Naruto: My Rights as a Common Troublemaker Are Unlimited

It's a good read, much better than ordinary books. There is no pretentiousness or disgusting plot. I was attacked by several gender-opposing people last time I posted a review. I felt very baffled. I didn't expect that I would be scolded because of my gender when I casually posted a review of a book that I liked.

Summary: Naruto, Funko (The Will of Hegemony) Overall, the subject matter is well chosen, and the content in the introduction is indeed highlighted in the book. As for the arrangement of the jokes, it is indeed interesting and not obtrusive. The aspects of the characters are neither high nor low, neither deliberately exaggerated nor deliberately ignored. This is indeed rare. It is rare that certain characters are not deliberately exaggerated to promote the plot. Although I still feel that there are some minor problems, they do not affect the viewing, and there are appropriate remedies. Although it is still slightly disharmonious, it is really much better than others. Although it is not a completely fun novel, it can still be regarded as a serious Naruto fanfic that fits the title of the book. It can be seen that he really wanted to write his own story, rather than just writing it for fun. Although I feel a little disappointed that it is not completely consistent with Le Ziwen, it is not a bad thing. After all, the upper and lower limits of Lezi articles fluctuate too much. If it doesn't meet the kind of music you want to see, even if I read too much fan fiction, I will still feel a little uncomfortable with Lezi articles. According to the current development, as long as the main character OOC does not appear, and the plot is seriously modified (not saying it is impossible, but you have to be cautious, the difficulty of the plot is indeed difficult to deal with in the fandom), it can definitely attract a group of readers who like this genre. After reading the subsequent plot, you can find that the will of tyrants gradually turns into the character's personality, and it has changed from a fun joke at the beginning to a normal fan. To be honest, if the will of hegemony becomes a character trait instead of a novel label, it will actually end up being featureless. After all, poisonous words and love of pressure are indeed very common character traits. The plot gradually becomes dull and less interesting, and the problem of flow becomes more and more obvious. Without the characteristics, it becomes just like a normal fan, and it is very dull until the key plot points are reached. After talking about the situation in the plot, let's talk about some situations outside the plot. (If you read the book review first, you can compare it with other book reviews to decide whether to eat it or not) First of all, there are some places where the sentence structure seems a bit strange to me (of course it may be due to my limited cultural level). The second is the duplication of content. There is duplication of content in some chapters, or duplication of chapters connecting up and down. Next, the material selection is not completely highlighted. Although the title of the book points to writing about overbearing, it does not highlight the theme. This refers to the case where the book is for follow-up reading and the current word count does not exceed 100. The only solution to this situation is to update it or the author to update it with relevant content. Of course, it may be that this is just a means to attract readers. The author wants to write a serious Naruto fanfic, but since he has chosen this subject matter, it is better to highlight it a little bit. (This is just my personal opinion. After all, I am not writing a report. It is not completely correct and only represents my personal opinion)

Creative, but what are the fragments and pressure values ​​for? The number must be written clearly. According to my observation, the pressure value can be converted into ninjutsu fragments, and having one fragment means progress and proficiency. However, when I saw Chapter 17, I still don't know how much the pressure value is now. Logically speaking, there should be a lot of this brushing method, so don't overwhelm the protagonist. Secondly, I don't know the total amount of fragments and how many pieces are needed. Also, there are a lot of repeated paragraphs and sentences.

Although the repetition rate is a bit high, I still hope you can continue writing it. I enjoyed reading it and let the author polish it more. Come on

Although there is AI ghostwriting, it is overall good

This book is still very good from now on, I hope the author can stick to it!

It looks pretty good so far

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It's pretty cool, I've been following it

Full marks, both plot and writing are at the upper level among Naruto novels.