Conquering the Romance Route? Cultivating Immortality Is So Much Better!

At the beginning, the dummy kills and preys in front of the male protagonist, but the male protagonist still can't think of a way to kill her.

Okay, as for the fake ones, I can honestly say that the main character can't even beat him [covers his face], so how can he save others, and he's still a gangster? You can refer to the gangsters in the past. If the main character is an ordinary person and has died long ago, I don't know why someone would pity the enemy. You can do it but don't drag other people along. She saves herself without compromising other people. She is okay, but she tells others to save and then doesn't go herself, which is moral kidnapping. Others are purely Cs, and the chapter where the system is exposed, Chun Chun can't do anything 🤦, you can't explain where the medicine for resurrecting the dead comes from, and the gang boss was a boy with middle school disease when he was young, and he has read novels, you can't explain it at all. A normal person knows that you have a system, just be normal, as long as it's not a stone, I gave four stars because I haven't cultivated yet. In fact, as long as you improve your favor every day for two or three months at most, you will become an immortal.

It's still good. There's no problem with the story structure and the logic of the characters. Apart from some useless comments, it's fine. I would say that reading a novel is like eating. Different dishes have different tastes. As long as there are no problems with the dishes themselves, there's nothing to say. Those who read the setting of the novel and come back later complain about the setting of the novel. They say the good ones are unplayable, and the bad ones are just to stir up trouble. The novel is currently good, the protagonist's character, story structure and various The content of the other characters is quite good, and it can be seen that they have their own thoughts in it. Tomato has never been blind to emotional lines, but has never seen the kind of forced emotional lines to cope with the plot, forcing the plot and character changes that they don't like into the audience's mouth. In the end, the book review is just complaining. Those who want to see ordinary god-like protagonists and various delicate characters can give it a try. At least the pace is okay so far, there is intersection, but it is also within the main development line of the story.

The best romance novel I found on Tomato this year. The plot does not drag on, and the male protagonist is very proactive and action-oriented, which is really good. He is much better than the indecisive male protagonist, and it is very comfortable to watch.

OK, the protagonist is a god full of humanity, he is simply a god. The moonlight shines brightly, and the lotus pond shines brightly. The white horse rides on it, and the lotus pond crosses it. Lotus pond nori には, ニラを Planting える.ニラのがきキュウリがる. Behind the back of the キュウリのにはもうつike があり, そこにはつのike がある. The middle of the pond is the snail, the snail is the shell, and the snail is the shell of the snail.

The protagonist is not only reincarnated as a Japanese. Still be Japanese. Treat readers as Japanese

It's good so far, but the main character is bent on cultivating immortality, and is about to die in the end. He has enough points, and redeems the skills for cultivating immortality. I have nothing to say, here you go, here you go 🤦 But I feel that the battle scene can be described a little more to make it look more handsome. Why not update? Why don't you stop it, let alone leave it unfinished?

It's very good-looking, yes, but why do some people regard it as a love story? Don't think there will really be a heroine by then My writing is getting worse and worse. I hope I can take some time to settle it down.

So far, there are no major problems. I feel like I can continue pursuing it.

This book is amazing, in every sense of the word 🤦