
Daming: the Little Taoist Priest in the Taoist Temple
大明:破道观里的小道士
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 426k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Historical High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
2.1kReads
388Shelves
139Chapters
467Listens
6.8kReads · all time
Love the article, the sentence fragments and paragraphs are really talented. For example: Liu Bowen said "That's it" Su Wen said. Let me ask you who said "So that's how it is." It was Su Wen who said it, and Liu Bowen's words were in the previous paragraph. There are also characters whose speech logic is extremely confusing. Liu Bowen asked the protagonist about his martial arts strength. The protagonist said that he was in the second level, and there were only the first level, extraordinary, saint and heaven. But the highest level three in the world, even if Zhu Yuanzhang added all the resources of the Ming Dynasty, he couldn't build up a second level, but he was not afraid of the first level. After all, everyone below the saint is an ant. Then Liu Bowen asked the protagonist if he knew about the Taoist system, and then told the protagonist that the group of people in Longhu Mountain believed that they should not devote their energy to practicing martial arts. Liu Bowen expressed his disdain and looked down upon him as a dual practitioner of martial arts, and then said that there is no use in practicing martial arts. If you encounter disaster, it is not the protagonist who cultivates Taoism. Reading makes my head hurt
The first dozen chapters are good and can attract many readers, but when Zhu Yuanzhang asks which son died, the preface and the follower begin to be inconsistent, and logical processing becomes a fatal problem.
Can't connect the preface and the following words
This sentence was broken into pieces. I didn't even finish Chapter 1 and I laughed angrily. What did this sentence look like? A perfectly intact saw suddenly broke it into three pieces.
Logical confusion
Very pretty. It's stated at the beginning. Just treat it as a martial arts novel.
This is the end of the update
It's only Chapter 25 and it's a mess
The tweet arrived, it's okay