From the Start in a Mountain Village, I Build a Matriarchal Immortal Clan with a Celestial Mirror

Currently the female to male ratio is 9:1 and I really like it! No disobedient women's poems, the history of a family of female immortal cultivators! There are really very few people writing about the history of a female family that started from the bottom and started to cultivate immortality and make a fortune! So looking at the features, it turns out that the story is really exciting! The writing is smooth and concise, without lengthy preaching or boring content. The character creation is also particularly good, with both good and bad aspects, complex and three-dimensional. The development of each story is very exciting and to the point, and the rhythm and writing are very comfortable to watch. This article has its own worldview and values, and I look forward to more adventures in the future!

Although I was really speechless when I looked at the characters of the protagonist and his family in the early stage, the writing and plot were still okay, and the writing got much better in the later stages. The characters are also very real, and the author's writing skills are very beautiful. It's a rare novel about a female family cultivating immortality. It feels like the only one of its kind, and the writing, plot, and characters don't look too poisonous at the moment. The author insists that the results will not be bad if he continues writing. However, in the current plot, the girl goes to the mountain gate and encounters Taiyin Yuehua. It is basically similar to the plot of a certain Immortal Appraisal Clan, I hope the author will pay attention to it. This looks so similar that someone will definitely report it to you. Learning from the plot cannot be the same as copying it [face-covering][face-covering]

🍠After seeing the tweet, it is rare to see a strong female novel that is not invincible. The heroine does not give people a sense of sexual transformation. She is soft and firm, strong but not cold-blooded. The supporting characters are also very vivid. Especially Niang Wu Roulan is making progress while looking back. It is really real. Jingshu and Jiaozhu are also looking forward to the growth line. Five-star encouragement. I hope I can keep writing.

I have read Chapter 13 so far and will comment. The content is okay. The important female characters are divided. The heroine is firm, sober and helpful. Among the sisters, one is considerate and the other is smart. The mother's characteristic of looking back while walking forward is well described, and there are no insulting swear words. Next, I will talk about some things that I think Points that can be avoided (only personal opinions, convenient barriers, but I will continue to read) The first point is that sometimes the wording is not rigorous, and jealousy and disgust are used, but I also saw the author using xuan, I don't know if he forgot it, and the male-female ratio is smaller, but because it is a male-dominated society, I don't know if it has been changed later. If there is anything else later, I will follow up and comment. Editor 1: When I read it again, the author's inaccurate wording has been corrected after being reminded of it. Hug teacher

In fact, the writing is good, but this mother is too annoying, and her preference for boys over girls always holds her back. Let's see if there will be any improvement in the future.

Originally, it was quite annoying to see the weakest mother among them all the time. But although it seems that I always prefer my son In fact, she was the one who killed her husband together to protect her children. When her son who had not returned for many years was actually a snake demon in disguise, she was the one who finally killed the snake demon in order to protect her daughters. And the role of mother is really quite fulfilling. She will be a little jealous of her daughter, but she will subconsciously be kind to her son. But in the end she was still willing to protect her daughter

The writing is very good, I like the wording very much, and the writing style is also very good. The portrayal of women does not focus on their beauty and weakness, but on their bravery and fearlessness, which is great, and the characters are very three-dimensional. One of my favorite parts is that my mother got to know her boy personally. Moreover, the female characters in the article have their own strengths and weaknesses, and they will not be uniformly good people. This is great, because women themselves are different, no matter good or bad, they are all women [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's good-looking. This kind of matrilineal clan cultivation novel is rare. The heroine has a vivid image and the other female characters are also three-dimensional. I look forward to the follow-up development and hope that more such novels will appear in the future.

The storyline is very smooth, and I watched it in one go. In terms of text expression, there are no awkward or awkward usages, so it is easy to read. It's just that in some plot descriptions, there is a sense of disconnection. For example, the part where Wu Ning checks the good and bad luck of the ghost market and flies out of the roof is very strange. If the body flies out, what is the use of covering it with a magic circle? If the soul flies out, there is no description of this aspect in the article. In terms of the content of the story, the Wu family is still in the stage of making a fortune. The three sisters work together to keep the chain intact. The three have distinct personalities. The points that will cause conflicts mainly fall on Wu Roulan, so she will be less likable. However, the author did not use Wu Roulan as a tool to promote the story. Compared with other novels about the rise of a family, the three sisters of the Wu family have each exerted their own efforts from the beginning of their fortune. Some adventure highlights will also be assigned to non-protagonists, such as the second child going to explore the lake. This also avoids the feeling that the second person is a background tool. The overall feeling is that it is a good group portrait article. Looking forward to future developments.

It's very good. The female characters account for the majority, and the characters are very realistic and three-dimensional. The family is also matrilineal, and the sisters each have their own merits. The heroine and various female supporting characters are very vivid. The world view of cultivating immortals favors competition between you and me, with the weak eating the strong. Overall the logic is smooth. The heroine and some female supporting characters are still very chivalrous. If they are poor, they can only be good for themselves, but if they are rich, they can help the world. The author is also very obedient and will listen to readers' suggestions. Any inappropriate words will be changed. Very good🥰 The only negative point may be that the relationship with my mother was a little frustrating in the early stage, but later on the author rounded off the mother's relationship, and I felt like I could breathe smoothly. So if you feel that the mother is a bit frustrated after reading the previous part, I really recommend you to continue reading. The second part is quite unexpected.