[Extraordinary beasts + no system + no time travel + indigenous protagonist + mortal flow + non-cool writing + slow pace + pseudo group portrait]
There is an insect in the world, and its name is a mayfly. It lives in the morning and dies in the evening. It can only be brilliant for a moment. It cannot see the sun and the moon, and it is even harder to know the spring and autumn. This is the limit of the life span of destiny.
There is a way in the world, which is to cultivate immortality. It can move mountains, fill seas, and live forever!
The human race is the spiritual leader of all things, and only one in a thousand can embark on the path to immortality; there are tens of millions of mortal beasts in the world, but only one in ten thousand can enlighten the spirit and wisdom; the mayflies are tiny, and due to the limited lifespan of destiny, there are more than ten million in one lake, but not a single mayfly in the world can enlighten the spirit and become a monster.
However, there are fifty great avenues and forty-nine heavenly evolutions. People can only escape one of them, and there are no absolutes in things in this world.
One day, a blue light flying star caused a mayfly on the lake to awaken in ignorance and become a demon. He just heard the sermon of the immortal master by the lake, and he understood the shortcomings of his own body and knew that he could live forever if he knew the path to immortality.
My name is "Chao Mu". Although I have the body of a mayfly, I have the ambition to reach the clouds. I don't want to be a withered insect under the blue sky at dusk. Even if my body is broken into pieces, I want to embark on the immortal path of immortality, seize the creation of the heaven and earth, invade the mystery of the sun and the moon, and shake the brilliant blue sky!
Reader comments
It's a good read. Please don't stop updating if you please. The writing is very good and the writing style is also good. I'm especially looking forward to the future scene where the ant queen, General Qing, and the protagonist will cultivate immortality together. I'm also looking forward to the plot of the protagonist meeting Qin Xianshi in the future. I hope the protagonist will not abandon General Qing and the ant queen, but also maintain his original intention.
It feels good, but there are still problems with the theory and speed of cultivation. On a large time scale, this statement will raise the level of the Zerg very high. After all, the Zerg also has existences that are naturally comparable to top-level creatures, but the difficulty and speed of reproduction will reduce the number to a small number. Then there are insect immortals, who can infer the complete Zerg cultivation path. According to this book, the top Zerg cultivation speed is unparalleled compared to other races, and the world should be dominated by Zerg. It feels like the protagonist's qualifications have been lowered, and the proportion of companions with good qualifications is also quite high. There are also some problems with longevity theory. If someone has a lifespan of one day, only one acupuncture point, and unparalleled qualifications, wouldn't it mean that one minute of foundation building and one Zhongjindan and one day of Yuanying?
The writing is pretty good, I hope the author can stick to it
I quite like Mayfly, but in the novel I wrote, Mayfly is not the protagonist, but just a major support to the protagonist. It's the first time I've seen someone write a protagonist using ephemera, which is quite interesting. Although I haven't finished reading it, I feel that the writing is okay. I will give you a five-star review in advance to encourage you.
It's really good-looking. This is the first time I've seen the protagonist. The plot rhythm is very good. The protagonist's progress is not particularly fast, but the combat power increases gradually and gradually becomes better. The pace is not fast but the plot is rich. From the early stage to the middle stage of Qi training, it has the feeling of a small Gao Dynasty in other novels. Looking forward to getting better and better in the future
It's not bad. It looks pretty good after seeing it now, but there is one thing to note. It's a bit too slow. I don't know what happens later. Anyway, the first stage of Qi training is a bit long, but overall it's good. Except for being a little longer, this slow style suits me quite well. But don't write about some boring parts. Just skip it.
Good, good, come on, come on
A little less, okay
Not a bad protagonist, born and raised.
It is recommended to improve your level faster
The writing style is indeed better than the previous one, but the popularity is too low. I hope the author can stick to it!
It's really possible. Come on, author. The slow pace in the early stage didn't attract people, but it gets better and better as it goes on.
It suits my taste, the protagonist has a good personality, and the plot is not draggy.
So sad, the author cut the book (┯_┯)
I quite like this style, looking forward to [blowing kiss]
Very nice novel
Rare mortal demon flow
It looks good, but you've taken more than 100 pictures and you're still on the 3rd or 4th level of Qi Refining [covering your face].
