Xuanhuan: Masters and Disciples Can't Become Daoist Partners!

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle

Finished reading. Let me start with a few points. The emotional line is relatively straightforward and does not cause misunderstandings. The heroine's character is very likable to me, and she is also very proactive. It is not a free throw-in, but the courage of two people to speak out when their relationship reaches a crossroads of choice. The writing style is enough to keep people reading without giving up, but the author likes to use a few paragraphs at the end of chapters to write about environmental issues. I think it is the finishing touch when writing in key chapters, but if it is written too much, I feel that it is too much. There are also some complaints about combat power, so I won't go into details. All in all, there's nothing wrong with jumping into the trap. It's only 300,000 words and you can read it quickly.

The overall quality of this book is very good, the content is well organized, the plot is exciting and ups and downs, the text is beautiful and smooth, the knowledge is rich and practical, the reading experience is super good, and it is worth reading again and again.

There are advantages and disadvantages, the pace is too fast, the system is a bit buggy, it is okay to read as a cool novel, Mahayana does not appear directly, the opponents encountered are too easy, it would be better to give a knife. It still continues the traditional routine of cultivating immortals. What is remarkable is the emotional line, the emotional line is not bad, there are no roundabouts, it is a straight shot, but I haven't written much after 100 chapters. I wrote seven or eight hundred thousand, which is actually okay. I don't want to be too harsh. I look forward to the next one. By the way, I forgot one thing. Relationships need to be paved. I was timid at first and knew that the transformation time is too fast. It doesn't need to be so fast at all. For the heroine whose close relatives have passed away, the cold window in her heart should be opened little by little. This description is too fast. Just write a dozen or 20 pictures of this transformation alone.

Come on, write Liu Bei's big brother!

Give me a good fight when you fight, don't kiss me all the time [awkward laugh]

It is a book that I like very much. I read it in one day. The rhythm is very good. I like the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists very much. It is not procrastinating and not so systematic. It has a full personality. At least I like it very much. I like the rhythm and Shuang Jie very much. Even Jie likes it very much no matter how clean or double clean it is. Come on!

I finally see a normal master-disciple relationship 🥰

Finally saw a normal master-disciple relationship

I thought it was progressing too fast before, but after thinking about it, I decided to read it and read it in one sitting. However, I read the revised version. At the end of the story with the children, the old man should be allowed to leave the country and interact with the children.