On Becoming a JK and Harvesting Emotions in Tokyo

So pretty But what should I say? For those who understand Japanese, this Japanese sounds strange. . It feels unnecessary. . I have lived in Tokyo for more than 10 years. . It looks like a machine. . [Laughing and crying], it's so uncomfortable to be half-learned in Japanese. Moreover, the word count is too high, so I have to write it once and then translate it again [laughing and crying]

To be honest, it's not like a web novel, but more like a Japanese light novel. Personally speaking, the narrative structure and story are acceptable to me. As for the AI ​​in the comment area and the use of Japanese, I can only say that it's free and that's okay. Moreover, adding Japanese characters to Japanese backgrounds is a relatively common technique. Come on! The rhythm has been a bit messy lately, with inexplicable intelligent ghosts and inexplicable subplots...

Your agent function is not as good as summoning a person from the world of death. The most poisonous thing about this kind of solipsism is to distribute the power.

The writing is very delicate, not brainless, and looks very comfortable. Although it is a transformation, it can actually be seen as a pure female protagonist. Personally, I prefer the male heart to the female body, and don't fall into the female body too quickly. However, this is a personal preference. The overall shortcomings do not hide the good points. If you maintain the current rhythm, you should be able to go above 9 points. In addition, the author seems to be doing both? I hope such a large amount of updates every day will not affect the quality.

It took me a few days to read before commenting. The author's writing is excellent, and it is one of the few Bleach fan fictions that is wonderfully written. What I like most is that every character in this novel has an online IQ, and there is no dementia or lack of logic. At most, the author's writing skills need to be improved. After all, new writers still need to be encouraged.

Alas (╥╯╰╥)งObviously it is such a good book. It is a rare good book to find. I knew it when I saw the reshaping of the body. It is also a behind-the-scenes role flow with multiple vests. It is a pity. Farewell.

It's okay, but the AI smell is too strong in some places. Please check it out before posting next time. The Quincy uses Shunpo, and then he engages in a thousand-year blood feud [laughing and crying]

It's quite interesting, but the evil spirits in reality feel too weak now. When the protagonist's Zanpakutō starts to figure out that these small Karami are not all one-sworded, I think we can let the virtual ones appear on the stage to strengthen the importance of the Shinigami to reality.

It's very interesting. The author just needs to stop updating it.

Finally, there is this kind of boring AI article, but it's a pity that there are too few updates. The incomprehensible Japanese language affects the perception too much.