Su Qingyuan entered an ancient abuse book for mentally retarded people that she had scolded.
Dressed as a cannon fodder female supporting character who will die that night.
What's even more outrageous is that the system of the time-travelling girl in the original book reported an error and was tied to the male protagonist. And the time-traveling woman herself shared the same body with her, and was complaining crazily in her mind.
The most outrageous thing is that the male protagonist Gu Yanzhi has cycled through the plot four times and is an awakened person who has seen through everything. He originally planned to watch the farce indifferently, but he was forced to listen to two women talking cross talk in his head.
"Can you guys be quiet? I want to give you some feedback."
"Can't."
"Can't."
A grumpy painter who has no system, a time-traveling woman who has lost her system and complains about time travel, and a cold-faced censor who is forced to be an audience.
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Reader comments
At first I actually thought it was a funny and superficial novel, but the more I read it, the more I thought it was awesome Klass! I haven't seen such an amazing book in a long time. The setting is very novel. The emotional drama between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is great. I haven't seen such love in a long time. I'm sorry I don't know how to describe it. The writing is also great and the metaphors are very deep. It makes me feel more emotional and immersed in it. But there are some things I don't understand. The male protagonist likes the original protagonist, but the arrival of the female protagonist is a big variable. Did the male protagonist fall in love with the female protagonist during the relationship? Or something else? In short, I feel like this is a confusing point. The characters of the male and female protagonists are very comfortable and want to be possessed. What can I say, they have something that ordinary people don't have! Oops, I really can't think of how to express it. Ah, finally I want to say that I will re-read it when I have time on the weekend. I will have more insights (high school students are so miserable) and it will also resolve the previous doubts. Forgive my bad writing. The next review will be after the completion. Then I must write out all my love for this novel, okay!
At first I actually thought it was a funny and superficial novel, but the more I read it, the more I thought it was awesome Klass! I haven't seen such an amazing book in a long time. The setting is very novel. The emotional drama between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is great. I haven't seen such love in a long time. I'm sorry I don't know how to describe it. The writing is also great and the metaphors are very deep. It makes me feel more emotional and immersed in it. But there are some things I don't understand. The male protagonist likes the original protagonist, but the arrival of the female protagonist is a big variable. Did the male protagonist fall in love with the female protagonist during the relationship? Or something else? In short, I feel like this is a confusing point. The characters of the male and female protagonists are very comfortable and want to be possessed. What can I say, they have something that ordinary people don't have! Oops, I really can't think of how to express it. Ah, finally I want to say that I will re-read it when I have time on the weekend. I will have more insights (high school students are so miserable) and it will also resolve the previous doubts. Forgive my bad writing. The next review will be after the completion. Then I must write out all my love for this novel, okay!