Cp: Draco Malfoy x Harry Potter, ending HE
If he could do it over again, Draco swore that he would never agree to attend some terrible Muggle wedding with Potter. Unfortunately, there are no ifs in life.
The Muggle car passed through the tunnel, but accidentally took the two people back to 1973.
That era was when Voldemort was rising rapidly.
Draco thought to himself: Great, three years after the Dark Lord was completely eliminated, he and Potter returned to a world ruled by the Dark Lord. What could be worse than this?
But fate seemed to be saying to him: Yes, Draco, yes.
Potter, who returned to 1973 with him, lost all his memories, even forgetting that he was a wizard.
Draco:…
Wait, without his memory, can Potter still be the savior? If Potter cannot be the savior, then who will defeat the Dark Lord? How can they go back to the original time?
Draco panicked.
Draco: Potter, you are a wizard.
Harry: Sir, this joke is not funny.
Draco: My goodness, Merlin, you really are a wizard!
Harry: Who is Merlin?
Draco: He's not important!
Harry: So... Who are you?
Draco: Your... Er, friend?
Harry: Okay, then I believe what you said.
Draco: Why?
Harry smiled: I believe in my friends.
Draco and Harry traveled to 1973 together, but Harry lost his memory. They had to find a way to survive in this chaotic era and find a way to return to the original world.
Reader comments
It's so rare, Draco is really timid, and he is finally not that aristocratic and elite style. The plot is also very novel. I am looking forward to the future development. I hope the author will continue to update it until it is completed and not run away.
I accidentally browsed the push notification, clicked on it and read it with interest. I felt that the writing style was a bit familiar. I clicked on the author and saw that it was actually the author of the dog bat article that I loved so much. Wow wow wow wow [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I fell in love with the same author's articles over and over again... So happy...
This article about Draco is really authentic. It's a very good product for the cowards. Harry is also a charming boyfriend. It's so delicious that I'm at a loss for words!
P. S. I don't know if there will be a scene involving the dog bat, I'll look forward to it.
A little catch-up, some random thoughts, there may be some spoilers (? Please read with caution.
To be honest, this is one of the few DeHavens on Tomato that I don't think is OOC.
Let's talk about the setting first. After the war, two people traveled through time and one lost his memory. In fact, it's not very novel, but maybe I haven't seen this type of movie much after all, so it's quite fresh for me. Amnesia is a good display of Harry's character and his personality background - kind, after all, he is the savior. And also showed the vigilance and sensitivity of being an Auror after the war. Then there was no longer the sense of celebrity that everyone knew and cared about. After all, he was not the savior at this period. He felt like a down-to-earth ordinary person. He no longer received special preferential treatment, and it felt quite fresh. Then he was worried about his colleagues in the coffee shop, and he recklessly relied on his body's muscle memory of magic to save people. The feeling of saving people regardless of his own safety felt so right. Let's talk about Malfoy. After the war, his original arrogant young master style was weakened. After traveling back to his parents' generation, he felt broken. He unconsciously relied on Potter, the only one who came from the same time and space as him. This kind of vague emotion was very good. Moreover, he reflects on the bad things he did before, and retains a certain poisonous tongue and arrogant character, which has a unique flavor. Another example is the anxious moment in the car, where he was afraid that something would happen to Potter when he fought against the Death Eaters alone, resisted his fear of them and returned to help, risked being caught and led Aurors to discover the accident in the coffee shop, etc., All of which showed his character traits, and the contrast with tsundere was fascinating.
Let's talk about the writing style. The writing style of this book is very good among the many fans I have read. The logic line is also clear. It can be seen that the author should have considered the plot arrangement. The early preparation for the emotional line is very good. In the past, I always watched the kind of movies that didn't have a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage and just came together, or the long descriptions looked awkward, but there was no such problem here.
And the update speed is very fast, currently there are two chapters a day, the author must have saved the manuscript!
That's all I can say. I personally understand it. If it's not accurate, I welcome discussion.
This is the first time I write such a long review on Tomato. Hehe, it may be a bit verbose, but I really want to express my love.
I hope the author will not stop updating and finish it successfully! Looking forward to further developments.
