Divine Eagle: Quanzhen Has a Grudge-Holding Real Person!

It's so good-looking, the protagonist is simply awesome, he is upright and decisive in killing, repaying kindness with kindness and revenge with hatred. When he was young, he was injured by Li Mochou, but after his martial arts improved, he immediately took revenge and chased Li Mochou to kill him. And he also has a mouth, which he really likes.

I read the latest chapters in one go. The book is good. The settings of Wang Chongyang and the Western Monk are very innovative. However, I still hope that the author will consider the issue of female protagonists. My idea is that there will either be no female protagonist and the male protagonist will focus on practicing Taoism, or there will be multiple female protagonists and the male protagonist will open his heart. Because this is Jin Yong's comprehensive remake after all, if the male protagonist only needs a few famous battles to practice Taoism in Zhongnan Mountain, he will be like Zhang Sanfeng and no one will dare to provoke him. Then there will be nothing to watch in the plot, and the male protagonist is a time traveler after all.

It's okay. The protagonist's character is okay, but the plot arrangement is quite depressing. It was previously announced that it will feel better after 60 chapters. To be honest, it feels a little bit better. The grafting of the plot outside the original drama is a bit stiff. I can see that it has basically completely separated from the original work. However, some details, especially the Chongyang Patriarch and the Xiantian Kung, are full of doubts and fantasy. Please remind me, you use The original work attracts fans, but writing a lot of original plots will first arouse the resistance of the original people. Of course, it does not mean that it is not possible. The other is that the grafting of the plot can still see a sense of inconsistency, as well as the plot of the Chongyang Patriarch. I personally don't like it very much. I will not analyze the specific reasons. The main reason is that the sense of abruptness is very strong. Even if I give four stars, the details of the writing and the character of the protagonist are okay.

This is a very good half of the book. I love it. The protagonist kills decisively and has no regrets. I hope the author will work harder. Good book, good setting, three correct views, I can no longer stand those who accept Li Mochou. What does depression look like in reality? When I see a girl, I have to accept it, and I am speechless.

Although there are some shortcomings in some places, the novel is still very good, and there is no poisonous point that discourages people from giving up. Although the protagonist's character is quite special, it is not very three-dimensional, and there are still few outstanding points in the creation. There is no problem with the speed of the plot advancement. It can be seen that the author does not write casually and has a good grasp of the speed. Also, quick update [anger]

It's very interesting to watch. The protagonist is decent, witty and decisive, brave and resourceful. The plot can be said to be fascinating. First, she exchanges love tokens with Cheng Ying to determine the heroine. The heroine appears in a somewhat cool opening chapter and then they are separated and reunited. I just don't know how to arrange the protagonist and heroine to reform the sect system? Or live in seclusion? In addition, there is the daily life of accepting Yang Guo as his disciple, as well as the early villain Zhao Zhijing seeking his own death, and then being demoted to the point of thinking about crossing the cliff. There is also the suspense of "Wang Chongyang" that is difficult to distinguish between true and false, which adds a bit of conspiracy theory. People can't help but look forward to what the outcome will be? What is the purpose of "Wang Chongyang" who teaches the protagonist innate skills? Could it be that the Chongyang Patriarch practiced Qi and transformed into a spirit, and his physical body became immortal, but his energy was exhausted and his body was taken away by the Yuanshen? ! ? Holy shit, the more I think about it, the more terrifying it becomes. I guess that the protagonist in the follow-up may use the Nine Yang Divine Skill and the Innate Skill to complement each other, use cultivation to dominate the world, and become a martial arts legend! That's almost enough. It's pointless if the follow-up combat power is too high [exploration]

It's so cool, there's no romance like in fan fiction, there's no system to slowly growing up. The protagonist's personality is also relatively straightforward. Anyway, I can't find fault with it now [Like] Seeing that there is no big problem now, please support the work. [Praise]

A+, there is no problem with the logic. The author has a lot of experience in martial arts novels, the history is okay, and the writing style is also good. Some people said that the author changed too many things and thought it was very poisonous. I feel that the author's writing is quite good, but he has added a lot of other things, such as the branch line of the Western Regions and Wang Chongyang's branch line. But nothing related to the original work has been changed at all. Many details of the original work have been restored. It can be seen that the author is also a fastidious person. What makes me even more pleased is that there are no traces of AI in the author's book, which makes it very comfortable to read.

Yes, it's quite interesting. The character of the protagonist doesn't have any bad points. He is a slightly aloof type. He kills decisively and does not overwhelm his fighting ability. He is not a loser. The plot and fights are acceptable. I just don't know how the author's heroine will arrange it. Now I know that Cheng Ying and Gongsun like him. I'm looking forward to it.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Start today and never change. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

The suspense is set up very well, and your reading rate is up [snickering][smirking][smirking]

This is a very nice book, not the mindless and invincible ones on the market now. Although it only has 5 or 60 chapters, it does not prevent from this short length that it can be seen that it is a good book and the author is careful ❤️, but I hope the author will update it quickly because I really want to read it.

