Seize the Direct Descendant? I'm Not Favored, but I Have a Shopping System

The idea is good, but the imagination is too small. Three-time fidelity, buy some conceptual things, take off once, use reality as the benchmark, go to the two-dimensional store to customize and buy, you can definitely get three golden fingers

Five-star praise! The writing and pacing look very good, the plot is very attractive, and the characters are well created. The complete world view has not yet been fully developed. I look forward to the author writing about the world in the future. I hope to create a magnificent and boundless world pattern. The grand settings of multiple worlds, the secret realm of all races, and the chaotic star sea will be shown more, which will fill the epic feeling. I will keep following the updates!

It's so well written that I can't stop following it! Just tell me some of my thoughts. In the part about giving the glass, I hope I can write down the completely different reactions of Concubine De, the eldest brother's wife, and Guo Jia when they received the gift, and also write down the opinions of the people next to me. In the plot where the eldest brother goes on an expedition, we can not only focus on the perspective of the protagonist, but also write more about what the accompanying soldiers and people along the road saw and heard, so that the story on the road can be richer. There is also the story about the old man who was injured by the mission. I have always been curious about whether the five taels of silver were given to the old man. If I could write about how the old man's family life improved after he got the money, the plot would be more grounded. In addition, the three girls who lived in Zhuangzi before, how did they talk about this experience with their families when they returned home? I hope their perspectives are fuller.

It's interesting, but sometimes it feels like playing house. There is no particularly tense description of seizing the heir.

It can be seen that the author pays more attention to logical details. I've read about a hundred chapters so far and there's nothing bad about it. In particular, the character description of Guo Jia can also depict the demeanor of a wise man, and then the character is set to the border in a timely manner. It avoids the collapse of the character due to the author's own intellectual limitations. This is relatively rare and successful in tomatoes.

There are some bad points in the front, but I think it's okay. The nine sons seizing the direct descendants are still interesting, but after the three girls came out, they started to favor female channels. After I started writing poems in Chapter 160, I got out of hand. Later, I started to write poems, copy poems, copy poems, copy poems, copy poems, and copy poems. I feel like I'm running out of fresh ideas, but seeing as it's pretty good in the early stages, I'd still give it five-star support.

It's very interesting. I hope there will be more updates every day.

The setting is still novel, but there are many places where there are no restrictions. There is no problem in reading it without thinking. The skills are directly disclosed. The more powerful the skills are, the easier they are to practice. There are several more masters, and the women are quite inexplicable.

It's very well written, and the author works hard.

Why doesn't the protagonist spread the announcement all over the world, so that many people know about it and will be directly loyal to the protagonist as long as they learn the exercises.

I think it's pretty good, at least it doesn't look like it was written by AI.

I finished reading it in one day, it's great [please update]

In fact, I would like to ask why magical secret books such as "Nine Yang Magic" are not dedicated to the emperor. Even if the emperor doesn't practice, you can still dedicate it to your brothers and sisters and cast a wide net. If the emperor and princes don't practice it themselves, they may practice it for the people around them and set up spies for free.

Everything else is good, but the description of women is so weird that they blush at every turn? How can they be the same? There should be blushing calculations and calm and domineering ones. They shouldn't all be the same.

I don't want the result to be too many girls... 2 At most... I can also look at the others, because I'm bored and can't find any good ones. If you have some that you think are particularly good-looking, you can recommend them. Thank you all.

The writing is very good. I have read it well for more than 20 years. The author is very talented. I hope that if I continue writing, it will become popular.

I put my cell phone in my trouser pocket, and I didn't know how to open the article. I opened it and just read it. The result is that this chapter is quite good. . . . But I haven't read the introduction. I hope there aren't as many people in the harem as the entire reinforcement camp.

It's pretty good. I love reading it. It should be on the reading list.

It's quite interesting. Compared with that kind of cool writing, there are always some unexpected points.

Come on, brothers, stock up on the food and grass that are so rare these days [Bookshelf plus one]

Worth watching, something a little different.

There is a bug, why not spread the technique?

It's tasteless to eat, so it's not a pity to throw it away. Hahahaha, the author is probably too old to be funny.

How to take the enemy without losing his life? ? ? ? ? ? ?

It looks good, I don't know what the rest of the writing will be like, to be determined

It's a masterpiece, and the writing rhythm is really good, but the number of words is too few and it's not enough to read.

After reading Chapter 130, I thought it was okay. This maid came here because she was talented. She was given a name without thinking about it. It was as subconscious as modern naming, and there was nothing she could do about it later. As for the inner drama of the three women, it is normal. After all, the setting is ancient times. It is normal to write about the worries of the daughter's family. It is normal to have some old-fashioned ideas. It is just a blush when thinking about it in my heart. After all, it is normal for a strong person to have admirers. I'll check it out later, for now I'll give it 5 stars.

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Bashi Deban, good, not bad

Spread sunflowers and nine suns to the world, and once you practice, you will be 100% loyal. How many people will be unwilling?