The writing is really good, and some of Bai De's early actions are not OOC. The writing is very delicate. In fact, there is a hint of fubu in the previous plot. I have seen the fubu written by my wife, and the writing is very powerful [heartfelt]
The extremely delicious original flavor Deha [love], Xiaolong's growth is very comfortable to watch, and the two of them are very fit and not OOC at all. This is the responsibility and reason between adults, oh, it's so delicious😋 This Xiaoha is the mother (Auror director, we love you so much [blowing kiss]), the bang is also the original coward, and tsundere is also a must-have. There is no intention to force development for CP, extremely natural, Chinese Rowling writes online! Two young people with legendary experiences will fight for a bright future in the magical world! The plot is also the teacher's usual micro-double plot. There is not much development in terms of relationship yet, but the two of them are each other's anchor. In short, they are a rare delicacy in the world. It is really worth it to see the teacher's HP and get to know such a great wife like the teacher! Teacher, I want to read your hp for the rest of my life [blowing kiss]
I've read the Dog Bat book before, it's so good! I took a look at this book when it was recommended. I thought the introduction was a bit boring. But when I looked up and saw the authoritative author, what else could I say? Trust me😋😋
"This introduction does not reflect the authority of the text at all." I have been disgusted with this introduction for a long time. The second half of the introduction feels like the traditional petty atmosphere of Deha and the two of them hanging together. It does not reflect the personality charm of the two at all. I saw this introduction during the recommendation period and I was not interested at all. I only read it after a quick glance at the author's name. It is because of the introduction that this book is so cold! ! ! (Is there anyone who feels the same as me? The author of the one-person blood book initiative changed the introduction [crying]
Let's just say that this book has 8.90 Million words. I haven't made any progress in the emotional drama for so long (actually, this book gave me a Platonic feeling). The author's emotions in these books are very restrained. That's right, you adults, go ahead and save/rule the world [making faces]
It's very good-looking, and the character's character development is very comprehensive, including Draco's timidity and the sense of family affection and justice. Harry still has a savior character, fearless and intelligent.
The current plot mainly focuses on Draco's undercover career. It feels like there will be a moment of transformation. Harry is currently suspicious of Draco, and it feels like a conflict will break out. The reason why Harry is not in control of the overall situation at present is because of amnesia. He only has fighting instinct but no overall vision. I feel that I am looking forward to the conflict with Draco when his memory comes back! I hope that the ending of James, Lily and Snape can be reversed. It would be great if all of them could he
It's pretty good. I read the introduction before and thought it was a bit average, so I haven't read it yet. I suddenly remembered to watch it last night, and I tied it all the way. I think the writing is very good and the plot is handled well, especially the characters of Draco and Harry, which I think are well grasped. Nothing particularly strange about it. The plot is very gripping, and the development in many places is natural and the logic is very smooth. I really can't wait to know what will happen next, and I don't leave everything else behind just because I want to write the emotional line (in fact, looking at it now, the emotional line has not developed much, but the two people get along very comfortably). Sometimes I look at it from another person's perspective, and then I can't wait to know the other person's perspective. I hope the author won't run away [crying] and is waiting for the author to finish it, so don't finish it so quickly. I hope the plot can be thicker and longer. Hey, I'm looking forward to the follow-up content.
Very nice! ! ! To be honest, I only watched a few HP movies when I was a kid, and I only remember a few fragments here and there, but I really enjoyed watching DeHavin and I don't know why [face covering]. This is the most satisfying DeHave I've ever read! I don't really like Xiang Fang, who I fell in love with as soon as I read it. I abandoned many of the stories as soon as I saw them. There has been little progress in their relationship up to this point, but the chains of fate bind them tightly together. It's so delicious! Woohoo, my xp is like this, it suits my taste so much! I won't talk about the plot and writing, it's so awesome, ma'am!
Looking at the title, I thought it was a story about time travel, so I haven't read it. When I clicked in, I found that the plot setting is very novel, the writing is good, and the characters are very close to the original work. Unknowingly, I have evened the progress orz is very interesting. I look forward to the update!