Let me give you some encouragement first. At present, the author has a lot of good ideas for Zhen's new story. It's good to develop the protagonist's spiritual practice and enlightenment. The king is not dead and the plot is refreshing. It's just that there are plot flaws and the author's overly deliberate plot arrangements (Yang Guo's plot still fits the development of the original work in the end). It feels like some changes and 🦋 effects have begun to promote the plot, but they can't be reversed by big hands. The detail processing in many places is like this, among which Yang Guo's line is the most obvious. In comparison, Zhen's line is relatively successful. At this point, many times the character has already been established. How to shape it is no longer the final say in the original work. It is a question of what the current character should do and how to choose at this point in time, not what the original character should do and how to choose at this point in time! I trust you, the author, are playing with fire. At present, you have a secret love for the protagonist, a secret relationship with the protagonist, and the protagonist's true identity. This kind of conflict is bound to happen. Even if you don't write many emotional dramas, you still have to be pushed to write. This kind of mishandling can be very poisonous, and it has already been written to this point. All I can say is go for it! See the rating👀The follow-up plot will decide whether to modify it or not.

Overall, it's worth reading, but the title is very confusing. It feels like the plot can only begin after at least 400 chapters of the title. It should be a single female protagonist, and the protagonist is probably neutral and lawful. The author added a lot of his own ideas based on the original work, such as the Western Region chapter and the fake death on the Double Ninth Festival, but it still feels a bit abrupt and not handled very well. I can only say that the novelty is commendable. But it is still a cool article, and the writing style and logic are relatively natural. There are no obvious traces of AI. If you like it, you can definitely read it.

It's interesting. It's not the usual "Jin Qun Xia Zhuan" about upgrading and fighting monsters. On the contrary, it combines some rule-based ghost stories and mystery novels. It combines the unsolved mysteries of Chongyang Patriarch with the world of martial arts. It's very interesting and mind-blowing. Please continue to write well.

It's good to read. Except for the Wang Chongyang part which is like a weird story, the rest of the writing is really good [Like] [Like] [Like]

It feels like a book with at least an 8.5 Rating... Why is the rating so low! ! ! The plot is smooth and the description of growth is good. The schizophrenia crisis is indeed a bit depressing, but it has no impact and is resolved quickly.

I'm so dizzy, I have to be so dizzy. Reading this author's book makes me feel peaceful, and the words and sentences are very restrained (I haven't read it yet, so I'll just talk about the parts I've read). It has a plot, and it's not about taking anything regardless of the excitement. This is what I like.

It can be good to watch. The protagonist acts openly and aboveboard, kills decisively but not indiscriminately. He is very chivalrous. I see that there is a female protagonist, but I haven't written an emotional scene yet. I hope I can write it well, or stop writing it. If the emotional scene is written, it will not gain points. If it is written poorly, it will really lose points [Chigua]

It's awesome, it's well written, and everyone can see it. The author is very talented in writing supernatural thrillers, which makes people want to read more. The protagonist has a very upright character. It will be better if he rebels and becomes a shot in the future (I am not a shot control)

It's okay, but when reading novels, it pays to have a sense of substitution. I feel like I have a good point, and it's suspenseful but not suspenseful. In short, I don't know where it came from. Let's take a look again… The big point is that the protagonist is a fine character, and the chapters 80 to 90 are simply too abstract. The author wouldn't think this is very interesting, right? It's poisonous. It is recommended to skip it directly as it will not affect the overall plot.

It's good-looking, I'm not flattering you, it's good-looking anyway. If you want me to give you some wonderful comments, I'm a rough person and can't say it [laughs awkwardly], but the system of Jin Yong's world keeps attracting me to watch it. Anyway, it's quite good-looking.

Brothers, if you like to read The Condor Trilogy, then I really highly recommend this book. The plot is reasonable and smooth, and the protagonist's character has a very upright outlook. She doesn't have to look away because she is a beauty in the original work. They all deal with the matter, and each supporting character has a distinct personality. For example, Zhen Zhibing is not forced to be in the dark because of the incident with Xiao Longnu in the original work. This character has also been sublimated through a reasonable plot. In addition, including the Quanzhen Seven Sons, when watching movies and TV series, I will not like these characters a little, but through this book, I also saw another perspective. For the protagonist, we may hate him, but from other standpoints, they have not done anything wrong. They are all true heroes. Strongly recommend to brothers [plus one on the bookshelf] [send heart]

This is the best article I have seen written in the past few months, and it is also the best Shen Diao fan article I have seen written on Tomato.

He has his own story, not Jin Yong's style, but he is also a swashbuckler, he has revenge, he doesn't have a harem, he can face his own feelings, and it's rare to see a fanfic with a positive outlook on things. I don't quite understand why the score is so low.

It's pretty good. After reading more than 70 or 80 chapters, at least there are really no big problems. The quality is online. It can quote some contents from Buddhist scriptures, not just to improve martial arts. I read some negative reviews, and I left them writing about the resurrection of the Chongyang Patriarch, and then gave negative reviews. I couldn't understand it. The logic is reasonable and the plot is reasonable. Isn't this pretty good?

I've seen the latest chapter. The characters have distinct personalities, the protagonist is righteous, and the characters are vivid, but the update is too short.

The writing is very good. First of all, the plot arrangement is very comfortable and does not make people feel too abrupt. The advancement of the plot is not delayed and the layers are just right. The author also has a good grasp of the protagonist's strength without being overwhelming. The author of the outline of this book is also careful.

I was misled by the title of the book and thought it was an old man's story, but I didn't expect it to be quite exciting. The protagonist's character design is passable. Although there are cheats, it is not a mindless story. The emotional line is also handled well. Currently, it is five stars.

I read the latest chapter in one go. It's great. Good luck, author.