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Tip: Lin Pianpian is not a beginner Not even second hand. . . But n hands

I've read Chapter 59 and I don't know what to say. Originally, I came here because of the theme of "ghost + time travel", and wanted to watch the protagonist kill decisively in a place full of victims. It turned out that the protagonist actually started to fall in love. Although it was a bit awkward, I continued to watch it. Although it didn't quite meet expectations, the listening experience was okay. Then the protagonist got a doppelganger "Bo Qing", and the two of them started to fall in love. When I saw Bo Qing and the female character mentioning "Mo Yao" while they were sleeping, I thought there was going to be a "Sword of Wisdom Cutting Love", but it didn't happen! Instead, because the female character was suffering from a rat infestation, the protagonist used the "One Heart to Change Fate Gu" to save her life in exchange for a life. Seeing this, I really can't stand it anymore haha😃 Later, the female character became distraught at the protagonist's house because she was "too green". She cried every night and just ate and drank without leaving. Then the protagonist created another Bo Qing, but this new Bo Qing was not the previous one. It was just a replica of the original one, and I don't know what the intention was. This re-created Bo Qing kept saying that he had forgotten something... Seeing this, I couldn't hold back and became happy again. That's it for now, I hope the female character behind will disappear soon! After all, when I read Chapter 59, the book had been updated to Chapter 143.

It basically satisfied some of my assumptions and gave me a lot of inspiration. Although the author's second creation is refreshing, it is also very delicate in emotional processing. It was a pity for Lao Fang. He tried so hard to revive Su, but Lao Fang still died in the end. It was a bit regretful. I still think that the author's second creation's formula can be adjusted and trained. There is no need to equate the original formula under Ji 0's control with what you wrote. Of course this is my opinion. Because I also hated the ending of Red Mansion at first, and nothing was saved. No regrets left. But then I felt that all this was still Ji O's problem. However, the author's second creation is very interesting, and Pianpian's redemption is worth learning from [laughs]. I'm not even ready to write it myself, but I'll stick to it. What I want to save is the second Pianpian. I can only support the author with 5-star reviews and ads. I hope you can give me a good ending. If you go back to modern times, you must bring Pianpian with you.

The subject matter is very good and the writing style is also to my liking. I hope this book can be completed because I want to read it.

I beg you, please, author, just write me another one. Please, I gave my life to you. Please, please write me another one.

After reading a few chapters, I still feel very good. Come on

It's a very good book, but it's not very good in some details. The plot is already better than most other books.

Can I take the shadow route? Immortal Foreigner

It's really fun to see the two worlds. In the other world, Sister Lin must not be with Fang.

It's the feeling of 67 and 68, it feels like a dream, it feels weird

It's so good. The author must keep reading more, but also pay attention to your health.

The writing is very detailed and the arrangement is quite good.

I just want to see this [laughs] Just change it [smile]

It's pretty cool among this fanfic [Like]

Wanderers from far away, my original name is Ben Jiesun, and everyone in the world calls me the Heaven-stealing Demon Lord.

I like the protagonist with this kind of personality the best~ (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

Write more about Lao Lin's daily love [Thinking][Thinking][Sending Hearts]

More, it's not enough

The author has a look at the discussion forum. Your writing is very nice. Please don't go into too much detail. I want a happy ending. Please [I'm about to cry]

The writing is good and the plot is good. I don't care, it's just good. The author should not delay adding more, more and more, if it is not enough, it is not enough.

I feel this teacher writes very well.

It's very well written, why don't you write it again?

I gave 5 stars first. I haven't heard about Aihong before, but I know about Ghost. After the real person stopped updating, the way of killing was also broken. I really want to see the follow-up of the way of killing.