Gotham’s Beautiful, Fragile, Tragic NPC Gets the Tomie Treatment

I haven't read much so far, it's a lightning protection + perception post. 1. The early part of the book is not completely female-oriented (because I haven't seen the later part). There are a lot of male glaring and a small amount of female competition. If you want to see a complete heartthrob female-oriented book, this book may not be suitable for you. 2. All the descriptions of the current male protagonists are very good, their appearance and personality are very online, and they are not formulaic characters. 3. I hope that the follow-up can become a fan-favorite instead of a fan-favorite among men (although the introduction is all male) (I don't like female competition very much, so the existence of Herman is a bit of a low impression for me) 4. The author's creation and description may be more biased towards the heroine from a male perspective, so occasionally the collision of the two perceptions of the heroine from a female perspective is a bit fragmented. 5. The overall rhythm is very comfortable, the narrative structure is tight, and the writing is also quite good. If the above points are OK, you can be a perfect entry. Changes or additions may be made in the future. Welcome to discuss in the comment area. Everything you said is right and everything I said is wrong. There are many personal subjective feelings. Sorry, the degree of male orientation is too high. I ran away and couldn't stand it anymore (orz

The subject matter is really novel, and even though I have never read superhero books, I was attracted by it. The emotions are delicate and rich, and the supporting characters are also vivid and three-dimensional. It looks like the NPC awakening in "Westworld". I like the plot of the little penguin. Teacher, please code quickly 👍

I like the interaction between Liliko and Jerome the most. It's so interesting and cute. The two have great personalities. The kitten and the puppy are very cute. Together with Liliko, the little fox, Bruce is as innocent as a white rabbit. I like these three the most. Please give the kittens and puppies lots of interaction, as well as the little fox and the little white rabbit.

It looks good, it looks good, but I had zero knowledge of the Marvel Universe before this. But this book is so fun to read. The character of the heroine is also cool. If my daughter hooks her fingers like this, people all over the world will kiss her.

It's so good to watch, I tied it in one breath. I like Little Penguin, and the heroine puts herself first, which makes me very satisfied. I like the ambiguous atmosphere. I like the plot of Little Penguin very much!

Very beautiful, very beautiful. I particularly like the interaction between Lily and Jerome. When will Lily know that Jerome and Jerome are the same person? I am especially looking forward to [sending my heart] [sending my heart] and praying for food. This is so beautiful, I didn't expect the rating to be so low. It should increase in the future

Tomie, being extremely obsessed with and hated by men is not in line with the extreme character of a "woman". Tomie, who has feminist characteristics, finally has no need to teach gay men, either to poke shit or to be poked in shit.

I have never read such a beautiful story. The interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonists really shocked me. From the beginning until now, the corner of my mouth has never dropped. There is constant ambiguity. In short, it has everything you want!!! Even if you haven't watched Gotham, it doesn't affect your reading. The writing is beautiful and very fluent. It makes you feel happy. The author also adds pictures from time to time, which is very considerate. The description of the heroine's character and appearance is very good, and the characters are vividly three-dimensional (in fact, it's not just the heroine, but other people are also very good). I especially like to read it. The plot of the heroine's baby training them like dogs, and their interactions are very interesting. I hope that one day the author will release hundreds of chapters and scare me to death😘

I am personally attracted to this book because the heroine is an NPC character who is restarted after death, which makes me, a person who likes to watch endless reincarnations, very interested, and I also happen to be a fan of Tomie and a reader who likes to read evil women; 1. The heroine obtained Tomie's organization in the early stage and became a person with special abilities , this is the key element to escape from NPC. Because you are no longer ordinary, you get rid of your fate. It is precisely because of this ability that the heroine gets a lot of help in the later plots. It also allows the heroine to have the ability to protect herself and obtain resurrection and ability development by increasing the obsession value (of course, I am a little regretful about this because of the author's ability to Fujiang). The exploration of power is not deep enough, but if you think about it carefully, if you really do that, I am afraid it will become a passionate battle theme, hahaha); 2. The heroine has time to spend in the process of constantly restarting to become an NPC, and it is not restarted at the same time period, because she has been struggling in a poor and poor environment, so in the In the early days, I was always thinking about clinging to a rich man through the idea of climbing up. However, the heroine is not the spoiled wife type. It can be said that she is ambitious. Because of her persistence in money, after getting the special ability of mental pollution, she wants to control and occupy money just to achieve the goal. I appreciate this, at least she has taken action, and this It is also a growth process of thinking for the heroine. The heroine in the later period also thought about the current situation through constant experience, and successfully owned her own organization and wealth. It can be said that the heroine in the middle and early stages was also because she did not have enough ability to do this. When she has the opportunity to achieve this, I think the heroine will abandon them and go to the sea alone eating caviar. 3. Another interesting thing about this setting for me is that the heroine is also troubled by the danger of infatuation. So when faced with a ring that can suppress mental pollution, she also hesitated whether those who really love the heroine will lose their memory and empty their feelings. After all, in the heroine's mind, these people are obsessed with the heroine. It's because of the special abilities brought by the Tomie Organization. However, I observed in the previous foreshadowing that the heroine was noticed by the clown in the process of becoming an NPC, or before she obtained the Tomie Organization. There was also an heir from a wealthy family who fell in love with her at first sight and waited for more than 100 years after the heroine disappeared (actually she died, so she couldn't see him). I met her once, and after meeting with the heroine, I willingly gave the secret of my property to the heroine. After the heroine put on the ring and fused with her, the people who loved her did not forget her, and there was no change because of it. On the contrary, I felt that the heroine herself has the element of being a heartthrob. This is also the author's final ending for the heroine. (This also makes me very happy. After all, as a female protagonist, I don't want to. That group of people fell in love with the heroine because of the influence of the Tomie Organization. The Tomie Organization will eventually devour the minds, bodies, and looks of those who fuse with it. But it is also because of this that I felt particularly happy to see the author's final foreshadowing for the heroine in this book, because this Tomie Organization is controlled by the heroine, and the heroine still has her own destiny in the end. The heroine makes full use of her own personality traits, and the ability of the heroine brought by the Tomie organization); 4. A few more words, this book has fighting scenes, plot scenes from the original work, and original plots created by the author himself, as well as emotional scenes. By the way, it is not completely clear water. In the end, the plot is not unfinished, it is still a bit foreshadowed. I am a little regretful about this, because there are not many plots for some individual characters. (Here I hope the author can continue to create an original female protagonist. If she is a villain or a madman, that would be great)

Teacher, you are amazing. You know what? It's amazing. I feel like Gotham is relatively unpopular among fan fiction. Teacher's writing style is very good. It's very natural and not awkward. The heroine's character is consistent from beginning to end. There's no collapse. There's nothing OOC about other characters. Please continue writing!!!! I'll wait forever