(No CP + business management + the protagonist hits like a truck)
Author's heads-up: This is my first quick transmigration novel. It turned into a slow transmigration story, but I can't change the tags anymore, so please bear with me.
This isn't purely about running a business; there will be a plot.
Jin Xi's original form was a stone on Mount Buzhou. Through a fortunate twist of fate, she gained consciousness and began cultivating alongside the other demons on the mountain.
Thanks to the steady nature of her original form, her cultivation went smoothly. In less than ten thousand years, she faced the tribulation that would make her a god.
Just as Jin Xi thought she would get through it as smoothly as before, countless purple bolts of lightning struck her to pieces.
When she woke again, less than one percent of her original form remained. She had also been transported to a place called the Space-Time Administration.
Only then did she learn that the cultivation world she came from was just one of countless minor worlds.
To piece her original form back together and extend her life, Jin Xi joined the Administration's business department, the fastest way to earn points, and became a merchant who traded across countless worlds.
After that,
A savage, backward Beastman world;
A modern world invaded by the paranormal;
One day, a wondrous shop appeared in each of them...
I just watched the previous content and couldn't stand it anymore. The gender stereotypes in the beast world are very embarrassing. From the leader to the witch doctor, they are all males, and females are protected by default. In nature, females are obviously stronger than males. Even in ancient times, human beings were matriarchal societies. They did not clear up the mines when they were big, but treated people like this. I am merciful if I didn't give it one star.
It's not very good. The first beast world has some minor flaws but it's acceptable, so it's just okay. But the second weird game that invades the world has too many loopholes. It feels like there is something wrong with the settings. This world is introduced from the perspective of the heroine who has just landed. The weird copy and the real world are separate. Moreover, the dungeon is unfolded in the form of a game. Completing the mission is considered as clearing the game, and each dungeon has a limit on the number of people. Except for some special dungeons that will be permanently closed after clearing the level, other dungeons can be refreshed repeatedly. But the dungeon that can be refreshed repeatedly shows that the entire dungeon is only weird, and there can be no living people. But in the dungeon of Qingyang High School, although Xue Qi was bullied to death, if he wanted to take revenge, he should take revenge in the real world. After all, the enemies are living people, and they are not weird. How could he be living in a weird dungeon. It's obviously unreasonable. The author mixed the real world and the weird world together. Secondly, there are more than seventy chapters written in this world. Do you remember, the author, that your book is about fast travel? To be honest, this is the first time I've seen someone write more than seventy chapters about traveling through a world. Generally, the small world of a fast travel novel will not exceed fifty chapters, and at most it will not exceed fifty-five or six. But it is obvious that this strange world extends beyond more than twenty chapters. I hope the author can control the progress in the future. Keep it as small as possible. Because the purpose of reading quick time travel is to feel fresh. If the chapter is too long, people will gradually lose patience. And if you can read the quick time travel, it should be short. Otherwise, why not just read the long article if it is so long. In addition, the author feels that the writing is a little biased. This is a business article. Shouldn't the main line be business and store products? However, most of the scenes in the store are brushed off or simply reduced to background. There are more and more other unrelated group portrait plots and stories. If it weren't for one or two people coming out to buy things from time to time, I would have almost forgotten that this is a business article. In addition, it is the background of the heroine. It can be felt that the author seems to be constantly adding more information to the background of the heroine. However, the things added later are somewhat inconsistent with the initial setting at the beginning. For example, the heroine's body is a multicolored stone. She used to live in Buzhou Mountain, and her ancestors had multicolored stones to mend the sky. She experienced the lightning tribulation of becoming a god just ten thousand years ago, and the heroine has experienced various iterations of the human world during these ten thousand years. There is a description of the ancient Ren Yazi, who said that the heroine has lived for ten thousand years, which means that the actual birth time of the heroine is almost at the end of the prehistoric times. But later the author added more information, saying that the heroine knows many mythical beasts, such as Baize Taotie Emperor Jiang and so on. Di Jiang also said that he and the heroine grew up together. I don't know if the author has ever learned about Honghuang. If the heroine really grew up with Di Jiang, then I can only say that the heroine must be the ancestor of Wucaishi, because Buzhou Mountain had not yet fallen when Di Jiang was born. But according to the initial setting, the heroine cannot be from the same period as them. They may know each other, but their seniority is definitely not the same. The heroine can only be regarded as a junior. Therefore, the background settings before and after the heroine are obviously in conflict.
The plot is okay so far, but the heroine doesn't have a name. It feels bad to be called a little female all the time.
Nice. . . . .