After Hearing Their Voices, the Dimensional Wall Was Broken

I watched the first male protagonist's part, when I saw my brother losing his memory and pretending that he didn't recognize me. I feel like there aren't many descriptions of my brother in the early stage, and it's more of a complaint from me. Sometimes the span is too big and I feel like the plot is a little fragmented. This also led to me always treating my brother as an emotionless NPC when reading the article. I thought he was the person who gave me the task, and his task was to help me get into a good university hahahahahahaha. But he seemed to be like this in the early days? Because I remember the article said that after I entered the game, he realized that he didn't only have a few lines. So I actually wanted to see a description of the male protagonist's image and psychological activities, and reading the article felt more like I was writing a diary, because the early male protagonist didn't feel like the male protagonist. All in all, I quite like this subject matter! Listening to the Voice and Traveling Like the previous writing method of paralleling reality and the game, but I feel that the transformation between the two is a bit stiff and I feel a little uncomfortable. Just a personal reflection, thousands of people have different opinions. It's normal for one-size-fits-all clothes not to fit, it's just a matter of personal experience. And I hope my wife can write better and better!

We were also impressed by the male protagonist's character. It's so cutely written! ! Each male protagonist is so cute and lively, and they incorporate a lot of current hot topics. You must keep writing, okay, goddess, I will always support you [almost crying]

It's really beautiful. My favorite is Huayueye. It fits my XP very well. The character setting is very full. When will the author update it? [What]

It's so novel, the sense of immersion is very good, and it looks good.

I will tell you in the most direct, straightforward, and least roundabout terms that this is the most readable and best travel novel by foreign persimmons. The interaction is really delicious! Heart-wrenching radar automatically responds, dual worlds and two lines of narrative. I always feel that the plot is a bit rushed, and the portrayal of my brother is relatively shallow.