[Mythical Beasts + No System + No Transmigration + Native Protagonist + Ordinary-Person Progression + Not a Power Fantasy + Slow Paced + Faux Ensemble Cast]
There is a creature in this world called the mayfly. Born at dawn and dead by dusk, it enjoys only a fleeting splendor, never seeing the sun or moon, let alone knowing the passage of the seasons. Such is the span of life decreed by fate.
There is also a path in this world: cultivation. It can move mountains, fill the seas, and even grant eternal life!
Humans are the most intelligent of all living things, yet only one in a thousand can set foot on the path to immortality. Of the countless beasts in the world, only one in ten thousand can awaken its intelligence. Mayflies are tiny and numerous beyond count, their numbers in a single lake exceeding hundreds of millions, yet not one has ever awakened its spirit and become a demon.
And yet, the Great Dao is fifty, Heaven’s evolution accounts for forty-nine, and one escapes its grasp. Nothing in this world is absolute.
One day, a streak of azure light fell from the sky, awakening the spirit of a mayfly in a lake. Still lost in ignorance, it happened to hear an immortal master preaching by the shore. There, it learned of the limitations fate had placed upon its kind and discovered that the path to immortality could grant eternal life.
My name is Chaomu. Though I am a mayfly, my ambition soars to the clouds. I refuse to be a frail insect fading beneath the blue sky at dusk. Even if I must be reduced to ashes, I will set foot on the path to immortality, seize the wonders of Heaven and Earth, unravel the secrets of the sun and moon, and challenge the mighty heavens above!
It's a good read. Please don't stop updating if you please. The writing is very good and the writing style is also good. I'm especially looking forward to the future scene where the ant queen, General Qing, and the protagonist will cultivate immortality together. I'm also looking forward to the plot of the protagonist meeting Qin Xianshi in the future. I hope the protagonist will not abandon General Qing and the ant queen, but also maintain his original intention.
It feels good, but there are still problems with the theory and speed of cultivation. On a large time scale, this statement will raise the level of the Zerg very high. After all, the Zerg also has existences that are naturally comparable to top-level creatures, but the difficulty and speed of reproduction will reduce the number to a small number. Then there are insect immortals, who can infer the complete Zerg cultivation path. According to this book, the top Zerg cultivation speed is unparalleled compared to other races, and the world should be dominated by Zerg. It feels like the protagonist's qualifications have been lowered, and the proportion of companions with good qualifications is also quite high. There are also some problems with longevity theory. If someone has a lifespan of one day, only one acupuncture point, and unparalleled qualifications, wouldn't it mean that one minute of foundation building and one Zhongjindan and one day of Yuanying?
The writing is pretty good, I hope the author can stick to it
I quite like Mayfly, but in the novel I wrote, Mayfly is not the protagonist, but just a major support to the protagonist. It's the first time I've seen someone write a protagonist using ephemera, which is quite interesting. Although I haven't finished reading it, I feel that the writing is okay. I will give you a five-star review in advance to encourage you.
It's not bad. It looks pretty good after seeing it now, but there is one thing to note. It's a bit too slow. I don't know what happens later. Anyway, the first stage of Qi training is a bit long, but overall it's good. Except for being a little longer, this slow style suits me quite well. But don't write about some boring parts. Just skip it.
It's really good-looking. This is the first time I've seen the protagonist. The plot rhythm is very good. The protagonist's progress is not particularly fast, but the combat power increases gradually and gradually becomes better. The pace is not fast but the plot is rich. From the early stage to the middle stage of Qi training, it has the feeling of a small Gao Dynasty in other novels. Looking forward to getting better and better in the future
Not a bad protagonist, born and raised.
Good, good, come on, come on
A little less, okay
It's really possible. Come on, author. The slow pace in the early stage didn't attract people, but it gets better and better as it goes on.