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It's Very Popular Recently. There Are Four Major Houses of Hogwarts, so I Want to Read It. Do You Have Any Articles?
It's about Harry Potter. Is there a Tomato author in big letters?
Male Channel, Hogwarts Fan (Don't Ask Me Why It's Not Harry)
Put the fanfic in there for me. It enriches me directly. No, let everyone enrich me.
I Have Given up Hope on High-Quality HP. Please Slap Me in the Face with a Book.
HP is out of books? There are only dozens of HP books in total, and I have basically read them all. If I take out all the HP novels you have packed in the bottom of the box, I won't believe that I have read them all! ! ! ! !
Is There Any Article That Is so Interesting That People Won't Put It Down? Bisexual
Is there any kind of interesting article that people won't want to abandon? Don't want the kind of article that suddenly loses interest halfway through reading, bisexual, kneel down! ! !
Harry Potter, the Main Character Needs to Be Male, Not Female
Are There Any Novels with Novel Ideas and Exciting Stories?
For example, Konoha Academic Master, Endless Murder Book, Write Your Destiny, Infinite Reincarnation Game, etc. I don't need to recommend the familiar ones such as Dali, Replica Mirror, God Slayer, etc. -_-||
Hp Shuangnan is best Slytherin
Tomato Friends, Please Leave the Books You Have Read More Than Twice
Which books on Tomato Friends have been read twice or more? Please recommend me. I'm seriously short of books.
Do You Have Any Good Articles in HP, About Two Men, No Censorship, No Romance Required?
The original male protagonist, Slytherin, is strong, no romance, no romance, no romance! ! !
Please HP Cedric Shuangnan
I want to read a book like "Everyday Things at Hogwarts". Cedric the protagonist
Please Read This Novel N Times Without Getting Tired of It
Dear friends, I'm looking for good-looking short stories, any genre is acceptable ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
























































It's so beautiful, don't you know, ah, it makes me smile in a jittery way all the time. The plot is smooth, the emotional line is a bit smooth, and the plot is also very reasonable. As for the characters, I don't think there's anything serious about OOC. Ace's character creation is also very good. Are there really such perfect people in the world? Cedric is also very good, gentle, responsible, and capable. It's no secret that I reread this book three times before it was finished. I would like to ask, can I write a fanfic for this book? If I can't, I won't write it. If I can, I'll see if I can post it on the book circle later.
I like Ace Vesario very much. He cares for his students and provides gentle after-school tutoring. He has unlimited wealth and strength. I like the author for writing such a beautiful novel. I wish you lots of luck! No matter what they encounter, they can get through it safely, and everyone can survive. I hope they will not encounter danger, and when they encounter danger, they can turn it into safety and be safe (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
The character of Ace is very well written. He is rich and helps others. When he holds cram schools for students, he prepares equipment at his own expense and receives charity support. The characters and storyline are well written, but! ! I feel that the emotional line is a bit abrupt. I suddenly knew Cedric's feelings in the early part. Then I saw that Snape had a lot of scenes in the early stage, much more than Cedric. Although Cedric was written in the later part, it was with Draco. I felt that Cedric's scenes were led by Draco. . . Author: Are Cedric and Ace really the main CPs? Why doesn't something look right to me?
It's very beautiful, you know, the little girl is embarrassed, the writing is also very delicate, the plot is also very nb, the protagonist is also very gentle, this year nb can't explain [making a face] [making a face] [making a face]
Ace Vesario is a very gentle person who loves students, knows right from wrong, and is friendly to others. With the elegance of a true nobleman, he treats others with neither contempt nor arrogance. But he also has the edge of a family heir. Ace Vesario, a person who is very suitable for writing heartthrobs
The plot of the book is overall very smooth and comfortable, and Ace's character is well portrayed, without any major poisonous points. The only thing is that the emotional line is a bit stiff. Seder's feelings for Ace came out very... Inexplicably, even though it was very sudden. The subsequent development of the emotional line is still very sweet. This is a very good book among Tomato's HP fanfics, but its current rating is low according to Tomato's rating standards.
