Rebirth in a Different World, the Growth History of the Dungeon

The dungeon construction article is generally good. The writing is not very good but it is definitely readable, and the author is very active. If you have any questions in the article, you can tell the author directly. At present, at least I feel that the current dungeon is a bit too barren in terms of creatures, decorations and space. I have now read Chapter 17. It is now a three-story dungeon with five extraordinary creatures. Level development and creation of extraordinary creatures are done by adventurers who are about to conquer the lower levels. There is no buffer zone. The current three floors are all caves, there is no boss at the end, and the mechanisms are relatively naive. Of course, this may be some discrimination caused by me reading too much other dungeon texts. Don't read it if you are too soft-hearted. The protagonist of this book is quite hostile to adventurers.

The story is overall complete, with no obvious logic or common sense problems, and a lot of details. It can be seen that the author is very careful. However, the protagonist has little interaction with others due to the setting, so the sense of existence is slightly low. It seems easy to put yourself into the explorer. However, the explorer is the villain and basically suffers, so it is not fun. Secondly, this book lacks a funny character. After all, an environment like a dungeon where people often die needs some laughter. It doesn't need to be too much, just write an interlude occasionally.

It's not bad, but it's just not enough to read. I deliberately read it slowly in case the author hasn't updated it yet.

It's quite good-looking. It's a rare subject. The author's portrayal of the characters is pretty good and makes people remember it right away. Maybe it's because it's the early stage and there are really few creatures in the dungeon. I hope to add more in the future. I'm also very curious whether Greedy Wolf and the others will return in the follow-up. In fact, I really want to see their follow-up ˉˉ

This subject matter is rare, it's good

The writing is pretty good. Good luck to the author. Not bad, I can tell he is a new author, his writing style was a bit average at the beginning but got better later [laughing]

Okay, the details are good, the screen transitions are okay, the protagonist is a bit casual, and the rest is nothing ♪٩(´ω`)و♪

It looks very interesting, as this subject is quite rare to see.

It's okay, I've never seen anything like this before.

It's okay, it's just that the monsters I see now are a bit lacking.

Still pretty good.

It's quite good, but it's a bit torturous to watch it all at once.

Now it seems that overall it is still good. It's just that there are relatively few descriptions of the dungeon environment and creatures, and there are a bit too many descriptions of the world outside the dungeon.

It's a good read. It's not a two-dimensional novel like playing house. The main character's position in the dungeon is opposed to human beings. The author's writing style is good, and the details are well described and have a sense of picture.