Fantasy: Masters and Disciples Cannot Become Taoist Companions!

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle

The overall quality of this book is very good, the content is well organized, the plot is exciting and ups and downs, the text is beautiful and smooth, the knowledge is rich and practical, the reading experience is super good, and it is worth reading again and again.

Come on, write Liu Bei's big brother!

There are advantages and disadvantages, the pace is too fast, the system is a bit buggy, it is okay to read as a cool article, Mahayana did not appear at all, the opponents I encountered were too easy, it would be better if I gave you a little knife It still continues the traditional routine of cultivating immortals. What is remarkable is the emotional line. The emotional line is not bad, there is no roundabout pull, and it is a straight shot. However, the ending of more than 100 chapters is not much. It is possible to write seven or eight hundred thousand. I don't want to be too harsh. I look forward to the next book. By the way, one thing I forgot is that relationships need to be foreshadowed. I was timid at the beginning and realized that the transformation time is too fast. It doesn't need to be so fast at all. For the heroine whose close relatives have passed away, the cold window in her heart should be opened little by little. This description is too fast. Just write a dozen or 20 pictures of this transformation alone.

Finished reading. Let me start with a few points. The emotional line is relatively straightforward and does not cause misunderstandings. The heroine's character is very likable to me, and she is also very proactive. It is not a free throw-in, but the courage of two people to speak out when their relationship reaches a crossroads of choice. The writing style is enough to keep people reading without giving up, but the author likes to use a few paragraphs at the end of chapters to write about environmental issues. I think it is the finishing touch when writing in key chapters, but if it is written too much, I feel that it is too much. There are also some complaints about combat power, so I won't go into details. All in all, there's nothing wrong with jumping into the trap. It's only 300,000 words and you can read it quickly.

Give me a good fight when you fight, don't kiss me all the time [awkward laugh]

Finally saw a normal master-disciple relationship

I finally see a normal master-disciple relationship [Adoration]

Chapter 31: Successful straight shot, excellent description

I thought it was progressing too fast before, but after thinking about it, I decided to read it and read it in one sitting. However, I read the revised version. At the end of the story with the children, the old man should be allowed to leave the country and interact with the children.

A sweet love story cloaked in fantasy: it's also a teacher-student romance~ It's pretty good so far, it just depends on how the author writes it.

It's okay, but sometimes it's a little awkward watching the male and female protagonists interact [face covering]

It's really sweet to speed through it in one day. I was originally just looking for a book with a single heroine, but I found this book that had already been added to the bookshelf. I couldn't stop reading it. Although it's a bit short, it's really good. I give it a five-star review.

It's okay. It's just a sweet story that is quite relaxing. It revolves around the daily lives of the male and female protagonists, with a little bit of fighting thrown in. It just doesn't say who the female protagonist's ancestors are.

It is a book that I like very much. I read it in one day. The rhythm is very good. I like the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists very much. It is not procrastinating and not so systematic. It has a full personality. At least I like it very much. I like the rhythm and Shuang Jie very much. Even Jie likes it very much no matter how clean or double clean it is. Come on!

Not bad, although the plot development is a bit too fast, but the sweet story mainly focuses on the interaction between the male and female protagonists, and the driving content is very good. It's just too little and not enough to watch 😋

But I came at a bad time [crying]

No delay at all? Chapter 32 becomes a Taoist couple.

It's already considered gold in tomatoes

It's so sweet, and the male and female protagonists are so sweet. I haven't seen this kind of thing for a long time. The others are basically multi-female protagonists, which are not very good-looking.

The plot is very classic, and the writing was a bit far-fetched at the beginning, but the emotional scenes later were okay, I would like to encourage you with four stars [I learned it]

It's really pretty, not bad, delicious [blowing kiss] It looks good, 10 stars recommended, it was rated red and warm, and then the last sweet article was really comfortable🤓

I'm a local dog and I love watching! How shameless! ! ! 🤓🤓🤓🤓👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻

In the end, I didn't go to the Central Region to open a new world of nesting dolls. It's okay, but in the end, the protagonist didn't break through the Mahayana, which was beyond my expectation [Chigua]

It's very interesting and the plot doesn't drag on

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Not bad, very beautiful

Decisive enough, yes.

I am Li Bai, a wine poem

I won't bother you too much about the progress of writing Chapter 35 and Chapter 3000 of other books, so I'll let fellow Taoists see it for themselves [laughing]

Nice looking, but then again. Connect to the State Grid