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❤️The plot of the story is novel, unique, and eye-catching... 10 Points ❤️ The narrative rhythm is well-controlled, relaxed and relaxed, with alternating rapidity and slowness... 10 Points ❤️The protagonist has a clear growth arc, has a charming personality, and shows the tenacity of growth bit by bit... 10 Points ❤️The protagonist's character is three-dimensional and vivid, and the supporting character's character is distinct... 10 Points ❤️The plot has ups and downs, the arrangement is reasonable, and the main line is clear... 10 Points ❤️The writing style is delicate and fresh, the flaws are not hidden, the writing is smooth, the writing style is unique and novel... 10 Points ❤️The idea is profound and does not stick to the plot narrative... 10 Points ❤️Describes sincere emotions and is unconventional... 10 Points ❤️The world view is complete and the setting logic is self-consistent...10 Points ❤️I like it very much…………10 points [This comprehensive score: 100 points]

Score it first to prevent it from dying. I like the theme very much, and the career awakening and vehicle scoring are fun. The male protagonist's character is also great, he should be tough and soft, and he won't sacrifice face and suffer. Not shy about using class skills. The rhythm of the plot is very fast, and the revenge is basically avenged on the spot, and it is not the kind of indifferent rhetoric, but a direct physical endangerment. Hope it continues to be cool. There were some minor flaws that were not well thought out, such as not protecting the parents in advance, but otherwise I was satisfied.

In the latest chapter, I feel that the only choice is to be worthy of Sheng Sheng. The First Legion chose to recruit the man named Tan in front of Number One, and I felt instantly disappointed. Dad Chu didn't think that his son had a good relationship with Sheng Sheng, so he could recruit the man named Tan in front of him. How did he place Number One? It felt like Lao Deng thought that his son had already decided on Sheng Sheng, and Sheng Sheng would definitely join the First Legion.

Very delicious. . . I didn't read much in Persimmon before. . Even if I watch it, it's just to pass the time. . . I don't know much about Persimmon's data push calculation. I wonder if rating it will improve the data and traffic of this book. . . I am a person who is really afraid of trouble, especially now that my studies are very heavy and I am in school every day. I have never rated or commented on a book in Persimmon. This is probably the first time for this book (I have been in Greenjj before). I have always wanted to write a review for this book when I was catching up on it at school, but I have been shelving it because I was too busy. Now I finally have some time. I think the setting and plot of Teacher's book are very novel, but maybe the writing in the first few chapters is a bit green. Some of the plots (such as traveling through the book and the setting of the novel world) are not so clear, but it doesn't matter. This book becomes more and more delicious the more I read it. The subsequent plot is very coherent. I can see the teacher's growth. And I am also very interested in the seven sections of the introduction. . . I really want to get into the teacher's draft box and read it to my heart's content. . Another small flaw is the problem with Gong's character. His character is too thin and I still don't understand his core. . It feels a bit like being cold and arrogant on the outside and arrogant at other times. . . The emotional line may also be a bit lacking, but when I think about the seven slices of this book, the pace really needs to be sped up. It's okay, it's okay, but I hope the teacher can continue to improve! It gets better and better! The last thing I have to say is. The character image of Shengsheng is very full and three-dimensional (with the support of Gong). He has direction and purpose from beginning to end, and he is also a very perseverant person. It is difficult to defeat him no matter what difficulties. He may be stereotyped because of the profession of succubus, but his will is very strong. Such a person will definitely pursue his career ruthlessly! It feels like Xiao Chu has a long road to pursue his wife, but it's very satisfying. . . It is pure bliss to watch people being slapped in the face and abused, and to be surrounded by a group of beautiful men. . . Delicious, delicious, when will the teacher be able to update 300,000 words a day? The sound is to be liked by everyone. . . Be a heartthrob. . . Just become stronger bit by bit like this. Teacher, I will always support you! Please be sure to fill my little heart with your large collection of manuscripts! I know the teacher must not be having more fun. In fact, there are still 300,000 words saved in the draft box, right? Teacher is hungry.

Ahhhh, it looks so good, it looks so good, the voice is like a succubus, but the character is strong and unyielding, and it is not just love at first sight with Gong. Really, the emotional description is so delicate, I love you to death, author

Looks good! ! ! There are too few good-looking novels like Tomato. Fortunately, I saw it, but the data is so bad😧. The author must work hard. The writing is really good! So delicious! Suck, suck, suck~ I really like it! ! !

It feels good and not uncomfortable at all, and my breast glands are unobstructed. I personally prefer to take control of the protagonist, and I don't feel any discomfort. It's quite refreshing to see someone who looks like a clown but got slapped in the face. Personally, I prefer the previous plots, and I can't explain why. I just feel that everyone's skills are very attractive to me and make me very curious. The later ones feel like they are upgrading, which is not to say that the later ones are not good, but they just don't feel attractive enough for me. I hope there are more skills and props to open my eyes, but it depends on the author's rhythm. This is just my point of view [shy]

It's pretty good-looking, but now I feel a little disgusted with Chu Shiyu, not just because of his father. Every time there is a conflict between his father and the protagonist, although he always explains and apologizes, his father seems to have a good relationship with him, and the protagonist has a relatively high impression of him. He himself also knows that when he is caught between his family and his lover, he will be more inclined to let the protagonist, who seems to be more prone to bowing down, endure the grievances and reach a seemingly better situation. When I saw him letting the protagonist join the First Legion, my good impression of him was completely ruined. It would be forgiven if he didn't understand the protagonist, but he clearly understood the protagonist so well and could still say those words, which made me feel that the protagonist might not be that important in his heart. The protagonist can still get along with him as usual. Although I understand it, it still makes me feel a little uncomfortable. If the protagonist is a love brain, it is really possible that he will be wronged because of it, that is, the protagonist has a strong self-esteem and firmly chooses himself, otherwise the protagonist will die of depression. I like Lu Jinghan more recently.

