Xiaoma: to Be Good-Looking, You Have to Eat.

Too much reliance on AI, maybe it would be better to try to write it yourself

Recommend. Not bad, the setting is quite novel, but the feeling of being seen is best simplified or changed according to different adjectives for each pony seen. Looking forward to the subsequent plots of different characters after seeing the appearance of the protagonist [Sending Hearts]

It's relatively AI, but it should be polished. At least when I use AI to write similar pony articles, it's either a no-brainer or a more charming ordinary friend.

What a great author! It's all progress! Although the book was full of AI flavor at the beginning, from the time I wrote about Nyx, I felt that the author wrote most of it himself, mostly referring to AI plots and stuff. I'm very touched to see the author making continuous progress instead of just using AI. I feel that if the author continues to write novels, the next book will have a bright future! PS. The author who wrote Batman Begins in the pony world is also a god.

The writing is very good, but the part about the protagonist's power at the beginning of the main plot is a bit fragmented and strange, and then the death penalty is actually not too heavy on the AI ​​flavor, and it feels okay. However, the Daring Do part needs a bit of Souls game foundation, but the overall look is good, but the plot is a bit delayed (maybe because I haven't played it). The imagination of the pseudo-horse later on is also good. The combination of the plot and the latter part clearly shows the improvement of the author's writing style. In summary, compared to the same type and the same period, it can be regarded as a top-notch work. In fact, I feel that as long as the author doesn't give up, he can write a book as long as Cure Monsoon (of course I am referring to the length).

It's okay, but I always feel like it's happened before

Looks good, come on, don't die [Like] The yandere Twilight of Eden is so delicious [lick screen]

Can write well

Wow, I want to see the blood flowing.

Anyway, I quite like it😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

It's very strong. Although the setting is relatively old, the more you read it, the more it feels like it's changing with each passing day. Of course, if you ignore some parts [laughing evilly], it's a qualified and excellent article.

This novel simply embodies the Ponyboy novel I imagined in my heart. The protagonist is charming and powerful, has a sweet daily life, and saves the tragic endings of other fans.

So pretty! Author, please don't stop updating! !

It's super good-looking, and the protagonist's charm is so powerful

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I like it very much and it looks good.

Come on, come on, come on

Good luck to the author, (｡- .•)

Hey hey hey hey hey [adoration]

Ten o'clock is better than twelve o'clock

Very good Xiao Mawen

It's actually pretty good-looking

It's pretty good-looking, okay.

Very pretty, but not enough [blowing kiss]

The author should put more paragraphs in front of it, otherwise it would not be good to listen to the book by leaving it alone.

Yes, can you show the image of a dark horse that was damaged in the war so that others can see it?

I think it's quite interesting, but the main character doesn't have a name, and why is he always replaced by the main character or the dark horse? It looks good, please update more. Author [cry][cry][cry]

The writing is good and the characters are not OOC.

It's very beautifully written, I like it very much