I Was Sent into the Collapsing Iron by Kevin's Sword and I Did Whatever I Wanted

I won't go into details about the issues mentioned by other book friends. I still like the subject matter of this book, but the writing is a bit general, with no details. I rely purely on spatial imagination, imagine the scene, imagine the picture, think about the atmosphere, such as the kiss scene with Bai Heng, and write the atmosphere more charmingly. It makes people laugh like my aunt but I don't know where to start. It's a bit embarrassing, like a bunch of dry noodles without seasoning, fuck! The author is probably used to using line drawings, but your line drawings are not at their best and cannot completely replace environmental descriptions. All in all, the subject matter is pretty good, but the writing is average and the plot is a bit lacking. But I personally still like this book. After all, the roles of each character are worth talking about. It's quite interesting.

Wait and see and cheer. Also, it's uncomfortable to watch Krypton's life all the time.

It's quite good-looking, with no bad points. It's good in every aspect and exceeds a passing score, but it doesn't feel like there's any particularly outstanding point that makes it impressive. The overall feeling is 9 points. Another point for friendship proves that I like you, boss [blowing kiss].

It's a pretty good book, but it's still a bit sloppy in some places and a little too fast, especially the chapter on Immortal Boat and the fight against Xiuhu. Also, the Black Tower villain isn't that strong, or maybe the protagonist hasn't regained his strength after reincarnation? But this should be written down. The logic couldn't be more perfect.

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It's very good. It has some elements of Honkai. Even people who don't know about Honkai can understand it. It's more daily life, but not boring. It's really an interesting book (ah, thumbs up). It's been a long time since I've come across a book that I can finish in one go. I'd like to give you five stars for encouragement.

It's interesting. You can take a look. There is indeed an identity in Bengtie Universe. You can give it to yourself, but you must abide by the rules of this identity.

Come on, author, I still want to see the protagonist and Walter persecute each other. After the fairy boat is over, it's almost time to train. After all, it's only 700 years away from the main line. The protagonist just crashes and falls asleep for 700 years, and then goes to the Black Tower.

Not bad, I can read it when I'm short of books

The fan channel is a very good novel. I support it fully because the number of updates is small. If you don't keep up with it, you will be afraid that it will be gone. Come on, author

I finished reading it on Egg Yolk Free Novel. The novel is quite good, but why is it called this name? The name on Epiphyllum is very suitable. It is at least 10 times better than this one. It seems to be called: I was sent to Bengtie by Kevin's sword and I did whatever I wanted.

The writing is quite good, there are no poisonous points, the content is okay, the pace is a bit slow, I think it will take a while to get into the main story, you can watch it, I have finished it now, I have to keep it (｡- .•)

Preservation, joy, destruction, reproduction, harmony, end, balance, Order, purity, gluttony, pioneering, knowledge, hunting, abundance, Immortality, memory, mystery, nothingness.

Author: The heroine remembers Gaxi Lian. Those things in the protagonist's body are much more powerful than the star core.

Honkai energy should be higher than imaginary energy, and it contains a lot of Honkai energy. The content is quite interesting.

Very nice, keep looking forward to it

Come on, the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][sending heart]

Speed update speed speed speed

I skipped to watch it, I think it's OK [I understand]

I beg you, hurry up and give me five stars. The plot is good, except for Xianzhou, which I really don't understand. I really hope the update will be faster. I say important things three times, and the update will be faster! ! !

Interesting content, humorous protagonist, and daily fun

The writing is okay, but it seems that Yaliluo No. 6 Will only accept Cocolia.

No, why is it Akivili and Mikhail again? I remembered correctly that Akivili should have fallen during the Falcon period, right? [What] [What] [What]

The boss and our second brother seem to have become the second sister [laughs]

This is great~

Looks interesting Update quickly to increase production

Well written, I urge you to update more.

Come on author, it's great

Oh, right, right, right, right

It's interesting, please support me