Traveling Through Tokyo: JK Death Chronicles

So pretty But what should I say? For those who understand Japanese, this Japanese sounds strange. . It feels unnecessary. . I have lived in Tokyo for more than 10 years. . It looks like a machine. . [Laughing and crying], it's so uncomfortable to be half-learned in Japanese. Moreover, the word count is too high, so I have to write it once and then translate it again [laughing and crying]

To be honest, it's not like a web novel, but more like a Japanese light novel. Personally speaking, the narrative structure and story are acceptable to me. As for the AI ​​in the comment area and the use of Japanese, I can only say that it's free and that's okay. Moreover, adding Japanese characters to Japanese backgrounds is a relatively common technique. Come on! The rhythm has been a bit messy lately, with inexplicable intelligent ghosts and inexplicable subplots...

Your agent function is not as good as summoning a person from the world of death. The most poisonous thing about this kind of solipsism is to distribute the power.

The writing is very delicate, not brainless, and looks very comfortable. Although it is a transformation, it can actually be seen as a pure female protagonist. Personally, I prefer the male heart to the female body, and don't fall into the female body too quickly. However, this is a personal preference. The overall shortcomings do not hide the good points. If you maintain the current rhythm, you should be able to go above 9 points. In addition, the author seems to be doing both? I hope such a large amount of updates every day will not affect the quality.

It took me a few days to read before commenting. The author's writing is excellent, and it is one of the few Bleach fan fictions that is wonderfully written. What I like most is that every character in this novel has an online IQ, and there is no dementia or lack of logic. At most, the author's writing skills need to be improved. After all, new writers still need to be encouraged.

Alas (╥╯╰╥)งObviously it is such a good book. It is a rare good book to find. I knew it when I saw the reshaping of the body. It is also a behind-the-scenes role flow with multiple vests. It is a pity. Farewell.

It's quite interesting, but the evil spirits in reality feel too weak now. When the protagonist's Zanpakutō starts to figure out that these small Karami are not all one-sworded, I think we can let the virtual ones appear on the stage to strengthen the importance of the Shinigami to reality.

It's okay, but the AI smell is too strong in some places. Please check it out before posting next time. The Quincy uses Shunpo, and then he engages in a thousand-year blood feud [laughing and crying]

Finally, there is this kind of boring AI article, but it's a pity that there are too few updates. The incomprehensible Japanese language affects the perception too much.

It's very interesting. The author just needs to stop updating it.

The author's writing is very detailed, the rhythm is smooth, and the narrative is smooth without any uncomfortable bugs or structural opacity. I am looking forward to the follow-up

Very good, the story is well drawn, better than 90% of Tomato's Japanese extraordinary novels

There is absolutely no need for the author to shut down the spirit body of the God of Death. The spirit body in the world of Death can be seen by people with spiritual pressure and attacked by objects made of weapons. And for a person of the captain's level, his high spiritual pressure and high concentration of spiritual energy can be directly touched by ordinary people without spiritual pressure.

It's okay, but the sentences in each paragraph are too long [Thinking] I hope the author will improve

Very good article, I recommend updating it

I read a few chapters and felt good. Keep up the good work The plot is great and every character is very detailed. Shiro's writing is so interesting. The pace is just a bit slow, I want to see the protagonist killing everyone! ! There is only one servant now (it must be Hino Kasumi, otherwise there wouldn't be so much space), how much space would it take to write about the entire Gotei Thirteen Team? [Pouts]

A rare Bleach fanfic that can actually reduce the frequency of Japanese language. I don't really want to see the love line, but I can still look forward to it in the future.

The beginning is a bit classic, but then the writing is very good, and the occasional Japanese interspersed is quite interesting. Overall, it is very Japanese.

It's pretty good, but Japanese appears from time to time, which is very annoying. Does the author want to show that his Japanese skills are very good?

It's interesting to have a look first.

It's pretty good. It's just that saying one sentence in Japanese and Chinese affects the perception.

I've read two chapters and it's pretty good. I'll put it on my bookshelf and follow it slowly [Admiration] Very well written! The character design of the main character Meixiang is so lovable! I hope I won't get married

Come on come on! I want to see behind the scenes! Protagonist, practice quickly! ! I've been following it for more than a month, and I'm finally able to see behind the scenes! [Laughing evilly] Come on, author! !

Looks pretty good, I don't know why the rating is so low

Except for the Japanese words in the middle, everything else is okay and there is no problem [Chigua]

Tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger tiger

Okay, it feels good

It's beautiful, but the word count is too few.

Beautiful oh oh oh oh oh

Well written, keep it up