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Well, it's okay. The plot is well written. The narration is in the second person. The daily writing is interesting. Although the world view is a bit cruel and ruthless, the author seems not to write about darkness and cruelty. The writing style and rhythm are average. As a fan work, the quality is absolutely good. Come on, author.

This book has always done a good job in the suspense of the plot. It has a clear main line and delicate emotions. It is not a straightforward work that writes whatever comes to mind. It uses a rare second-person narrative, but the subject matter is outdated. If it were changed to a fan subject with a high audience, it might become popular, but Che Wanwan would also enjoy it T^T I feel like the author should have an outline. This kind of author has the least to worry about.

! ? Strong? ! Great, very comfortable to watch It's great that there is no obvious personality deviation in the character It's great if the protagonist is not a pervert who talks decisively about killing and killing without deliberately emphasizing the protagonist's abilities or bitterness and hatred.

(I realized I forgot to comment) It's very interesting, and I'm increasingly looking forward to what the protagonist's face will be like when he meets a man who is going to have a mental problem, and what his name will be.

I can read it quietly It should be recommended

Undoubtedly an excellent work, the characters are emotionally delicate. The plot of the story is very tempting.

It's so fun to watch, come on, come on [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

I enjoyed reading it, the book is great

Beautifully written, keep up the good work

I love your book!

I finished reading it in one sitting, it was so good [Love]

Very well written, keep up the good work! [Laugh]

Not bad, very comfortable rhythm

By the way, when will ⑨ appear? I'm curious as to what happened that caused ⑨ to not appear. Could it be that he is fighting against Gensokyo alone? [Laughing]

It's so original, that's how this introduction feels like a human machine.

It's very interesting. As long as it can be written normally, I think it will be an excellent oriental fanfic.

Reimu is cute The bell fairy umbrella is also cute Sakuya is cute Anyway, this is a haiku. I can't remember the others at the moment. I read it in one sitting. It's a great read. HK

Delicious, very delicious

Fortunately, I didn't get greedy last night. Do you feel after watching it in one sitting?