After the Picked-Up Sister Became an Immortal, She Came Back to Snatch Her Bride.

I took a small look at a few pictures, they are okay, pretty good, these memories explain a lot Looking back, the protagonist's life was in vain and he was speechless.

When does the heroine steal a bride? What are you writing about? I haven't written about the female protagonist cultivating immortality. I came here because of the title. It turns out that you are over 50 and haven't written about the female protagonist cultivating immortality. Please change your name.

Very good, very stimulating [thinking] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] If the author plans to write a long book, this book will be very good, but if it is less than 500,000 words, a lot of content will be lost. The story before becoming an immortal is so interesting that I can't even imagine how much more I could write after marrying. The author must persist, and a good story must be savored slowly. [Thinking][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly]

Yes, pure love ennnnn is very pure. The author knows how to write. I was in tears from the beginning to the end. You know, I am a thousand-year-old bandage. I kept grinning the whole time [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]. It's very beautiful.

The writing is good, and it fits my imagination of picking up a younger sister and bringing her back to be raised. At first, she was just a family member, but later she was used to strengthen her body (bushi). It's not toxic at all. If I have to say it, the male protagonist now only has the talent to practice martial arts but no spiritual roots. He and his sister may have immortality, which is a foreshadowing of the lifespan theory (Brother Han, can you really become an immortal without spiritual roots?), But the plot has just begun anyway, so I believe the author.

For now, the pace is okay. Although most people read it for the scene where the sister returns from cultivating immortality, the rhythm of explaining the causes and consequences is also okay. However, this type of book focuses on writing about the daily life of two people. If the author writes later after the sister goes to cultivate immortality, the time between the two people will be separated. If it is too long, if it is developed separately, there is a high probability that the book will be dull, because I have read this type a lot, and the daily writing is very good at the beginning, but later it is separated for the purpose of upgrading, and the length is too long, so it will become dull in an instant. Here Tomato talks about fast pace, and it depends on how the author grasps the rhythm in the middle.

Hiss~ I feel that some of the plot advancement is taken for granted. For example, when I met Liu Qingshuang for the second time, I didn't consider whether the name was the same in such a large area. Although I understood that the plot should be advanced, it was still quite uncomfortable logically. He also has a physique that is rare in a hundred years and a rare one in ten thousand years. Isn't it easy to leave a mortal in the sect? I should be thankful to God if I can join their sect. [I feel wronged] My sister didn't even consider this possibility. The same goes for saying goodbye when entering the sect, which feels a bit casual. But the interaction with my sister is quite interesting.

Not smelly, a delicious lump of "Dafen" [thoughts] I like to watch this kind of thing, half redemptive, half yandere, half dependent, "brother and sister love" [laughing] I don't have much strength, but it feels delicious [licking screen] The structure is neat and organized, the content and details are fully described but not excessive, with just a hint of curiosity [learned] I'm still a "worm egg" now, and I finally found something more delicious [get it] Don't just trust some people who have a rating of 9 or more. You can look for more negative reviews to see what you can't accept. Screen them in advance, but screen out the bad reviews. Although I only see a 7.1 Rating now, I hope he can get better and appear in more people's eyes. The author will update soon [please update] Come on! [Full] [full] [full] [bookshelf plus one] [bookshelf plus one] [bookshelf plus one] [fear] [fear] [fear]

It's a very interesting book, with an emotional development process and an emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists. The female protagonist is a bit gravity-defying, but essentially possessive in love. It's a fresh and refreshing love novel, worth reading [Like][Like][Like]

I've read the first 20 chapters, so far it's pretty good. I recall this part as a childhood sweetheart, but I feel like in ancient times, I've rarely seen this kind of subject matter before. Generally speaking, it's okay, but after seeing other people's comments, it's quite vicious, so I want to taste it [Thinking]

This makes me a little envious, but this envy is so futile, because to me now, the longed-for future is as far away as the breeze that cannot row the boat, and the broken bridge that has never crossed the remaining snow...

It's not a slow-burn [lick the screen] [lick the screen], it's too addictive

It's so beautiful. The male and female protagonists are childhood sweethearts. The relationship between the two is very natural, and the family relationship is also good. It's just the younger sister who takes the initiative at the moment. I want to see when the male protagonist will counterattack, haha There is no ambiguity about the single female protagonist. The so-called engagement partner also approached the male protagonist with purpose. The male protagonist was probably worried about being different from the female protagonist Xianfan and was afraid of delaying the female protagonist. But now the male protagonist has solved the knot.

