I Woke Up in a Mary Sue Story, and Everyone Saw What Was on My Phone

It is a very interesting subject matter, but I think there are a lot of foreshadowings. Is our Sui Sui a little bitter gourd? I feel that a lot of things have happened to her, including friends and family relationships, which are all vague, such as her name, Sui Sui's tranquility, relying too much on her friends, etc., Etc., Are not explained clearly. The author will explain it later, right? Give me some spoilers 🥺

It's very beautiful. To be honest, I have had this idea of ​​chatting before, but this is the first time I have seen it written by the author. It is very unique and consistent with my thoughts at the time. The three little melons are all good. They are each other's family and can be relied on. The chat records make my heart warm ❤️❤️❤️

All I can say is that it's okay, but a little awkward in some places. The most embarrassing thing I can't stand is embarrassment. I would be embarrassed for others. Please see below. Su Suining held a plastic bag in one hand and a mobile phone in the other to check what time it was. She bumped into someone without paying attention, and when she looked up she found that it was the student council member who had scored several points against her. The rich fragrance of bamboo enveloped her, making her ears turn red. Shen Qingnan didn't expect her to be so innocent, but her ears turned red after accidentally hugging her. She couldn't help but want to tease this person who once said that he had a smiling face. "Classmate, your ears are so red. Are you feeling uncomfortable somewhere?" Su Suining had already taken a few steps back to calm down, but she didn't expect him to ask about this. The red on her ears wanted to spread to her cheeks.

I feel that the worldview in the back will be very grand. To be honest, the genre is quite satisfactory, and the writing is also very good. It's just that there are too few similar books, and there is no alternative text. So while waiting for the update, I may catch up on a dozen other types of books at once, and then the passion for this book may not be that great, and then suddenly other elements are added, which makes it more sexual. Of course, the books are quite good, but it's mainly due to my personal reasons. I usually like to read more than a dozen books at a time, and my taste often changes, even to the sitting-pen-writing style. The writing is pretty good, but I can't help it, my taste has changed. This comment is mainly to let those who click on this book in the future know why I quit before⊙ω⊙

The subject matter is very novel, and I stayed up late to read it. This is my first time writing a book review, and the chat between the three sisters was very delicious. Damn, your idea is great!! [Top post][Please update]

This won't be a novel with two heroines, I don't want to read it with CP.

The idea is pretty good, but the writing is a little off. . . There are also some descriptions that feel very unnecessary. For example, the heroine got up in the morning and wanted to check the phone, but the phone ran out of power and needed to be recharged. During the charging process, he washed up and started playing with the phone while charging (I remember the original text said that he did other things during the period without a phone, playing with the phone while charging. I don't understand why it was written like this). There was no need to write the part where the phone ran out of power and the heroine went to wash up after it ran out of power. It was a bit long-winded and wanted to incorporate AI.

It's okay. The parts I've seen so far are pretty average and haven't caught my eye. Because there isn't much content in the novel right now, I'm not sure whether it will be ruined later on. So I'll have to wait until the novel is finished or I don't want to read it. I'll write a follow-up review to detail my feelings about this novel.

It's okay, but the description of the plot at the beginning is confusing, but the main plot line can be seen later, so you can watch it without thinking.

The three little bitter gourds finally got together, don't let them separate 🥺 The author's writing is still very good, but too little. Looking forward to the follow-up