It's so beautiful [crying] I actually have no feelings for Deha. I read this book because I thought it had a good idea. I've always wanted to read this kind of book. The writing is very good, as if it was written by Rowling herself. It's so good to read. I'm so happy to see such a good-looking book. . . . .
The character description is very close to the original work. It doesn't feel OOC at all. Draco's growth is well described. They can't be friends under normal circumstances, but in the crisis that only they face, miracles will happen.
Teacher Shanshe's writing is still beautiful [Blowing Kiss] The plot is very coherent, and it is tied again without knowing it [Please update] The characters are also well controlled, and without being OOC, you can feel the teacher's new understanding of Deha, as if they really experienced all this in the original work, and they are completely brought to life! [Sending Hearts]
In fact, I want to write more, but I lack the language system and I don't know what to say to praise the teacher! In short, it is very, very, very well written! ! ! ദ്ദി ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ )
Teacher, I just smelled a burnt smell. I thought it might be a circuit problem, so I turned off the switch, but the burnt smell got stronger and stronger. I was thinking about calling 119, but I walked around again and there seemed to be nothing open at home. Then I suddenly realized that I was so stupid that I turned out to be my heart burning for you. 🔥ෆ(˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ 🔥
It's good to read. The article recommended by other sisters is indeed good to read. The only drawback is that the author cannot write a million words in one day [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Originally, I just wanted to read it to pass the lesson when I saw that there was no rating. I didn't expect the writing to be so good, and the plot and characters were well grasped. It was very comfortable to read. Harry's character is also very good. Harry, the amnesiac and very strategic Auror, is delicious. The only drawback is that it was still being serialized when I saw it! Cry bitterly
I stumbled across it by chance on the homepage. I saw that the rating was not very high and I didn't have high expectations. After watching it for a few days, it turned out to be surprisingly good-looking. The characters are not OOC at all. Some of Xiaolong's shortcomings are still there. They are not whitewashed very deliberately, but the plot and emotional lines develop naturally. Although it's not over yet, I hope my wife can continue to perform steadily. Highly recommended!
The emotions and details are super vivid, and it can slowly change the relationship between Harry and Draco without being OOC at all, and the plot is very novel. In short, it is very beautiful! ! [Blowing kiss] The author will update it soon, can you please update it soon! [Adoration][Blowing kiss]
The plot is very novel and the characterization is not OOC at all. I just didn't expect it to be so short [cry] [cry] [cry] I really don't want to catch up [cry] [cry] [cry]
It was so exciting, I really don't know how to describe it. I really can't say enough about the unfinished story. It's so painful to wait for the update. It's so beautiful and I really want to read it.
What I particularly like is the author's writing of Malfoy. This is the only one I have ever seen that wrote him in the least OOC way. He did not force him to become a good person, nor did he ignore his character shortcomings. The writing fits him very well, and sometimes I even hate this person when I see some of the plots. Then the other characters are also very three-dimensional, and the overt and covert fighting between the two parties is also very exciting and really makes you tense.
And the plot of this story is also very novel. I originally just clicked on a book casually, but I didn't expect it to be so brilliant.
It's just that the description of Deha's emotional line is still relatively vague at present. There is more to the main plot, and the progress of the two of them is slow. But it is still very interesting to watch two people bickering. I feel very comfortable. The author is asking for sweets🥺
When I first read this book, I thought it was some kind of ordinary time-travel novel, but after reading it, I found that it was completely different from what I thought! The writing is novel and the characters are completely non-ooc!
Very nice! The characters are very restored. Love this setting! I haven't seen the emotional scenes yet, but the early stages are very interesting. The only shortcoming, as mentioned in the hot reviews, is that my wife is not a god yet and cannot update a million words a day.
I enjoyed watching it... The character understanding and writing style are very natural. The flavor of the original work is so strong that I want to cry. The plot development and design fit together like gears, and there is no forced emotional line. It comes naturally... It really made me enjoy it.
Really nice to look at. Now that I have read the latest chapter, I hope that the father and son will recognize each other soon, and I also hope that the memory of Harry will be recalled soon. This type of writing is really nice. I hope the author will update every day, every day, every moment (just kidding).
Oh, yes, I still hope. The two of them can be together soon, hehe.
