The Rising of the Magic Swordsman

The writing is worthy of five stars. My expectations for this book were also five stars. Disadvantages: 1. The pace is too slow, in various senses: The slow pace of time is not a problem, but it is not an excuse either. The key is that you must be advancing one of the two worldviews and emotional lines. It is now known that the protagonist is a territorial son on the border of a country in a continent in one of many worlds. Chapter 50 has finally set off to a neighboring territory; on the emotional line, the two maids are still using the authority of their mother to put pressure on the protagonist. The relationship between the elf and the maid is progressing faster than the protagonist. 2. It's still a question of two maids: except when they are babies, do the protagonist and the maid interact with each other? Where is the close contact I'm looking forward to with the cat girl? Are the ears and tail still not allowed to be touched? Can't you rub your head? I don't think this is a rhythm issue. Since it's a noble setting, why isn't the maid's initial intimacy level maxed out? 3. Small problem: Tian Xiaohu didn't feel immersive, so I skipped it directly. 4. A big or small problem: The goddess who sent the protagonist really likes the photos of handsome guys from other heroes. Five stars because I plan to keep pursuing it, hope that the problem can be corrected, and I don't want to sink the book review [Chigua]

Come on, author [crazy] [crazy] [laughing] [laughing], why don't you take advantage of the fact that there are not many people commenting and unify the mother's Elin yarn or Elin yarn? The front and back are a little different.

It's pretty and quite interesting.

It's interesting. The author has a lot of dirty talk. I would like to call it the best one this month. Five-star praise sent

Very good, a masterpiece. I hope the follow-up will be like this. I emphasize that I am not a human and a machine.

It feels like a different world, and the emotions are well described [please update]

It looks so good, I must keep reading more.

It looks good, I'll give it five stars first. Ai,,,

It's a slow-burning traditional novel about traveling through another world. Overall it's okay, but I feel it's a bit boring not to expand the map all the time (personal reasons)

Six very good books at the moment

The content is good, but I don't really like slow writing. I'll save it first and read it when the book runs out after a million words.

It's a bit interesting, a very cool different world, the protagonist is hanging on the wall, and the family is harmonious. However, the map has not been opened yet, and there are many potential threats. I hope that the protagonist can kick all the crises in the future.

The book is quite good, and the writing style is better than most novels in Tomato. However, it is too slow to read and has too much writing! It's just not suitable for an impatient person like me [face covering], but if you're short on books, I recommend reading it! Although I don't like reading it, it doesn't stop me from giving this book a five-star rating. After all, most of the books Tomato recommends to me are bad books, which cannot be compared at all [Chigua]

It's a good read, although it has a lot of psychological talk, but it also allows readers to understand what the protagonist is thinking and feeling.

It's beyond my expectation. My daily writing is very good. Come on.

It must be five stars, the rhythm is very mature, the context is well connected, and it can fully arouse the reader's interest [Admiration]

Very good, I hope you don't miss it

Write more, write more, the book is good

Delicious, love to eat, love to eat

It's really super good-looking. The Western fantasy novel made me read it seriously. I don't feel like I have any space for one of them. I really can read it.

It has a bit of a jobless feel to it. The early pace is slow and pretty good. I hope there will be some explosive moments later.

It's a pretty good Western fantasy novel in 🍅. The protagonist also talks a lot. It's okay so far. I'll give it a review when I see the rating is so low.

It's beautiful, I hope the author can stick to finishing it

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not do two updates in one day

It's good-looking and not too brainless.

Come on come on come on come on

Super nice author, cheers

Still want to see happy daily life

The abstract names of Chapter 1 and 2 have been changed, but the rest can be read

Can support five stars