The End of the World: the Owner of This Hotel Has the Final Say

The beginning is not bad, I hope it won't stretch my hips later on. It's too watery, with a lot of repetitive plot descriptions.

It's not bad. Although the AI ​​flavor is quite strong, the creativity is good. The rules of the hotel can block zombies, which is very comfortable. The scene of zombies rushing into the hotel is quite boring. The group portrait is just a group portrait. The business apocalypse is also a good relaxing novel.

It's so well written. I watched it until the end. It's true that people only choose to be alone after being hurt. After all, it's safer this way. Why does it become more and more childish the more I write it? After this cat came out, I felt that the protagonist really had no brains.

The apocalyptic theme is still good, but after I saw the last two articles, I don't know how your hotel makes money. The Thunder Fire Team occupied that one and worked alone. The money comes from this. It's okay to upgrade slowly, but your hotel is about half empty. It won't work without the means of sending messages after the upgrade. There is also the need to have alcohol and tobacco in supermarkets. It is not free. Can it be the same as in the store? There are zombies. In the future, the grocery stores can put evolver potions on the shelves. The author can refer to the doomsday article. Author, you have already reached 200 chapters. In the future, the zombies will become stronger and the guns will become useless. The grocery store can put a weapon on the shelf, and the medical station can put a potion on the shelf. After upgrading, it can receive information, listen to the guests, and encourage people to go out to hunt zombies to adapt to the doomsday environment. Also, if the protagonist is too weak, it can be improved. After upgrading, the hotel can become a human stronghold and ignite a little human spark. The above are some of my suggestions, you can refer to them.

I have read Chapter 14 so far, and my initial impression is okay. There is nothing particularly serious about it. I just hope that the author can change the point that food is free. Even if you need to spend 1 point to buy food, you can continue it as you like. Something is wrong when I see it later. The paragraphs are very strange. One paragraph is divided into several paragraphs; and then I always write repetitive plots. For example, the description of the aunt watching people serve food and rolling around can be repeated two or three times in one chapter; the supporting characters talk a lot... The male protagonist is also like a personal computer.

It is a very interesting article, although it is systematic, but most of it is relatively realistic, not exaggerated, and the protagonist is not the Holy Father. The whole article focuses more on the survival of mankind in the end of the world. I like this kind of group portrait writing, which neither weakens nor overemphasizes the protagonist. I hope the author can update it more quickly

To be honest, compared to free meals, hot pot and the like are not very competitive. They can both fill the stomach. It is really hard to understand why Hua Jingshi buys rice. Why not add some limited-time buffs to the crystal rice, such as cold resistance, immunity to viruses, and increased strength for a certain period of time after meals?

It's a good book. Why don't you upgrade the protagonist's weapon shop? I hope that after the hotel is upgraded, the protagonist will upgrade to the weapon shop. Otherwise, this upgrade will cost 50,000 crystals, and the next level will cost hundreds of thousands? Do you have to wait until the year of the monkey and the month of the horse? Upgrade the weapon shop so they can kill zombies and get the crystal cores back.

It looks good, I like it, the protagonist is so decisive, I like this tone, the author is great, can you update it faster? I like it very much, I just like it!

One article is really good. It is a group portrait article. There are corruptions in the military, but also love and justice, various aspects of life, and slaps in the face. I read some comments and said that some troublemakers were not executed but just deported. However, there is one article that said that people in New China were not so murderous. The main culprit was killed. Some provocateurs were wavering. It is actually not a big deal to block people in hotels. One article is really good.

The author may want to describe the dangers of human nature in the apocalyptic environment, but the handling of Madonnas and people with harmful intentions should be more straightforward. The cool points are rarely a bit bland, and it is difficult to highlight the existence of the protagonist.

On the Tomato platform, it is considered very good overall. I recommend it.

The character design is okay, the protagonist should look like this. It is a great power given by the system, and it should follow the rules of the system. When the protagonist's system becomes stronger, he can use the system rules to save people.

I like themes of the end of the world very much, and I also like the author's attitude towards life. Under the rules of absolute fairness and absolute ability, he does not favor anyone. If you abide by it, you will live well. If you don't abide by it, you will leave. Life also comes slowly, just be ordinary

Although it is quite AI, the subject matter is not to your liking. I hope that there will be no plots of compromise or cooperation with the official, nor will there be any fantasy plots in the future. Continue to wait and see. Okay, the pace is quite comfortable. Again, don't have any cooperation with the authorities.

This is not much better than a 70-80% hotel. This is the type of apocalyptic hotel I want.

I hope you all like it [smile][smile]

The subject matter is good, and I like the character of the protagonist. He doesn't care about other people's business, never goes out, and feels invincible. Don't rush to curry favor with people. It just has a strong AI flavor. [Eat melon]

I didn't skip every chapter while listening and reading. I haven't read a book so heartily in a long time. The setting is very unique and the group portrait is well written. It's worth reading!

It's so beautiful, but there are too few of them. The author will post more soon! ! ! !

The protagonist's temper is quite to your liking, and he treats everyone equally, not the Holy Mother, which is pretty good. The rhythm is a bit slow in places and a bit ink-stained This is a small drawback

I like this type of novel very much. The author must insist on updating it and don't stop it!

Five stars first, let's see what happens next. I think there are two ways to go in the future. One is to gradually improve the hotel's facilities, such as increasing human evolution and learning skills. If the zombies eventually evolve stronger and stronger, but the humans are still ordinary, it will not be conducive to the development of the story. The second point is that in the story that gathers various characters, the strength of the zombies is determined by their strength and speed, and they will not be completely defeated by ordinary people.

A good post-apocalyptic invincibility novel, very good, keep up the good work!

The characters are delicately created, the plots are coherent, and the logic is clear. Of course, there are some shortcomings. Whether it is the absolute suppression effect of the protagonist in the store or the inhibitory potion, etc., They were not researched products at the time. Other characters have a high natural acceptance of the above two, which feels a bit strange. I hope the author can strengthen the detailed description of the other characters' acceptance process of the protagonist's abilities and provide more emotional feedback.

The storyline is quite creative and unconventional. The description of human nature in the last days is very realistic.

I gave you five stars, not for you as the author. I gave them to that green tea Tang Xuewei. Let me go. You kept her alive for more than thirty chapters. But after I stopped writing, the pace of subsequent writing seems to be accelerated. It's not bad. Come on.

The pace is a bit slow, but it's still pretty good.

Not bad, I hope it will be updated soon and the plot won't be too bad later on. The subject matter is really good, but the later writing is a bit watery and the plot is too dragged out.

I've read more than ten chapters and it's okay. There's nothing toxic about it for now. I hope the author will keep it up!