Top, sickly top, no chasing his wife, doted-on top, happy ending. This story has a lot going on: some illnesses come from the System, while others are natural. One thing never changes: they absolutely adore each other~ Both of them are sick, and their morals are questionable, so please don’t scrutinize them too closely.
Little Ball System: If you’re sick, use it right away; if you’re not sick, the System will make sure you are. Once the illness kicks in, the world is yours.
Love at first sight, a relationship rekindled after a breakup, and more…
At first sight of Shen Heci, Jiang Songyan’s whole life went off course. Once a decisive, feared titan at the top of the world, he began restraining every sharp edge and turned himself into a gentle, soft little lamb, all to win over this seemingly delicate lamb.
No one knew that beneath Shen Heci’s fragile facade lay a powerful man’s deep-laid schemes and obsession.
He pretended to be weak with an illness, methodically worming his way into his heart and using tenderness as a cage, all to rekindle their love and lock his beloved firmly at his side once more.
I've patiently finished reading all the chapters so far. It's a little cute occasionally. . For example, the description of Xiao He is very beautiful, and the description of illness and weakness is also quite beautiful. . . Occasionally I see Princess Songyan hugging Xiaohe, huh. . . But that's all. . . Because suddenly in the article, there will be a description of the classic miner with a strong sense of aggression and possessiveness. . . Then there is something else in my mind about calling my wife, "You are my mother-in-law" and so on. . Although Xiaohe is sick and weak, he can press Xiangfang against the wall and kiss him. . . The introduction says that Xiaohe is pampered, but the actual impression is just like that. . . Because the left and right stereotypes written in the article are too strong. . It makes people feel very uncomfortable. . . Moreover, Xiaohe's external image is that of being sickly and weak, so it's quite normal for him to be taken care of. I can only say that he does receive daily care, but it really doesn't meet the standard of being pampered or not. . . At least in my opinion, these are just things that ordinary lovers should do. Who doesn't give something in love? . . The setting of the second unit seems to be slightly better than the first small world. . . I just don't know how the plot will develop in the future. . . Anyway, I hope the author writes better and better. . .
After reading it, I read the comments. I think the senses are okay. It's not as exaggerated as what the sister above said. Some people tend to be rational when it comes to love. You may think this is pampering. The first world is indeed a bit traditional, but I think the second world is very interesting. I hope you can continue to work hard and your writing will get better and better.
Shen Heci Jiang Songyan
The emotional line is relatively fast, and it is basically sweet at the moment. If you don't care about the emotional process, you can rush it. Also, the third world will start to close the memory. This is a demining point.