The Outcast: A Shadow Calamity Beginning at the Three-One Sect

Evaluation around Chapter 30: It's a very interesting book with a very novel subject matter. The protagonist will make readers feel better, but it is not an unreasonable plot like an 8-year-old slaps the master. Suggestion: It is not very clear yet how the author describes the protagonist's character. The author could spend a little more time on the characterization of the protagonist.

It's very interesting, and I'm currently working on the Lu family's birthday celebrations. The protagonist is the kind of person who is a genius with no CP and a scroll king. The relationship between master, apprentice, and brothers is quite warm (under one person version). His personality is calm, steady, and considerate internally (at night, he secretly works hard to kill his juniors + practices cheating to amaze all the masters + poisonous tongue). He practices, sleeps, and beats his juniors every day. At present, his ambition is to practice hard. In the future, we will see if we can end the troubled times and end the world of hungry prisoners.

It's good-looking, super good-looking, no CP, and there are no surprises that I think is easy to write about among one person. The character of the protagonist is also very popular, calm and loyal, and he will take action when it's time to take action. What I am a little dissatisfied with is that the protagonist's shadow army is not too refined. Too many are not particularly good-looking. Those with average power value, if you take too much, others will basically die if you cut it, which is a waste.

The author's writing is quite good, and he follows his own pace. Those who talk about stressing realm and strength are all used to reading mindless cool articles, and they can't get out of their comfort zone for the time being. When their threshold for coolness is raised, they will no longer be able to read mindless cool articles.

There is something interesting to watch, I hope the male protagonist will be more decisive when killing evildoers. After all, if the evildoers are not killed cleanly, there will be trouble later.

Previously, I originally liked to read novels such as the Black Shadow Corps, and then I said that the novels in this extraction are similar to that, um, those four kinds of novels. Then in the middle and later stages, I found that I like reading this kind of novels more and more, especially since you are the author of this novel. Because killing the Japanese Japs in the middle and later stages is really nice [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Go directly to subdue a big ant spirit that is causing trouble, and name it Wang Beier [laughing evilly]

It looks pretty good at the front, but I feel like AI may be used at the back. Although I can still watch it, it's not as good as before.

Why is my score so low for being pretty?

A rare masterpiece of one-person fan fiction.