[Summon Players] [Mecha] [Farming] [Hoarding Rats]
Liu Angou stayed in the wasteland and became the tombkeeper of Observation Station No. 17.
On the verge of starvation, the Awakening Star Core Console can summon Blue Star players!
Others pick up trash to survive, but I rely on players to farm monsters and explode star marrow!
Alien beasts are coming? Players charge!
Enemy invasion? Players push flat!
Resource shortage? Mining, hunting, and farming are all included for players!
Looking at the crazy involvement of his players, Liu An said calmly:
"Stop getting involved, the base is about to be overrun by you."
Player: "Gravekeeper, don't worry, we can penetrate the wasteland!"
Reader comments
The writing is acceptable, and the storyline is okay, but the character creation, technological settings, and some contextual logic still need to be polished.
I mainly want to make some suggestions: I don't know how the author sets up the players' world. If there are no similar simulated virtual games in their world, then the game technology with brainwave technology as the core in the article is not logically appropriate because this technology is too advanced. Moreover, if players enter the game in this way, combined with their "real experience" in the game, it will be difficult for them to regard this world as a game. Instead, they will immediately think that they have traveled through time. What's more, if a person suddenly runs out in a dream and tells himself that there is such a game, will such a thing cause players to panic and question the game company? This setting may still require some patching.
The writing is acceptable, and the storyline is okay, but the character creation, technological settings, and some contextual logic still need to be polished. I mainly want to make some suggestions: I don't know how the author sets up the players' world. If there are no similar simulated virtual games in their world, then the game technology with brainwave technology as the core in the article is not logically appropriate because this technology is too advanced. Moreover, if players enter the game in this way, combined with their "real experience" in the game, it will be difficult for them to regard this world as a game. Instead, they will immediately think that they have traveled through time. What's more, if a person suddenly runs out in a dream and tells himself that there is such a game, will such a thing cause players to panic and question the game company? This setting may still require some patching.