Isn't the Game I'm Making Really a Different World?

I quite like the subject matter, but I was very confused after listening to the book for a long time. I didn't even know who the protagonist was at the beginning. This book is more like a two-world travel type, but most of the first paragraphs are about things in the real world. The protagonist seems to have no specific goal in these eleven pictures. He is more like a broadcasting robot. He explains what he sees and then expresses his opinions. Also, Che Zhulun talked back and forth, and sentences with the same meaning appeared at least three times. Maybe what I said is not very accurate, but I can still write better. Come on [blowing kiss]

In the game, there are too many eyes on NPCs, too little player content, and players seem to be free. In the real world, players can learn the technology on their own. The main problem is that there is too little gameplay, the eyes are too separated and not on the protagonist, and the NPC takes too much action. The real world line is pretty good but not the game line. [Eat melon]

It's nice to watch, and the protagonist has reasonable reactions and responses to his game becoming (or discovering) a real world. The connection between the game line and reality is perfect. Apart from updates, there are no other major shortcomings.

Good luck! It's very crazy and addictive to watch. It looks good, I love watching it, I recommend watching it! This is the second book I've read recently that is so crazy. It's really fun to watch, I give it five stars. The author will try his best to update! However, the number of words in one chapter of the author's update is comparable to the number of words in two or three chapters of other books! I feel like it can actually be divided into chapters. There is no need for one chapter to have seven or eight thousand words. It can be divided into one chapter of three thousand, four thousand, or five thousand. You have too many words in this chapter, so I don't even dare to skip reading. But not all the content is particularly interesting. There are always some places that I want to skip, but since your chapter has so many words, it's not easy to skip.

It looks good. It is a rare treasure in Tomato. I just don't know where the focus is. The author has spent a lot of space to write about each place. The different world in the game, from the technology brought out in the game to reality, the players in the game have given a lot of space, but it feels like there is no main body. When the subsequent things are spread out, I feel that I may be focusing on one thing and not the other, and it is easy to write.

Pretty good work

Okay, not stupid

Come on, I want to see the ending all at once

Come on, big brother with little traffic)

Writing is okay I said it was purely handwritten at the beginning, but there is an AI flavor in many places.

It looks good, each chapter has a lot of words

It looks good, but there is a bit of a disconnect between the real world and the game.

Not bad, but updates are a bit slow. Come on!

It's beautiful. The author must finish it.