When I was chasing Fubu's book, I saw that my wife was updating this one. I've been keeping it for a while, and now it's even! Madam's writing skills are as solid as ever. There are nearly two hundred chapters, and the plot is rich and compact. If you read it in one sitting, you won't feel dragged out, but you will be able to whet your appetite. Looking forward to the following article, I wonder if Deha and Deha can return to the original world. They must go back. Although the old Fu Neng in this world died early, there are no other beloved relatives and friends here. It is too lonely for the two of them to depend on each other. I hope Deha and Ha can confess their identities to Zhan Li and Lucy before they return to the original world. Doesn't the magic world have the magic of blood traceability? It can shock four people with just one use. It must be very cool hahahahaha. I don't know how Regulus and others will arrange the Sect in this world, I look forward to it!
It's a very good book. I only gave it four stars because I have a lot of shame. There are very few things that I would consider perfect. But it's really good. The logic is clear and the rhythm is steady. The ratio of various description techniques is just right. It reads very smoothly. It is better than the "masterpiece" with a high score of 70% and 92➕
Oh my god, this book is amazing. There is nothing like Draco suddenly becoming elite. It is very close to the original book and there is no OC. It is also written in such a touching way that you can feel the bond between Harry and Draco.
Ah, I can't help it. It's so amazing. I'm already following the update. Why is the popularity so low? Hurry up and give me some heat. Oh my god, it's so close to the original work. I've read all the teacher's HP books. It's amazing. The interpretation of each character is very delicate. The feeling is unconscious, but it comes naturally. Forgive me for the lackluster language [love] [love] [love] [blowing kiss]
It's super nice. The little dragon is cowardly, but I think it's really not OOC to coward a dragon like this. Although Harry has lost his memory, his inner sense of justice and bravery has not disappeared. The background of the characters is very vivid. I hope my wife will continue to make more. I will always support her.
It's unexpectedly good-looking and fits the character. The important thing is that Draco's awkwardness is well portrayed. He is such a good person who is not very good and bad, but he can try to be a good person under the influence of Harry. However, deep-rooted concepts are indeed difficult to change. However, being an undercover agent gave him an opportunity to do the behavior he despised before.
The character descriptions are very close to the original novel, I really like Hade! Please go faster and look forward to subsequent discoveries
It looks good, it looks good, I don't think there is an OOC. Two people have become the most connected people in another time and space, and they have become people who talk to each other. Both of them are trying their best to change the ending. Draco's description is very good, and Harry's treatment is also very delicious. This makes me feel very excited (author, have you actually written 100 chapters and plan to publish them all at once to scare me to death, rub your hands. Jpg)
It looks good, the plot is reasonable and the characters are not OOC. I feel like I have regained the feeling of following those long articles when I first joined Deha. I am looking forward to the future development.
It's so rare, Draco is really timid, and he is finally not that aristocratic and elite style. The plot is also very novel. I am looking forward to the future development. I hope the author will continue to update it until it is completed and not run away.
I accidentally browsed the push notification, clicked on it and read it with interest. I felt that the writing style was a bit familiar. I clicked on the author and saw that it was actually the author of the dog bat article that I loved so much. Wow wow wow wow [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I fell in love with the same author's articles over and over again... So happy... This article about Draco is really authentic. It's a very good product for the cowards. Harry is also a charming boyfriend. It's so delicious that I'm at a loss for words! P. S. I don't know if there will be a scene involving the dog bat, I'll look forward to it.