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Very beautiful, it makes me happy to see it [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration] In the beginning, the original protagonist has the aura of being the protagonist, which is inevitably a bit unfair, but Sheng Sheng takes revenge when he wants revenge. It is very enjoyable to watch, and it is much better in the later part. Sheng Sheng is the most powerful [blowing kiss] [flying kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] The plot is also very novel, with a setting that I have never seen before.

I stayed up all night, my friends. I have been looking for a book that combines the male protagonist with the male protagonist. This book shows it very well. The protagonist himself is very powerful and follows the plot flow, but the emotional line is not delayed, and it is very important. The protagonist is also more ruthless than the protagonists of other novels. He has no mother's heart at all. It looks very enjoyable.

I don't quite understand how Yang Persimmon was rated. When I reviewed it, the score was only about six points, and I couldn't find a low score after looking through the book reviews. But it's really great. I hope someone can explain to me what this score is. I hope everyone can celebrate when the score has improved. Good authors are worth looking forward to.

OMG, although the introduction looks average, the plot is really delicious, don't hesitate The protagonist is not the Virgin and is trying to become stronger Feeling good There is a che (sound) and there is a lot of fragrance😋😋😋I am confused The story is exciting and delicious, and the author's updates are very stable. You can buy it. This story seems a bit long, but if you really read it, you won't be able to read it. It's so delicious. There is currently no deputy cp Looking forward to the author's subsequent updates (๑´ ༥ `๑) 𐂐 The protagonist can be controlled and watched, and the protagonist upgrades quickly Because the protagonist is not the protagonist in the original book, maybe the original book will correct it based on the protagonist in the original book, right? (I don't know how to describe it), so although the protagonist may be embarrassed sometimes, don't worry, the protagonist will always win. Don't worry ovo

What's nice is that Tan Qianfan won't be offline until the end, right?

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it's very, very good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ It's not difficult to create Chu's character. Others are pretty good. Chu's character is too complicated and I don't feel good about myself.

It's so good to watch, so many interesting jokes, and the protagonist's character is not procrastinating. He will be ruthless and kill when he needs to. Come on, boss, write it!

Very beautiful! The protagonist is strong and not aggrieved, the emotional line is also refreshing and sweet, and the rice cooked by the teacher is delicious! ! Good meal! !

It's great. I love watching it. It's so enjoyable. I've finished watching it and am waiting for the update. [Shy][Admiration] I look forward to the author updating it soon. I feel like it looks good just by reading the introduction! I like it, hehehe~ I've caught up with the latest [Adoration]

It's okay. I hope the person named Chu doesn't always have a sense of presence. His father also has problems.

Very nice! [Blow a kiss] Revenge on the spot. It's impossible to be wronged. Upgrades are quick and easy. It's super cool. Our voices are babies that need to be pampered. They are powerful and attractive, and they are also very pampered. [Adoration]. Recommended. Recommended. Highly recommended for everyone to read. Such a delicious book, let everyone know about it. [Shy]

It's super beautiful. It's the treasure I found again after the book shortage. Thank the author for writing such a delicious text. I have never seen Shengsheng's character before. He is very three-dimensional, strong, charming, smart and decisive. It's so charming to call him, very, very cute and awesome👍🏻

What is written is the owner, OK? It's so beautiful, it's so beautiful. I go and go and go. Why is it so beautiful? I love it so much. I love it so much. The author, baby, married me. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I think the characters are all pretty good, except for Chu's father. There's something about Chu that makes me uncomfortable. He's too proud and possessive. He even pretended to be his father and sent Shou Bao a breakup message. But fortunately, everything turned out normal later on. Yeah, I think that's the only one that's delicious. Even the thunderbolts couldn't stop Chu. He provided a lot of help to Shou. He killed the person with background and was fished out by Chu. Flaws are not concealed, Yamiami, please update me two hundred chapters quickly so that I can read them happily. This is an order (I am playing abstract, mua)

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It's pretty, I think It's pretty good-looking, but the birdman and the president of the First Chapter made me a little nauseous. I thought it was good to watch, but it's really annoying to show up unexpectedly.

Super beautiful! Highly recommended! I hope the author will not stop updating!!! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] It's beautiful, I hope the author won't stop updating it! I will keep following it

Come on✊This novel is really good

How come no one sees such a miracle...

It's a great slap in the face, looking forward to the follow-up

Super pretty! Mu Sheng will not be aggrieved at all. He must avenge himself [Like]

Beautiful 👀(•؎ •)! Eat good food, love it! [Adoration] Author, cheers for more updates [Blowing kisses]