In the novel about exotic animals, other authors either wrote about snakes or tigers. This is the first time I have seen a mayfly. It is very elegant.
The current rhythm is okay, I can keep watching, five stars for encouragement
To be honest, the subject matter is very novel and the writing style is also good. I hope the author will work harder [Salute]
Come on, I've seen 30 pictures and I feel pretty good. The perspective is quite novel. It's just that the novice village is a bit slow to come out. The map hasn't been rolled out yet.
The subject matter is quite novel, but it's a bit short. Please keep it for a while and don't let it die young.
It feels good so far, and the writing is much better than the previous one.
Excellent choice of words and sentences! A great book!
It's a good read. Please don't stop updating if you please. The writing is very good and the writing style is also good. I'm especially looking forward to the future scene where the ant queen, General Qing, and the protagonist will cultivate immortality together. I'm also looking forward to the plot of the protagonist meeting Qin Xianshi in the future. I hope the protagonist will not abandon General Qing and the ant queen, but also maintain his original intention.
It feels good, but there are still problems with the theory and speed of cultivation. On a large time scale, this statement will raise the level of the Zerg very high. After all, the Zerg also has existences that are naturally comparable to top-level creatures, but the difficulty and speed of reproduction will reduce the number to a small number. Then there are insect immortals, who can infer the complete Zerg cultivation path. According to this book, the top Zerg cultivation speed is unparalleled compared to other races, and the world should be dominated by Zerg. It feels like the protagonist's qualifications have been lowered, and the proportion of companions with good qualifications is also quite high. There are also some problems with longevity theory. If someone has a lifespan of one day, only one acupuncture point, and unparalleled qualifications, wouldn't it mean that one minute of foundation building and one Zhongjindan and one day of Yuanying?
The writing is pretty good, I hope the author can stick to it
I quite like Mayfly, but in the novel I wrote, Mayfly is not the protagonist, but just a major support to the protagonist. It's the first time I've seen someone write a protagonist using ephemera, which is quite interesting. Although I haven't finished reading it, I feel that the writing is okay. I will give you a five-star review in advance to encourage you.
It's really good-looking. This is the first time I've seen the protagonist. The plot rhythm is very good. The protagonist's progress is not particularly fast, but the combat power increases gradually and gradually becomes better. The pace is not fast but the plot is rich. From the early stage to the middle stage of Qi training, it has the feeling of a small Gao Dynasty in other novels. Looking forward to getting better and better in the future
It's not bad. It looks pretty good after seeing it now, but there is one thing to note. It's a bit too slow. I don't know what happens later. Anyway, the first stage of Qi training is a bit long, but overall it's good. Except for being a little longer, this slow style suits me quite well. But don't write about some boring parts. Just skip it.
Good, good, come on, come on
A little less, okay
Not a bad protagonist, born and raised.
It is recommended to improve your level faster
The writing style is indeed better than the previous one, but the popularity is too low. I hope the author can stick to it!
It's really possible. Come on, author. The slow pace in the early stage didn't attract people, but it gets better and better as it goes on.
It suits my taste, the protagonist has a good personality, and the plot is not draggy. So sad, the author cut the book (┯_┯)
I quite like this style, looking forward to [blowing kiss]
Very nice novel
Rare mortal demon flow
It looks good, but you've taken more than 100 pictures and you're still on the 3rd or 4th level of Qi Refining [covering your face].
In the novel about exotic animals, other authors either wrote about snakes or tigers. This is the first time I have seen a mayfly. It is very elegant.
The current rhythm is okay, I can keep watching, five stars for encouragement
To be honest, the subject matter is very novel and the writing style is also good. I hope the author will work harder [Salute]
Come on, I've seen 30 pictures and I feel pretty good. The perspective is quite novel. It's just that the novice village is a bit slow to come out. The map hasn't been rolled out yet.
The subject matter is quite novel, but it's a bit short. Please keep it for a while and don't let it die young.
It feels good so far, and the writing is much better than the previous one.
Excellent choice of words and sentences! A great book!