The Line of Corruption Has Been Loaded, but Why Is Lily Facing

I am an author. I would like to give my book a five-star rating [shy][shy][shy]

Actually, daily life is okay, but I have a question. The protagonist has awakened the top talent, and there are only 8 in the entire country. As mentioned above, it is very precious, so why doesn't the country take action to protect its growth [exploration]? In the early stage, a small family in the city kept finding trouble and suppressing him, and even people around him turned a blind eye or laughed at the protagonist. But if the protagonist has such a great talent, shouldn't he be treated like this? The previous article also mentioned that the country and universities focus on cultivating those three brilliant people. Why are the protagonists not protected and cultivated? I think once a country discovers such a good seedling, it should take action immediately. There is no other problem except this. The author's writing is quite good, and I highly recommend reading it. I really like the rest of the writing! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

The idea is very good, and the writing is also very good. Except for some details, it feels a bit... Human-machine, but overall it is a good book worth reading. I deducted one star because some of the supporting characters talked too much and gave me a headache.

I have read about eighty-nine chapters so far. My impressions and suggestions from this book are below. I hope the author can read the following suggestions carefully. The advantage of this novel is that it is very good in terms of emotional description, and the plot is very interesting. The unique setting makes the plot more colorful. I am also very satisfied with the description of Tie Tie. There are also some big problems, such as the world view is not complete enough. I can only mention where to let readers know: Oh, that's it. Also, some plots are too counter-intuitive. In layman's terms, Ruozhi, for example, your highest-level soul, also mentioned that there are only seven in the country, so why do a group of bastards still put aside their taunts and don't try to please? And why do people in the central government always have a no-nonsense attitude, lacking basic logic, which makes it seem like everyone in the plot is Ruozhi. And the combat power system is not clear, which makes me very confused when watching the normal plot. I can only say that this is a novel with distinctive characteristics. If it doesn't work, the author can still use his strengths and avoid weaknesses🌹🌹🌹 I still hope that this book will get better and better. These questions can reflect that the author does not seem to have prepared an outline. I can only say that if you want to improve, it is best to write an outline🙏🙏🙏

The writing is particularly good, especially the story about level 20 Luna storming the Diamond Queen Hotel with an 18-level blast. After the storm, it was discovered that the blast was only level 17 and then died calmly after being electrocuted. The details were described very well, giving readers an immersive feeling. In short, it is highly recommended. This whirlpool of memories😱is about to swallow me😭please don't leave me😇because I owe you too much🤓who has let go of the silence😈even my heart is dead❤️‍🩹It's an anatomy to you😜and I am so down and out😢please don't leave me🤫beautiful waves of flowers are hitting😰I feel Your love is cursed 😝 I leave you such words 😘 It's just a youthful animation 😏 But our relative Chang Yue 👿 is gradually falling under the shackles of reality 😨 The new couple collapsed after a short translation 😄 I don't know why I'm so crazy about you, you're like this 😃 There aren't many stories between us 😢 Oh, sir, this definitely needs to be electrocuted. What you said is absolutely right

I finished reading it in one afternoon. I felt that the plot was very attractive and it was a very high-quality book. However, it was not enough to read. I look forward to more updates from the author (10,000 words a day [laughs]) When I was reading other books, I had a sudden thought: Other books said that if you give a negative review, you will become the protagonist of the book. So if I give a negative review, if one day I am lucky enough to fly away, will I be able to experience the plot (●—●)

I'm probably sick, and I'm underage. Tomato recommended some passionate novels to me. I just read one, and the bookshelf is full of them. But this book is really good-looking. The only pity is that the protagonist is really human? In fact, I quite hope that the protagonist can add a setting where the soul can leave the body in the later stage. Then the body will be given to Long Niang, the fantasy will be given to Xu Xiaoan, and the soul will be added to another character. It will be perfect [laughs]

Not bad, pretty good-looking. I just don't want the protagonist to change back in the end.

Okay, it's pretty good. The author is very active, but there are too few. Can there be more [Fanfanxingxing. Jpg]

It's a very good book, but it feels a bit small in terms of quantity. Overall, the author is quite lively. Overall, the novel is quite light-hearted and has great potential.

Come on, author, please update more, it's too little.

It has a universal gamified world view, the realm of Douluo Continent, and the name of the book Sword of Dawn. Just for fun.

Very good article [blowing kiss] Nice mouth and teeth [blowing kiss]

These heroines are all amazing.

Tie Tie is very delicious😍6 points is too low, it should be at least 8 points, anyway give it a try

😋😋But it's still okay to put aside these gods and men who inherit the will of hegemony

Ok ok ok

Contains AI ingredients, one point will be deducted first, wait and see

In the book, I saw Ultraman fighting Calabash

Not bad, look at it!

It's a very interesting book, but it's a little short. The author has a lot of ideas. I hope he can continue to write well [please update]

Not enough, I said

It's amazing, it's so delicious [laughs evilly]

Okay, I feel like I won't be able to see you soon, nya

It's okay, I just want to ask the author, can't skills evolve? Can't it be entered into the memory bank by just swallowing a part of the body? Let's build another foundation and then evolve.

It's such an abstract setting, but it's pretty cool. It's amazing.