Hidden Characters in the Battle Don't Want to Be Captured

It's good-looking [I learned], especially the main character's fun-loving personality, which is very funny. But after the main character was exposed, Hong Yi stopped appearing. It's a pity. I hope I can return to the show more often in the future. [Shy]

Exciting, I saw the middle game, Hong Ye's underworld mechanism, exaggerated mobility and hidden heavy girl (hidden?) Attribute are really good, there is no OC in the whole article The mechanism is so bad. A person playing in space can actually trigger a stolen skill just by touching it? Can I even think about making a mask? ! Look at this mask. A mask that is about to be used up has the three functions of following, monitoring, and bodyguarding. It also has a bunch of information warfare skills such as information intrusion, brainwashing, and mind reading. If it weren't for the male protagonist, Hongye feels like he can't catch anyone except Erya, his nemesis. There is also a rank, high, it is really high, I just have to have the word "virtuous wife" engraved on my face. Not only can I support and cover in battle, but I also know how to act coquettishly and flirt to heat up the situation. In the early stage of this position, no one is my opponent. Later, the Seven Sins big sister form may be my opponent, but the Seven Sins mechanism may not be comparable. Then you can see women fighting [sneaky laugh] I'm so looking forward to seeing the pseudo-sunny girl turn into a black-faced warrior state when her emotions break out and start to show off her passion.

The writing has a lot of room for improvement, and the characters are occasionally OOC. Since this is a fight with a fellow fan, I won't leave a bad review. There are too many flaws. The protagonist has gained great power at the beginning, but he can resist not eating beef when he encounters AST? Shidou is a bit too OOC in the daily plot, and the interactions are crude. What does it mean when the protagonist's identity is revealed at the beginning? Your plot is too abstract. Can't stand it anymore

"If I just let you go like this, you will probably never renew. Even if it hinders your progress, you can't leave anything for me... But it's better than being haunted by empty regrets." "As long as you update, it's fine. As long as you update, the new chapter will not disappear, so... Don't leave."

It's very good, the content is reasonable, and the character descriptions are consistent with the original work. I also like the characters of Qian Huan Hongye. Come on😁😁😁! ! ! Author, I support you until the end of this book. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's very interesting, and each guide is quite short. This is my second favorite dating book after Liang Yi.

When it comes to dealing with Kuang San, there are quite a few flaws. Overall, there are quite a few flaws, and this is even if I can see quickly. But this is me too, comparing this book to Yue Hua and Bu Yue. To this day, there are still people who are willing to write about dating fans, and they are still on Tomato, and they can still have this kind of quality. I have nothing else to say except encouragement. If I have to give advice, the emotion can be more delicate and disgusting enough. This is a date in itself, let alone a change of marriage. In terms of combat, it is recommended not to adjust the combat power too high, because too high a combat power difference will itself affect the description and taste of combat. As for depicting the scene, it can be more detailed. In terms of fun, the original work also has a lot of extras that can be adopted and learned from, such as the Elf Dark Cauldron, the Snowball Fight, the Three and Four Heavenly Kings... Finally, in terms of plot, jumping directly to Mioya is a bit messy, but so far, it's still manageable. Come on!

Shidao, my favorite actor is my favorite actor.

I suddenly discovered that the protagonist takes on negative emotions when he uses a mask to gain abilities. Waiting until you get all the masks is equal to getting all the elves' abilities. If you can't bear it, after the reversal, the manifestation will be the reversal ability, that is, your own ability. Does it mean that the protagonist's own ability is the sum of all the elves? The second zero

Okay, okay, it suits my personal taste

In fact, there is still an idea However, although AI expansion is very easy to use, I suggest doing a little extra polish to reduce the AI taste: for example (not... But) this format directly deletes these two words and the middle content, leaving only the final version, which will be much better For example Hongye blinked and showed an unexpected expression. Then she laughed, not in a polite way, but with a little "you are quite interesting" smile. Change to Hongye blinked and showed an unexpected expression. Then she laughed, with a little "you're kind of interesting" smile. At least I think it will be better?

Fan support for the fight

I must give it a good review. This is the first book I have come across. It also attracted me deeply. I have already read this book again.

It's so delicious that I can't sleep at night. Author I will probably never forget you in my lifetime.

It's quite good to read. It's said to be a change of marriage, but it's actually not a change of marriage, but it's an unexpectedly good book [Like]

It looks great, please give me more chapters (praying)

The writing is not bad, the author should keep up the good work I have finished reading some of them now. The description and treatment of the characters are very good, the characters are consistent with the original work, and the story is also very good. It's been a long time since I've seen an app about Appetite on Tomato. Keep up the good work and look forward to the next development🥰

Make a date with your friends and give them some encouragement, it looks great

I like the character design of the protagonist, I hope the author will update it soon [Blow kiss]

I feel so good after entering reincarnation

It's very interesting, but updates are too slow, and the horse is dropped too early. I think it's best to drop the horse after one or two hundred chapters.

The writing is very delicate and feels comfortable to read.

I have to say it's quite good-looking, and the characters are quite three-dimensional [shy]

A good writer who generates electricity for love

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking (♥∀♥)

Big cheers for the author

Very good, consistent with the original work

I don't know what to say, it's just beautiful

Not a bad date to date with a fellow fan

I like the protagonist's character very much