(Farming) + (Daily) + (Pure Love) Mainly Azur Lane, borrowing a little bit of the starry background /Supports a la carte/
Through the efforts of the ship girls, they successfully found the commander who was traveling through the L star cluster, and successfully transferred the port area and surrounding areas to the nano star cluster through pick-up and singularity megastructure. Now everyone has a base to live and work in peace and contentment. With the commander and the familiarity with the port area and working overtime (no)
What follows is a large amount of daily routine and a small amount of main lines interspersed.
"Hey, Akashi, your days of tax evasion from time to time are over. Give me your account book."
"If you want a cat, you have to call the commander to get it."
"But you already knew that"
"We already knew you would say this, Shiranui! Do it now, nya!"
"How many times have we checked the taxes..."
"It's hard to say. In my memory, we were cheated by you when we first came to Hong Kong."
"It's time to end this, Akashi."
"One thing is settled..."
Reader comments
I don't know why, maybe I'm a bit pretentious. I think Azur Lane fans prefer the heroines to have only azure ships and don't like heroines other than azure. After all, there are already enough ship girls. So this is the highest score I can give.
From Chapter 1 to Chapter 18, a lot of space is used to describe the encounter between the protagonist and Xiao Hui, but from the later chapters, Xiao Hui's existence begins to be downplayed. From Chapter 18 on the train, Xiao Hui basically eats and sleeps at two o'clock.
The content from Chapter 18, when the protagonist officially meets the ship girl and boards the train until arriving at the port area, is well-controlled. Both the character design of the ship girl and the rhythm of pushing the ship are well controlled.
The passage from arriving at the port area to Chapter 50 can only be regarded as a superior one. There are several repetitions of content in this paragraph, which greatly affects the reading experience. Secondly, the commander's passive push boat begins to take shape. In the previous train chapter, all the Lexingtons who arrived at the port area were only opened when the ship girl took the initiative to bring it to their mouths.
It looks good, kids, it looks good, and the author has a special chapter!
Is there a group? Also, can you adjust the extra story? Every time I see an update, I think it's the main text, but when I click on it, it turns out it's an extra, and there's always a reminder that there are a few unread chapters, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable with my obsessive-compulsive disorder [Thinking]
After reading the previous part, I felt pretty good, but there were a few chapters where a few sentences were repeated two or three times, and I hope they can be changed. Then, you can give the protagonist a real name. Don't call him Commander on all occasions. Calling him Commander would feel a bit strange.
Take a good look, take a good look, take a good look, the author must not stop 😭😭 When you are in a meeting, when you have nothing to do, you write a novel, when you are free, you write a novel, when you are sleepy, you write a novel, when you are tired, you write a novel 😭
The book is good, but could you please stop repeating it? Sometimes a sentence will be repeated two or three times. Please revise the repeated paragraphs! ! ! ! !
Surprisingly good
A bit thunderous,,
The writing is quite good, a rare high-quality article with almost no flaws.
Yes, yes, there are no problems so far.
Delicious, needless to say
Nothing to say. Needless to say, greatness
That's right, there is also a big boat➕small boat link, dddd
The special chapter is really delicious [love]. ⌯ᵔᗜᵔ⌯ಣ Yosi! Good people!
I don't know why, maybe I'm a bit pretentious. I think Azur Lane fans prefer the heroines to have only azure ships and don't like heroines other than azure. After all, there are already enough ship girls. So this is the highest score I can give.
From Chapter 1 to Chapter 18, a lot of space is used to describe the encounter between the protagonist and Xiao Hui, but from the later chapters, Xiao Hui's existence begins to be downplayed. From Chapter 18 on the train, Xiao Hui basically eats and sleeps at two o'clock. The content from Chapter 18, when the protagonist officially meets the ship girl and boards the train until arriving at the port area, is well-controlled. Both the character design of the ship girl and the rhythm of pushing the ship are well controlled. The passage from arriving at the port area to Chapter 50 can only be regarded as a superior one. There are several repetitions of content in this paragraph, which greatly affects the reading experience. Secondly, the commander's passive push boat begins to take shape. In the previous train chapter, all the Lexingtons who arrived at the port area were only opened when the ship girl took the initiative to bring it to their mouths.
It looks good, kids, it looks good, and the author has a special chapter!
Is there a group? Also, can you adjust the extra story? Every time I see an update, I think it's the main text, but when I click on it, it turns out it's an extra, and there's always a reminder that there are a few unread chapters, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable with my obsessive-compulsive disorder [Thinking]
After reading the previous part, I felt pretty good, but there were a few chapters where a few sentences were repeated two or three times, and I hope they can be changed. Then, you can give the protagonist a real name. Don't call him Commander on all occasions. Calling him Commander would feel a bit strange.
Take a good look, take a good look, take a good look, the author must not stop 😭😭 When you are in a meeting, when you have nothing to do, you write a novel, when you are free, you write a novel, when you are sleepy, you write a novel, when you are tired, you write a novel 😭
The book is good, but could you please stop repeating it? Sometimes a sentence will be repeated two or three times. Please revise the repeated paragraphs! ! ! ! !
Surprisingly good A bit thunderous,,
The writing is quite good, a rare high-quality article with almost no flaws.
Yes, yes, there are no problems so far.
Delicious, needless to say
Nothing to say. Needless to say, greatness
That's right, there is also a big boat➕small boat link, dddd
The special chapter is really delicious [love]. ⌯ᵔᗜᵔ⌯ಣ Yosi! Good people!