A little catch-up, some random thoughts, there may be some spoilers (? Please read with caution. To be honest, this is one of the few DeHavens on Tomato that I don't think is OOC. Let's talk about the setting first. After the war, two people traveled through time and one lost his memory. In fact, it's not very novel, but maybe I haven't seen this type of movie much after all, so it's quite fresh for me. Amnesia is a good display of Harry's character and his personality background - kind, after all, he is the savior. And also showed the vigilance and sensitivity of being an Auror after the war. Then there was no longer the sense of celebrity that everyone knew and cared about. After all, he was not the savior at this period. He felt like a down-to-earth ordinary person. He no longer received special preferential treatment, and it felt quite fresh. Then he was worried about his colleagues in the coffee shop, and he recklessly relied on his body's muscle memory of magic to save people. The feeling of saving people regardless of his own safety felt so right. Let's talk about Malfoy. After the war, his original arrogant young master style was weakened. After traveling back to his parents' generation, he felt broken. He unconsciously relied on Potter, the only one who came from the same time and space as him. This kind of vague emotion was very good. Moreover, he reflects on the bad things he did before, and retains a certain poisonous tongue and arrogant character, which has a unique flavor. Another example is the anxious moment in the car, where he was afraid that something would happen to Potter when he fought against the Death Eaters alone, resisted his fear of them and returned to help, risked being caught and led Aurors to discover the accident in the coffee shop, etc., All of which showed his character traits, and the contrast with tsundere was fascinating. Let's talk about the writing style. The writing style of this book is very good among the many fans I have read. The logic line is also clear. It can be seen that the author should have considered the plot arrangement. The early preparation for the emotional line is very good. In the past, I always watched the kind of movies that didn't have a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage and just came together, or the long descriptions looked awkward, but there was no such problem here. And the update speed is very fast, currently there are two chapters a day, the author must have saved the manuscript! That's all I can say. I personally understand it. If it's not accurate, I welcome discussion. This is the first time I write such a long review on Tomato. Hehe, it may be a bit verbose, but I really want to express my love. I hope the author will not stop updating and finish it successfully! Looking forward to further developments.
The writing is really good, and some of Bai De's early actions are not OOC. The writing is very delicate. In fact, there is a hint of fubu in the previous plot. I have seen the fubu written by my wife, and the writing is very powerful [heartfelt]
The extremely delicious original flavor Deha [love], Xiaolong's growth is very comfortable to watch, and the two of them are very fit and not OOC at all. This is the responsibility and reason between adults, oh, it's so delicious😋 This Xiaoha is the mother (Auror director, we love you so much [blowing kiss]), the bang is also the original coward, and tsundere is also a must-have. There is no intention to force development for CP, extremely natural, Chinese Rowling writes online! Two young people with legendary experiences will fight for a bright future in the magical world! The plot is also the teacher's usual micro-double plot. There is not much development in terms of relationship yet, but the two of them are each other's anchor. In short, they are a rare delicacy in the world. It is really worth it to see the teacher's HP and get to know such a great wife like the teacher! Teacher, I want to read your hp for the rest of my life [blowing kiss] I've read the Dog Bat book before, it's so good! I took a look at this book when it was recommended. I thought the introduction was a bit boring. But when I looked up and saw the authoritative author, what else could I say? Trust me😋😋 "This introduction does not reflect the authority of the text at all." I have been disgusted with this introduction for a long time. The second half of the introduction feels like the traditional petty atmosphere of Deha and the two of them hanging together. It does not reflect the personality charm of the two at all. I saw this introduction during the recommendation period and I was not interested at all. I only read it after a quick glance at the author's name. It is because of the introduction that this book is so cold! ! ! (Is there anyone who feels the same as me? The author of the one-person blood book initiative changed the introduction [crying] Let's just say that this book has 8.90 Million words. I haven't made any progress in the emotional drama for so long (actually, this book gave me a Platonic feeling). The author's emotions in these books are very restrained. That's right, you adults, go ahead and save/rule the world [making faces]
It's very good-looking, and the character's character development is very comprehensive, including Draco's timidity and the sense of family affection and justice. Harry still has a savior character, fearless and intelligent. The current plot mainly focuses on Draco's undercover career. It feels like there will be a moment of transformation. Harry is currently suspicious of Draco, and it feels like a conflict will break out. The reason why Harry is not in control of the overall situation at present is because of amnesia. He only has fighting instinct but no overall vision. I feel that I am looking forward to the conflict with Draco when his memory comes back! I hope that the ending of James, Lily and Snape can be reversed. It would be great if all of them could he
It's pretty good. I read the introduction before and thought it was a bit average, so I haven't read it yet. I suddenly remembered to watch it last night, and I tied it all the way. I think the writing is very good and the plot is handled well, especially the characters of Draco and Harry, which I think are well grasped. Nothing particularly strange about it. The plot is very gripping, and the development in many places is natural and the logic is very smooth. I really can't wait to know what will happen next, and I don't leave everything else behind just because I want to write the emotional line (in fact, looking at it now, the emotional line has not developed much, but the two people get along very comfortably). Sometimes I look at it from another person's perspective, and then I can't wait to know the other person's perspective. I hope the author won't run away [crying] and is waiting for the author to finish it, so don't finish it so quickly. I hope the plot can be thicker and longer. Hey, I'm looking forward to the follow-up content.