It looks good. If you like it, come and see more [lick the screen] and update it soon. Deng Deng↗Deng Deng↘Deng Deng↘ Ding Deng ↗ Ding Deng ↘ Ding Deng ↗ Ding Deng ↘ Ding Deng ↗ Deng Deng↗Deng Deng↘Deng Deng↘（～～～） They sell hope and create panic😱I sell my dignity😢but I can't get a tael of gold💵Bravery and responsibility😃soul and kindness🥰can't be worth a beautiful skin anyway😶numb blood and tears mark😶the end of a life scrawled 😔I was in a hurry all the way😨Looking at ghosts selling stolen goods in the daytime🤗Sad resistance😡Don't laugh at me crazy🤫I don't want this flesh and blood to become painless and it gives me the kind of pain that is worse than death😫But I can only have nothing but nothing✉️Looking at that These so-called righteous and noble people are cursing me. I am sick. He gave me the kind of pain that is worse than death, but I only have the emptiness of nothing. Looking at the so-called righteous, noble and ugly people, they are cursing me. 🗣He gave me the kind of madness that laughs and calls deer a horse, but I can only have the dream of dying generously 😌Looking at those so-called civilizations and victorious people 🤐 judging me with a thousand fingers. I am sick. A child shoots all aliens with 98k. When people go to the toilet, the excrement will fall into the gap between the two valleys, and the excrement will spurt out like a fountain. The helicopter's wing fell off, and it is a younger brother without wings. Asking for the ball mud music to pick up the hero. Trivia is to use two Flutters and one Super Ambitious Bobo. Give yourself a handjob and you'll actually just make a new discovery. Experts say eating can relieve hunger

The emotional description is logical and reasonable. Belongs to slow-burn, in this fast-paced era. Everyone generally likes the kind that you fall in love with right from the start, but I think that is meaningless. If that's the case, why not just read the book? I think the author's writing is very good, with a cause-and-effect relationship, and the description of emotions before and after is logical.

Alas, a book with great potential. It will definitely be a high-quality product in the future. Come in now while there are few people and follow it from beginning to end. By then I will be a regular reader. I really recommend it. You should all know that it is really a big thing like a tomato, and there is another piece of gold coming out of it. Think about how difficult it is for us, panning for gold in 10 miles every day. Finally this is what I discovered and read more. Because I read books quickly, the review lasted less than 30 minutes, so don't think that I am a fake or something like that. I am almost sincere. If you don't believe me, just look at my homepage and see that I have read so many books and that I have been reading for a certain amount of time. You will know that I am not a fake.

It's plain with some ups and downs, which is actually pretty good, but I really don't know what the flashback at the beginning means.

It looks good, but in some aspects, ahem, although the writing is obscure and sometimes hard to understand, you can still tell it by reading the comments. And then some of the plots are quite funny and turn into bombs [laughs]

Good? How to describe it? If you use expressions to describe the novel, it might be like this: [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] But if it's not very acceptable, it's probably like this [what] [awkward laugh] [stare] [petrified] [like]

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good.

Yes, generally yes. If there could be more yandere plot, I would like this one.

As of Chapter 68 My practice is still in its infancy, so I suspect it will be a demonstration of strength. The plot of the interaction with the sister is good, it is a good daily novel, but there is also a plot of a god (Emperor Ziwei), and I finally see a normal brother-sister relationship. It's currently non-toxic, so give it five-star support.

Only by doing more updates a day can we retain people.

The description of the action scenes is just like watching the show, which is great👍🏻

The author thinks you are cruel. I saw you haven't finished reminiscing for a long time. I originally wanted to give it four stars and wait for you to finish reminiscing before I let you kick me. With the latest few pictures, I have desire again [laughing evilly] Well, it's a meaningless desire [full]

I haven't seen such a normal brother-sister relationship for a long time [crying]

I went and read so many books that I finally found gold. But the content is a bit short. The author should update it soon.

Okay, okay, I have to give Lao Zu a 5-star review, remember to use Braille [smile]

I saw Chapter 70. So far it's pretty good. I think it's a good book.

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good