Halfway through, I couldn't help it anymore and jumped out to recommend this book to everyone. Super pretty! ! ! ! My favorite part of it is the transformation of Xiao Long, who has grown from a lonely and struggling young man in the distance to a real pure-blood aristocrat, and the trio of Aces are so cute and adorable [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss][Flow Kiss] At first, I felt that the original world line was a bit cumbersome, but after the two world lines were concluded, it felt like something from God. Goddess, I will always follow you [shy] There is no intention of beating the cook here, nor is there any idea of attacking the teacher. I just raise my own little question: Why was Ace so protective of the students in the first place? This kind of thing seems to require some emotional accumulation? Maybe it's because I don't have enough sense of responsibility that I can't understand haha (no offense, please don't scold me😭) Attachment: I will review the book later when I see a good plot. I heard that the longer the reading time, the higher the score. Why is the score of this book so low? I am so sad. I have seriously recommended it to all my relatives and friends. In addition, I am sorting out my Zai Zai information. I don't know if my wife can accept a Zai Zai Wuwu with a partial story line and a lot of personal settings. I really want to see the interaction between my Zai Zai and Ace! Make a wish to the teacher to see me woo woo
Unexpectedly, this is a passable fanfic. Although the writing style is stiff and sluggish at the beginning, from the perspective of the protagonist, the author uses clumsy descriptions to reveal step by step the ambition and wisdom of a family heir. From the introduction, I thought the protagonist was a bold and simple rich kid, but he is unexpectedly gentle. However, I still feel that the protagonist is a bit generous, or warm-hearted? Although everything he did can be attributed to reputation and family, the description is still too deliberate. As a rationale, it is impossible for the family to have a helper as the main thing, and family interests are secondary. However, I haven't read much, and the narrative may be too one-sided. Mainly because I haven't read such a comfortable article in a long time. Give it a 5-star rating and recommend it.
It's also rare to see CP stories with Cedric, the plot is not abrupt, the pink bubbles when they get along, and the youthful feelings among teenagers are very touching. Ace is also a heartthrob in this school. His strong strength, personality and way of dealing with things are very touching to me, and his gentleness in getting along with others is also very touching. I hope there will be more updates, and it's not in vain that I chased Tomato from Wukong! [Blowing kiss][shy]
Since this is my first time watching the relationship between the protagonist and Cedric, I don't know if it's good or not. The emotional line is well written, the fried chicken in the main line is delicious, the whole image of the protagonist is very three-dimensional [like it], and the writing is also very consistent with the character [heartfelt]. Push hard push
Damn, my family is shocked by the delicious food. This CP also touches my heart too much. It's still too good-looking. It's super delicious [Love][Bird Food Masterpiece][Lick the Screen][Send Hearts][Adore][Flow Kiss][Bird Food Masterpiece][Love][Lick the Screen][ Send a heart][Adore][Fly a kiss][A bird-eating masterpiece][Love][Licking the screen][Sending a heart][Admiration][Flowing a kiss][A bird-eating masterpiece][Love][Licking the screen][Sending a heart][Blowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Bookshelf plus one][Bookshelf plus one][Bookshelf plus one]
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It's really beautiful, looking forward to being together [shy]
It's very interesting. The plot is very rich, the characters are full and three-dimensional, the emotions between the protagonists are sincere and touching, and the background of the story is also perfect. It's very interesting. I hope the author will write more ❤️❤️❤️
The plot is very good, and the emotional line spans a bit. I feel like I fell in love as soon as I met you? Very gentle pureblood, hope not to abuse her
The teacher's writing is really good. I am particularly picky about the content of novels. This novel is particularly in line with my heart in every aspect. I hope the teacher will update 10,000 words every day! Great author, could you make Professor Crelawney stronger? The original work is so regrettable [crying][crying]
I'm not very good at writing reviews, but I want to say that this novel is really super, super, super, super super super. Don't look at the low rating. This is really good. ^ω^ The protagonist is super charming [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] You must read it, the more you read, the better it gets\(//∇//)\
This book is very nice, the protagonist has an aristocratic temperament, and the protagonist and Harry get along very well.
Looking at it from a different perspective, it feels very natural when looking at the front. It does not directly start to force the main line, but richly portrays the image of the protagonist [Blowing Kiss]
It's really good. I hope the author can update it faster and the content is well organized.
The teacher's writing style is very good, unlike some other books that are too wordy and have a poor look and feel. [Like]
It's so sweet. Ace and Sai are both very gentle people.
Shocking and delicious
First time seeing this
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! !
It would be nice if the author could follow more ^ω^
After reading two chapters, I fell in love with the character of the main character. Hey, hey, hey, hey [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]
Very nice. Although I don't have a CP, it's still pretty good.
Super beautiful, especially restored. The character setting is very close to the original work. There is no deliberate description of the protagonist. The protagonist is not portrayed as particularly ignorant and omnipotent. I particularly like this character. On the basis of the original work, it seems to have added some settings that fit the world view. It's really fun. I never get tired of it. I feel that the author is very careful. [Blowing kiss]
It's pretty good, so I can give it 5 stars, but the emotional plot is a bit lacking. The author, Baozi, didn't know how Seid revealed his feelings. Well, I haven't finished reading it yet. This is my current thought. If there are any follow-up thoughts, I will follow up.