Very nice! ! ! To be honest, I only watched a few HP movies when I was a kid, and I only remember a few fragments here and there, but I really enjoyed watching DeHavin and I don't know why [face covering]. This is the most satisfying DeHave I've ever read! I don't really like Xiang Fang, who I fell in love with as soon as I read it. I abandoned many of the stories as soon as I saw them. There has been little progress in their relationship up to this point, but the chains of fate bind them tightly together. It's so delicious! Woohoo, my xp is like this, it suits my taste so much! I won't talk about the plot and writing, it's so awesome, ma'am!
Looking at the title, I thought it was a story about time travel, so I haven't read it. When I clicked in, I found that the plot setting is very novel, the writing is good, and the characters are very close to the original work. Unknowingly, I have evened the progress orz is very interesting. I look forward to the update!
It's so beautiful [crying] I actually have no feelings for Deha. I read this book because I thought it had a good idea. I've always wanted to read this kind of book. The writing is very good, as if it was written by Rowling herself. It's so good to read. I'm so happy to see such a good-looking book. . . . .
The character description is very close to the original work. It doesn't feel OOC at all. Draco's growth is well described. They can't be friends under normal circumstances, but in the crisis that only they face, miracles will happen.
Teacher Shanshe's writing is still beautiful [Blowing Kiss] The plot is very coherent, and it is tied again without knowing it [Please update] The characters are also well controlled, and without being OOC, you can feel the teacher's new understanding of Deha, as if they really experienced all this in the original work, and they are completely brought to life! [Sending Hearts] In fact, I want to write more, but I lack the language system and I don't know what to say to praise the teacher! In short, it is very, very, very well written! ! ! ദ്ദി ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ ) Teacher, I just smelled a burnt smell. I thought it might be a circuit problem, so I turned off the switch, but the burnt smell got stronger and stronger. I was thinking about calling 119, but I walked around again and there seemed to be nothing open at home. Then I suddenly realized that I was so stupid that I turned out to be my heart burning for you. 🔥ෆ(˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ 🔥
It's good to read. The article recommended by other sisters is indeed good to read. The only drawback is that the author cannot write a million words in one day [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Originally, I just wanted to read it to pass the lesson when I saw that there was no rating. I didn't expect the writing to be so good, and the plot and characters were well grasped. It was very comfortable to read. Harry's character is also very good. Harry, the amnesiac and very strategic Auror, is delicious. The only drawback is that it was still being serialized when I saw it! Cry bitterly
I stumbled across it by chance on the homepage. I saw that the rating was not very high and I didn't have high expectations. After watching it for a few days, it turned out to be surprisingly good-looking. The characters are not OOC at all. Some of Xiaolong's shortcomings are still there. They are not whitewashed very deliberately, but the plot and emotional lines develop naturally. Although it's not over yet, I hope my wife can continue to perform steadily. Highly recommended!
The emotions and details are super vivid, and it can slowly change the relationship between Harry and Draco without being OOC at all, and the plot is very novel. In short, it is very beautiful! ! [Blowing kiss] The author will update it soon, can you please update it soon! [Adoration][Blowing kiss]
The plot is very novel and the characterization is not OOC at all. I just didn't expect it to be so short [cry] [cry] [cry] I really don't want to catch up [cry] [cry] [cry]
It was so exciting, I really don't know how to describe it. I really can't say enough about the unfinished story. It's so painful to wait for the update. It's so beautiful and I really want to read it. What I particularly like is the author's writing of Malfoy. This is the only one I have ever seen that wrote him in the least OOC way. He did not force him to become a good person, nor did he ignore his character shortcomings. The writing fits him very well, and sometimes I even hate this person when I see some of the plots. Then the other characters are also very three-dimensional, and the overt and covert fighting between the two parties is also very exciting and really makes you tense. And the plot of this story is also very novel. I originally just clicked on a book casually, but I didn't expect it to be so brilliant. It's just that the description of Deha's emotional line is still relatively vague at present. There is more to the main plot, and the progress of the two of them is slow. But it is still very interesting to watch two people bickering. I feel very comfortable. The author is asking for sweets🥺
When I first read this book, I thought it was some kind of ordinary time-travel novel, but after reading it, I found that it was completely different from what I thought! The writing is novel and the characters are completely non-ooc!
