The plot is not procrastinating, and it is very enjoyable. It's a book worth reading. As long as you read more than 10 pictures after clicking it, you will be like me and want to stay up late to finish reading it [face covering]

The plot is captivating, I haven't read the book in a long time. We are still in Novice Village, but the follow-up plot has slowly unfolded, taking into account both reality and games. The overall ups and downs, peace and climax are very good. I hope to write slowly in the future and maintain this rhythm. As long as the plot does not collapse, I think it is a good book!

A very potential martial arts word game plus real-life simultaneous cultivation. The world view and settings are simple and easy to understand, and the golden finger that triggers opportunities in specific scenes where the protagonist changes his fate is just right. Its main function is to promote the development of the plot. Currently, the main focus is on word games. There is currently no female protagonist. I have not met other players in the game yet. I look forward to the follow-up development.

It's very well written. Just by looking at the title of the book, it's easy for people to think it's an imperial uncle. But judging from the first 200,000 words, although it has a tendency to have female protagonists, overall it's still a genius and a well-developed novel. I personally like it. Personally, I feel that some improvements can be made, such as: ① Pay attention to the male protagonist taking less risk of accidents when doing things. After all, it is annoying to see unprovoked things all the time. However, there should also be some enemies, but not too many. I still hope that the protagonist's power will be stronger. After all, we readers are here to see the protagonist take off. (The words in parentheses are not suggestions for improvement. Can the author write the plot of the protagonist and the one who bought the snake gallbladder more smoothly? I have just caused trouble earlier, and if another trouble occurs, it will be annoying to think about it.) ② Use fewer knives, and one or two people will be killed. If you die too many relatives, you will be like a lone star, be careful of being sent a blade. ③Describe reality more simply, and increase the length of reality in the later stages. @ Please update as soon as possible

"The writing is pictorial but not packed with rhetoric, and the narrative is rhythmic but not showy of skill. Like a skilled craftsman, every cut is carved into the bones of the story." "When it should be fast, it is like a gust of wind that makes people breathless. When it should be slow, it is like a drizzle that moistens things and leaves enough room for aftertaste. The rhythm control is textbook level." "Use the most restrained brushwork to write the strongest emotions. There is no unnecessary lyricism, but there are thousands of unsaid words between the lines. It has great stamina." "The foreshadowing is buried like a gray thread, and when it is retrieved, it is like a thunderous explosion. Only when I reread it do I realize that those seemingly idle details have already paved the way for the ending.

The writing is okay, and the plot so far is also good. There is nothing serious about it. Some of the small details that are toxic can be ignored as long as you write well and quickly. But one troublesome point in word games is the problem of substitution. The protagonist's manipulation of the game characters is actually not that high. So is the game character the protagonist or just a tool for the protagonist? And the emotional bonds generated in the game are the characters who operate the protagonist or the protagonist. There is also less writing about the real world, but judging from the parts written so far, the content of the real world is very average.

After reading some of the low-star reviews, my conclusion is that I still can't stand it without the golden finger. If I still don't feel invincible at the beginning, I'll give it a low-star rating. What's wrong? If you're not invincible, you can't see it. This article is written fluently, and all the details are included. The protagonist starts from playing the game ignorantly with special talents, and gradually understands the rules of the world. There are not many poisonous points after reading. The content also has the fun points that belong to slow life. The characters are vivid and there are no stereotypes in the back. I also hope that the writing is as good as the early stage and does not end up unfinished in the later stage.

Overall, this is a very interesting novel with great potential. The setting of evolving from a maggot in the early stage is very creative. The protagonist is not a brainless fool. He has brains in doing things and the rhythm is well controlled. Although the golden finger is strong, it is not outrageous at present. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into attribute points, changing fate against the will and foreshadowing, and the readability is still very high. However, the shortcomings are also quite obvious. The biggest problem is that the early evolution process is indeed a bit slow, and it feels like "I finally started practicing martial arts after watching it for a long time", which may be discouraging for those who like fast-paced and refreshing novels. The characterization is weak compared to the plot and excitement, and in many cases it is mainly driven by the plot. There are also many repeated jokes and pornographic jokes in some parts, and it even feels a bit like the great doctor Ling Ran. If you are more concerned about the male protagonist's female relationship, this book may need to be cleared in advance. At present, the overall look and feel is good, and the plot also contains a lot of foreshadowing. Whether these pitfalls can be rounded off in the future will directly affect the final evaluation. Judging from the Tomato standard, I think 8.9 Is indeed a bit low, but I dare not give it directly above 9.2 For the time being. After all, there is still a lot of room for improvement in the future. At this stage, around 9 points is more reasonable and worth pursuing.

Classic theme, death martial arts game, can be synchronized with reality. The protagonist grows up quickly and feels good. And he is not a eunuch, he knows how to eat meat. The plot is not very procrastinating, but the scope of the plot is relatively small. It is always stuck in a corner, but because the protagonist is not strong enough and cannot get out, it is acceptable. The author's ideas are good, but some plot details are not handled well enough, such as the protagonist Sandman, the master wiping his butt; snatching Shen Fu's money, fighting with members of the Viper Gang, etc. The handling of some plots involving wits is not good enough, and it looks a bit flawed. However, this book is not a battle of wits, and its flaws do not hide its flaws. Overall, the book is worth reading.

The pace of this book is really not fast. There are five or six major realms in total. It's almost 300 chapters and the protagonist is still in the first realm, but I didn't feel uncomfortable at all while reading it. The theme of this word game is really novel, and the author is very relaxed, leisurely and refreshing. It's the first time I read this type of novel. If it doesn't end badly, it will definitely be a high score and a good read [Like]