[Alternate World] [Heavy Firearms] [Hunting] [Contract] [Monster Girl]
The protagonist Yi Feng gradually loses consciousness in an endless cycle of staying up late to run knives, "attacking", and going bankrupt.
When I woke up, I found that I had been reborn with Barrett into a world where monsters and monster girls were rampant.
In this world where monsters are everywhere, it is difficult for humans to survive, and the territory has been completely occupied,
How should Yi Feng, who has awakened the talent of "contract", explore the world?
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Reader comments
I would like to give some suggestions to the author. As a reader who has read many Tomato novels, I think the author's advantage lies in the description of fighting and character behavior very well, but there are many shortcomings. First, the main line is very unclear, and the presence of the system or golden fingers is very low, almost passively appearing; second, the background is very unclear, and the world that the protagonist travels through is very unclear. All I can tell now is that it feels like a primitive era, but the geographical distribution, species division, and even technological level of this world are not clear (some characters wear animal skins, some wear black tights, and black bottoming shirts). There are very few details that make up the background of the story, and it is even a bit messy; third, the plot is too stiff, does the protagonist meet the heroine? Tutu, then believed it inexplicably, and then quickly experienced a series of life and death trials, which resulted in a development that was fast but beyond logical control. It neither focused on the protagonist himself nor followed the development of the environment. It just happened suddenly, and then after experiencing the next thing, the wave of Warcraft immediately took over the Blackstone Tribe, and the wave of Warcraft was over? There is very little preparation in the early stage, and the reason for going to the Blackstone Tribe is too simple. Send Tutu to the "Hunter Training Camp". What is this place for?
But I still like the author's writing style. It can indeed kill some time, but the author still needs to improve. It is very similar to the style of a novice author. Come on!
I would like to give some suggestions to the author. As a reader who has read many Tomato novels, I think the author's advantage lies in the description of fighting and character behavior very well, but there are many shortcomings. First, the main line is very unclear, and the presence of the system or golden fingers is very low, almost passively appearing; second, the background is very unclear, and the world that the protagonist travels through is very unclear. All I can tell now is that it feels like a primitive era, but the geographical distribution, species division, and even technological level of this world are not clear (some characters wear animal skins, some wear black tights, and black bottoming shirts). There are very few details that make up the background of the story, and it is even a bit messy; third, the plot is too stiff, does the protagonist meet the heroine? Tutu, then believed it inexplicably, and then quickly experienced a series of life and death trials, which resulted in a development that was fast but beyond logical control. It neither focused on the protagonist himself nor followed the development of the environment. It just happened suddenly, and then after experiencing the next thing, the wave of Warcraft immediately took over the Blackstone Tribe, and the wave of Warcraft was over? There is very little preparation in the early stage, and the reason for going to the Blackstone Tribe is too simple. Send Tutu to the "Hunter Training Camp". What is this place for? But I still like the author's writing style. It can indeed kill some time, but the author still needs to improve. It is very similar to the style of a novice author. Come on!