Very nice! The characters are very restored. Love this setting! I haven't seen the emotional scenes yet, but the early stages are very interesting. The only shortcoming, as mentioned in the hot reviews, is that my wife is not a god yet and cannot update a million words a day.
I enjoyed watching it... The character understanding and writing style are very natural. The flavor of the original work is so strong that I want to cry. The plot development and design fit together like gears, and there is no forced emotional line. It comes naturally... It really made me enjoy it.
Really nice to look at. Now that I have read the latest chapter, I hope that the father and son will recognize each other soon, and I also hope that the memory of Harry will be recalled soon. This type of writing is really nice. I hope the author will update every day, every day, every moment (just kidding). Oh, yes, I still hope. The two of them can be together soon, hehe.
When I was chasing Fubu's book, I saw that my wife was updating this one. I've been keeping it for a while, and now it's even! Madam's writing skills are as solid as ever. There are nearly two hundred chapters, and the plot is rich and compact. If you read it in one sitting, you won't feel dragged out, but you will be able to whet your appetite. Looking forward to the following article, I wonder if Deha and Deha can return to the original world. They must go back. Although the old Fu Neng in this world died early, there are no other beloved relatives and friends here. It is too lonely for the two of them to depend on each other. I hope Deha and Ha can confess their identities to Zhan Li and Lucy before they return to the original world. Doesn't the magic world have the magic of blood traceability? It can shock four people with just one use. It must be very cool hahahahaha. I don't know how Regulus and others will arrange the Sect in this world, I look forward to it!
It's a very good book. I only gave it four stars because I have a lot of shame. There are very few things that I would consider perfect. But it's really good. The logic is clear and the rhythm is steady. The ratio of various description techniques is just right. It reads very smoothly. It is better than the "masterpiece" with a high score of 70% and 92➕
Oh my god, this book is amazing. There is nothing like Draco suddenly becoming elite. It is very close to the original book and there is no OC. It is also written in such a touching way that you can feel the bond between Harry and Draco. Ah, I can't help it. It's so amazing. I'm already following the update. Why is the popularity so low? Hurry up and give me some heat. Oh my god, it's so close to the original work. I've read all the teacher's HP books. It's amazing. The interpretation of each character is very delicate. The feeling is unconscious, but it comes naturally. Forgive me for the lackluster language [love] [love] [love] [blowing kiss]
It's super nice. The little dragon is cowardly, but I think it's really not OOC to coward a dragon like this. Although Harry has lost his memory, his inner sense of justice and bravery has not disappeared. The background of the characters is very vivid. I hope my wife will continue to make more. I will always support her.
It's unexpectedly good-looking and fits the character. The important thing is that Draco's awkwardness is well portrayed. He is such a good person who is not very good and bad, but he can try to be a good person under the influence of Harry. However, deep-rooted concepts are indeed difficult to change. However, being an undercover agent gave him an opportunity to do the behavior he despised before.
The character descriptions are very close to the original novel, I really like Hade! Please go faster and look forward to subsequent discoveries
It looks good, it looks good, I don't think there is an OOC. Two people have become the most connected people in another time and space, and they have become people who talk to each other. Both of them are trying their best to change the ending. Draco's description is very good, and Harry's treatment is also very delicious. This makes me feel very excited (author, have you actually written 100 chapters and plan to publish them all at once to scare me to death, rub your hands. Jpg)
It looks good, the plot is reasonable and the characters are not OOC. I feel like I have regained the feeling of following those long articles when I first joined Deha. I am looking forward to the future development.